
[Historical Crossovers] Immortality
[综历史] 长生
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 14y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
2Chapters
29Favorites
1.7kClicks per chapter
21Comments
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Reader comments 17
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When I looked at the comments, I saw that there was one from eleven years ago. I suddenly couldn't hold myself back and read the last few chapters. I almost fainted when I saw that there were only two chapters. But this kind of immortality article is really difficult to write. I have also read some other immortality articles. To be honest, they are all superficial. Some well-written historical articles are only limited to one period and a short period. As the protagonist makes achievements, the sense of reality becomes thinner and thinner. It is not the fault of the lack of character, but the protagonist's state of mind. It is very It is difficult to think carefully about imagination in many places. Because the author usually pursues truth and brings many of his own feelings into the protagonist, this kind of immersive writing makes it difficult for the protagonist to have frustrations and the like in the later stage. Therefore, in the later stage of some books, things like the harem opening up, the fighting power collapsing, and the good weather, everyone respects and dare not make mistakes. I was attracted by the poetry of the copywriting. I believe that the author really wants to write a history, a story of longevity, and strive to change those difficult to reconcile, and will suffer. When you encounter setbacks, you will be hated by others, you will have no choice but to live in the world, and you will work hard to live and do something meaningful and within your ability for future generations. The article seems to be displeased with the mountains, because I also had a similar idea to write about five thousand years of history. , But also worried about insufficient knowledge reserves and poor grasp of narrative. Writing such a story should be a noble thing that cannot allow for mistakes. The five-thousand-year timeline is too long, making countless love and hatred insignificant. Such a literary The "unfairness" in the chapter seems to be difficult, and immortality is an unusual thing. Many authors will even insert the power of heaven and ghosts to raise the protagonist's 13 levels, and even the protagonist will think highly of himself, so everyone is afraid of the protagonist. This kind of trend has entered the world of imagination again. Come on, author, I will keep pursuing it. I can afford to wait for twenty years from now. A good story is worth twenty years of waiting and twenty years of planning.
Emmm, why did I click on it without looking at the word count? .
Support, if you write twenty years, I will only read twenty years. Anyway, as long as JJ can live twenty years, this is not a difficult thing. After all, I also want to see the five thousand years of China in the eyes of an immortal person. I also want to know how he silently watched the historical changes along the way.
Damn, are you still writing this article? I'm really looking forward to this article.
It's 2017 now
QAQ, something went wrong
Is the author missing? There are only two chapters
I like this setting, but the author has really traveled through time! From 2012 to 2015, I was squatting at the bottom of the pit and didn't see any updates. I cried silently TAT
Did the author travel through time? Please update QWQ
I like this setting. Passers-by in the torrent of time record history from the perspective of spectators. Please update +n