Just found this long review. . Sorry for being late...
To be honest, I really made a mistake after revisiting The Condor Shooting. I did deliberately imitate Jin Yong's writing style, but many plot details were not thought out. When I was writing about Liu Jingsong being misunderstood, I wanted to write about the protagonist's reunion quickly, so I skipped some things.
In general, I mainly wanted to end the first novel quickly, so I was a little careless in many places and the story was not well explained.
Finally, thank you GN for your criticism, I will definitely correct it.
Let's take a look after occupying the sofa~
Those downstairs should learn from me and gain weight before watching~
I said that I would look through the previous messages and found that I wanted to write something original, so I ran over to take a look. . . . What a dazzling pause~~~~(>_<)~~~~
It's over~Spread flowers~\\(≧▽≦)/~La la la
The sky and water are blue and dyed like a river. Willow branches spread over the green hills. .
What can I say? This story has a slightly different feeling from the previous one. The language is more cheerful~ But the ending should be more... This kind of short story is the most lovely. Personally, I think it reminds me of the ancient short stories in magazines such as "Xinlei 100" that were popular a few years ago. I really like it~
Thank you for your hard work~Flowers~~~
Who is DAKGG? Come back soon. I am eagerly looking forward to the new update.
419 Drops of the mysterious man, I guess it might be this Li Jingshou, right?
Weiweiniu, I'm Ting'er. It's been a long time since I came to read this article, and I haven't even finished it yet. Hey, why did a walk-on like me die so early? I cried when I saw Xiyan die. Really. . .
The baby must be safe
Xiao Taohua turns out to be smaller than Xiao Qiaoer? I thought it was older than Xiao Qiao'er.
That Second Highness is really annoying. If you want to give someone something, just give it to them. If you don't want to, forget it. How can he be like that?
Come on, look forward to it
The span is so big. . . .
Little Plasma, you are a good boy~~
Why hasn't Mao continued to update? TAT
The leader of the church is so calm ~ Imitation ~
Hehe, uncle, you can leave a message~
But when I watched it, I really didn't expect that the monitor's personality would be so different ten years later... [Face covering
Mr. Xiao is quite good at borrowing things...
Looks like I'm addicted to it
Such a short article~~~but very cute~~
What went wrong? I can't understand it~
JJ is convulsing again and can't see anything
Just found this long review. . Sorry for being late... To be honest, I really made a mistake after revisiting The Condor Shooting. I did deliberately imitate Jin Yong's writing style, but many plot details were not thought out. When I was writing about Liu Jingsong being misunderstood, I wanted to write about the protagonist's reunion quickly, so I skipped some things. In general, I mainly wanted to end the first novel quickly, so I was a little careless in many places and the story was not well explained. Finally, thank you GN for your criticism, I will definitely correct it.
Let's take a look after occupying the sofa~
Those downstairs should learn from me and gain weight before watching~
I said that I would look through the previous messages and found that I wanted to write something original, so I ran over to take a look. . . . What a dazzling pause~~~~(>_<)~~~~
It's over~Spread flowers~\\(≧▽≦)/~La la la
The sky and water are blue and dyed like a river. Willow branches spread over the green hills. .
What can I say? This story has a slightly different feeling from the previous one. The language is more cheerful~ But the ending should be more... This kind of short story is the most lovely. Personally, I think it reminds me of the ancient short stories in magazines such as "Xinlei 100" that were popular a few years ago. I really like it~
Thank you for your hard work~Flowers~~~
Who is DAKGG? Come back soon. I am eagerly looking forward to the new update.
419 Drops of the mysterious man, I guess it might be this Li Jingshou, right?
Weiweiniu, I'm Ting'er. It's been a long time since I came to read this article, and I haven't even finished it yet. Hey, why did a walk-on like me die so early? I cried when I saw Xiyan die. Really. . .
The baby must be safe
Xiao Taohua turns out to be smaller than Xiao Qiaoer? I thought it was older than Xiao Qiao'er. That Second Highness is really annoying. If you want to give someone something, just give it to them. If you don't want to, forget it. How can he be like that?
Come on, look forward to it
The span is so big. . . .
Little Plasma, you are a good boy~~
Why hasn't Mao continued to update? TAT
The leader of the church is so calm ~ Imitation ~
Hehe, uncle, you can leave a message~ But when I watched it, I really didn't expect that the monitor's personality would be so different ten years later... [Face covering
Mr. Xiao is quite good at borrowing things... Looks like I'm addicted to it
By the way, will Zifan be able to compete?
It feels like a very good atmosphere~~ Come on!!!
New authors come to support us~