For an illegal organization with rules and discipline, it makes perfect sense for every employee to have their own number.
So, with a slip of the hand and a nod from the boss, everyone got stamped APPROVED like frozen pork. The only problem was the number on my stamp: two circles joined together, making an eight.
Heavens, let Silva come at me even harder!
Faithful to the original: after July 1996, Silva assassinates Phantom Troupe No. 8.
The protagonist is dead, so ending the story makes perfect sense.
As usual, the pairing is Kuroro, though he's not the focus.
Sincere thanks to Miss Atang for providing the gorgeous art!
New work: [Hunter]
This is the story of a girl whose defining trait in life seems to be bad luck. She struggles in the Hunter world, gets nowhere, and ultimately becomes cannon fodder...
Theme:
In fact, the vigilante is not bad, but since I am a crazy fan of the leader, I don't want to see the leader's lover cheating on me, so I cover my face.
If something really happened! Then come out = =←What's your position? Asshole.
The knight is still a good partner when going out.
So Chrollo, as the male protagonist's boyfriend, are you going to lose your role again?
When I just finished the movie, I wanted to calm down and rewatch it in a few days before writing down my thoughts. However, more than a month passed before I knew it. I'm really sorry...
I feel that when I read fan works, I look forward too much to the appearance of the original characters, so I remember that when I started to follow the story, I was actually a little anxious at the beginning. I kept thinking about when Asa would join the brigade, what would happen to Chrollo and how he died at the hands of Sheba, etc. It was only when I re-read it, because I had developed a relationship with Asa, that I was able to read "Asa's story" instead of "No. 8 Of the brigade".
So Cai Qiao, who I liked so much later, was actually only regarded by me as an NPC responsible for spoilers at the beginning. Even during the death part, I thought casually: "Oh, he died, well, I am happy with you." "It wasn't until later that Asa joined the troupe and began to think about Cai Qiao. Through Asa's memories, I finally saw Cai Qiao's cuteness. This kind of plot of leaving but being everywhere and being affected by every move inadvertently is completely my fault.
Then, Knight, I really didn't feel any ambiguity between him and Asa. Well, actually, it was probably due to my subjective wish. I would rather they were companions and people who had truly trusted Su En, a partner who I met in the travel group after going around in the past. In a sense, I like it. I like Leon more than the vigilante. In the second game of the hunter exam, although I guessed that Asa was dreaming from the beginning, that chapter was really beautiful and really had the atmosphere of "Oh, it would be great if I could not wake up." - As expected, memories are my secret. I think one of the reasons why I like Asa is that I like him so much that I never forget him. (Also, I'm really curious, what did Chrollo dream about?)
Chrollo, in fact, I basically don't like this guy... Every time I read a fanfic, I try to remind myself that "there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people", but to some extent, I still have the established impression left by the original work and other fanfics, so until the hunter exam, I was still confused about how this guy Chrollo and Asa got together. Later, I felt that these two people were a perfect match. This change was probably due to their mutual discussion (I felt so shameful for saying this). The author used this to portray the personalities of the two people very well. Only after reading this paragraph did I realize that the author's Chrollo also has this side, and he does not just use competition to increase intimacy.
Although the author said, "Chrollo has actually identified Asa before the ending... If he can get it without killing, then "killing" is meaningless. "But I always feel that if Asa had not died in the Kurulu Mountain, he would have died in the hands of Chrollo sooner or later. Well, it may be my personal prejudice against Chrollo, weakness, influence, instability... None of these are important. In fact, Chrollo doesn't need any reason at all. One day he will be curious to know if he can kill Asa, and then he will do it.
There are also some thoughts on things that are messy and difficult to organize:
Even after watching it again, the plot of "Lies" is still a bit jumpy, confusing and hard to understand.
Asa was less than ten years old when he was beaten half to death by the black-haired man. He had been with Cai Qiao for a few months. He was nineteen years old when the third team was shot incorrectly. When the third team collapsed, Asa left the Colosseum for a year, so Asa stayed in the Colosseum for eight or nine years? When I joined the brigade, I stayed in □□ for two years. It was another five years when I had a heart-to-heart talk with the knight outside the □□ building. After that, I spent a year beating up enemy guests. So Asa was around 27 when he died?
I like the author's words, coupled with Asa's out-of-the-box thinking, it is very interesting to read.
In the second game of the hunter exam, I prefer the rewritten version. Well, regardless of what I said before about examiners eating human flesh, it reminds me of ants. I like the rewritten version of Chrollo's method of passing the exam, which just brings out the rope ability, which is better connected with the rest of the story.
Good hunter articles are all BE…
Some people's life is very short, some people's life is longer than the rest of the people around them, some people live their lives mediocrely, and some people encounter many things that others cannot encounter.
Number eight is a very simple number. Anyone who has watched "Hunter" knows that this actually represents a person. The name of that person is unknown in FJ's book and his appearance has not been seen. But he is just a person, a person who once lived in the popular street. Because of its brief appearance in the book, it was given a word - cannon fodder.
Despite this, in the world of "The Hunter" written by FJ, the literary point is that this is a living life, and the vulgar point is to provide a guarantee for the smooth development of the plot (==). It feels like Dongba...
The article is written in the first person. This first person is a very subtle person - the good thing is that it can express the protagonist's own thoughts well without any abruptness, but the bad thing is that if it is not written well, the sincerity of the article will be ruined.
Perhaps it's because the article is written in the first person, so if it weren't for the protagonist's name on the front desk before meeting Cai Qiao, I would have honestly thought that this was a story about a person whose protagonist's name is 'I'.
It's not one of the new series in July, see you first - Xiaoshuangzi almost wanted to complain like this...
Then, after waiting for a few chapters, your name finally came out. Otherwise, if the plot continued like this, Xiao Shuangzi would really think that you would not know your name after joining the brigade under such circumstances. She almost hugged the author's lap and yelled, "Author, you don't need to finish the original work like this... Ah... Ah..."
Well, Xiao Shuangzi's shameful idea didn't come true in the end← ←
Thanks to Young Asa, but boy, do you really have anything to do with your sister in Twins...
It was quite surprising to see young Asa come out of the refrigerator at first. According to the original description, I definitely thought it was a coffin. However, in "Hunter", the only way to express it is 'is the coffin edible?'
However, the unexpected fact that it was used as a food reserve touched Xiao Shuangzi's cuteness. Don't you think the cultivation of food reserves is surprisingly cute?
Cai Qiao's name, which is full of Chinese flavor, indicates that she is a time-traveling girl.
In a book that does not feature a time-travelling girl as the main character, there are probably three endings for the time-traveling girl - one, living the life of a passerby and occasionally getting out for a little fun; the other, dying in the plot; the third, dying a beautiful death by Minnasang in the brigade; the fourth, unexpectedly happy ending...
By the way, are you ready... As for three o'clock and four o'clock, don't complain...
The fake BG Xiaoshuangzi mentioned in the original copy really thought it was a very ordinary story in which the time-traveling girl pestered Chrollo and then all kinds of things happened and the person who was cheating always wanted to be cheated. Then, the story got back on track.
However, it seems that Xiaoshuangzi guessed wrong, right?
So, is it Asa who seems to be pretending to be BG?
But Cai Qiao is a really good girl. Although she told Asa when she was about to die that she wanted to use Asa as a food reserve, she still couldn't do it. Otherwise, even if she knew Asa was still alive, she would have given him a fatal blow or something and then continued to use Asa as her food reserve.
Miss Cai Qiao and boy Asa have different kindnesses...
The scene where Asa mispronounced Cai Qiao's name was funny, but after Cai Qiao's death, looking at it before, I still felt a bit... Regretful. Of course, this is for Xiao Shuangzi, not Asa.
Young Asa doesn't seem to be a literary person.
But at the Colosseum, Asa started to feel a little different. He began not to care about his body and liked to live in excitement. Although his lazy nature was still retained, there was one thought - boy, you have grown up, Mama-san was very touched and distressed by this thought (...).
Being taken away by the third team was a surprise. But when I think about where Asa's skill LV has been improved, I also know that Asa is just a passerby there.
Because he didn't regard himself as one of them, maybe Asa had no idea at that time.
The article took 20 chapters, or almost half of it, to write about what happened to Asa after they were separated from Chrollo, until they met Chrollo again and then developed JQ (mistake). It is quite detailed and allows people to see what happened to the boy Asa. Xiaoshuangzi personally feels that it is a happy and sentimental thing to watch a boy who once became such a boy through such and such things, and to watch the growth of others.
I feel that the boy I see in front of me seems to exist, in the world I understand, and is not just a life that once existed without even knowing the background...
Xiao Shuangzi only read Chapter 20 and stopped reading the article. It's not that the article is not well written. To be honest, Xiao Shuangzi really likes this type of article. Hunter is actually one of her favorites =W=
One is because Xiao Shuangzi has been procrastinating for too long. Please let Mr. Sorai SM me as much as you want [face covering]. The other is because Xiao Shuangzi went to an internship not long after receiving this article. She input data into the computer all day long, so that Xiao Shuangzi could not stand the idea of seeing only violence in the text on the computer. Again, the problem with your article is not Sorai-sama's but Xiaoshuangzi's own convulsions.
I'm sorry that this review took so long [Bow]
Illegal gathering|Produced by Changpingpu By Shuangzi
After reading this article, I felt very shocked. I didn't sleep well one night. I thought it was a very happy article at the beginning, but I was attracted by the frozen pork in your introduction. I had to read it regardless of whether it was a tragedy. I don't know what other readers are thinking, but as the plot progresses and the skin of joy is peeled off, some crazy, helpless, and depressing things emerge, and all of a sudden, they choke my breath.
When □□ was disbanded, Su En's death, and finally Asa's death, each one was a regret, but your grasp of regret and the shaping of the characters, to be honest, I have read widely and my words are quite tricky, but this article of yours is undoubtedly successful. The only regret is that when other arrangements are turbulent, love is a bit weak.
Thank you for bringing me laughter and tears in your article. I like you Su En, Cai Qiao, Xiake, Chulolo, and Asa.
Passing by. After reading it, I really like this article.
I had finished watching it before, and the indescribable feeling of cruelty really made my balls ache.
Asa is a popular street person who has never been happy from the beginning. But Asa has always lived in a cold and humorous way, which makes it even more sad.
The feeling of watching someone you love die and being unable to hold on to anything is what it takes to survive day after day.
Asag is very affectionate, and he can also be very kind to others. What a good kid, he just got the lunch. Tears flow, Sorai-san, you... [Trembling fingers
To be honest, when I read your previous article and saw that ending, I was very sad. I thought Chrollo was too scumbag, but maybe I had Charlotte in my heart. But now I know that Chrollo's true love is Asa! I was healed from another angle, covering my face.
Asa, who faced death calmly, also cared about Chrollo. This pair was so cruel that he burst into tears!
I want to watch Chrollo's side story, I also want to watch Knight Rider, and I also want to read the new biography of Chrollo's son Ciel!
Sorai-san, let's dig a hole!
Tragedy, why did I watch Ruge first, and now I want to go back to it again?
For now, hunters are not considered a cold subject among fandoms. On the contrary, I have seen many published books about hunters. So why did the author only have more than 200 collections of his books by the time he was finished?
The author's writing style and plot are very good, which is of a relatively high standard among hunter fans. I was very happy when I read the author's article. I didn't read the author's data. While I was reading, I thought the author's data must be very good. However, after reading it, the ending was beyond my expectation.
There are very bleak data in the final article. There are 126 book reviews and 256 collections. This is a very subtle 1:2 data.
Sorai-san can publish it but has not signed a contract with it, so is it cooperating with someone other than Jinjiang? As far as I know, if you sign a contract, you can publish or produce customized printing, and Jinjiang will definitely let Sorai-san issue a notice. Jinjiang Publishing is almost the same as publishing on other websites, and you will not let Sorai-san finish publishing the article on Jinjiang... So the reason why Sorai-san didn't sign a contract with Jinjiang is because of cooperation with other publishing houses [Ah hey! .
I won't talk about Sorai-san's writing and plot, because Sorai-san's writing is very good, very good. Sorai-san's works remind me of the classic hunter fanfic "Hunter×Hunted".
What I'm talking about is why Sorai-san's data turned out to be bleak even after the writing and plot were complete.
Sorai-san has previously completed a hunter article, "Andante Cantabile", which shows that Sorai-san has his own regular readers, and I also looked at the data of "Andante Cantabile". Except that the collection is not as good as that of "No. 8", The number of clicks and comments are higher than "No. 8". I don't know what a strange phenomenon this is. One thing that can be easily explained is that Sorai-san has lost your readers.
Why was it lost? Actually, I don't quite understand it. I can only give a few reasons. For example, Sorai-san, your writing style has deteriorated, the plot arrangement is not as good as the previous work, etc. However, I compared the content of the articles of "Andante Cantabile" and "No. 8". I can definitely say that Sorai-san's performance in "No. 8" Is obviously better than that of "Andante Cantabile". None of the reasons I mentioned are valid.
Then I went to read another order I picked up, "The Fragrance of Flowers". With Sorai-san's experience, I immediately looked at the data. I swear I was choked. The total number of book reviews for "The Fragrance of Flowers": 401, the current number of collections: 1136, and the points are 6,473,144.
I began to wonder why the gap was so big. You have to know that Sorai-san, your novel has been completed and "Flower Fragrance Assault" is currently being serialized with only 70,000 words. I vaguely feel that I know the reason.
The copywriting of "Flower Fragrance" is very romantic, while the copywriting of No. 8 Is very formal, especially Sorai-san said, "No. 8 Will die. According to the plot, it is normal for the article to end after the protagonist dies." I think this is probably one of the reasons, because few readers in Jinjiang like the ending of BE. When they see it, "Oh, this is BE", so no matter how good Sorai-san writes it, they will leave it immediately.
Then I watched "The Scent of Flowers" with the mood of writing a long review for Sorai-san.
After looking at it this way, I finally understood the reason - Sorai-san's success lies in the writing and plot, but he also failed in the writing and plot.
I don't know when readers of Hunter fandom began to like this kind of tone, the bloody novel about multi-person romance... It has everything in "Flower Scent", and a little bit of Sorai-san's "No. 8", But only a little bit.
"The Fragrance of Flowers" focuses on romance, and the author focuses on writing emotions. What does Sorai-san's "No. 8" Focus on? I think it also focuses on romance, but Sorai-san is very rational. You describe emotions delicately and use the plot to promote the development of emotions, instead of the author of "The Fragrance of Flowers" who uses emotions to push the development of the plot.
Sorai-san doesn't need much advice from me. You are very good and write very well. It's just that the current Hunter readers are no longer the Hunter fans who like to read plot-oriented Hunter fan fiction. Therefore, your article needs to be written in a good way and has a plot, but there are no readers.
If you really want me to say something, I would say, Sorai-san, if you want your next article to be read by more people in Jinjiang, just like "The Fragrance of Flowers Attacks People", you can learn from "The Fragrance of Flowers Attacks People"...
Sorai-san, please keep your current status. The author of "Flower Fragrance Assaults" does not need to add another one.
Ps: If possible, Sorai-san can also hook up with the editor in Jinjiang. After signing the contract, your work - not to mention being included in V, your work will definitely increase the exposure, and more readers will read it. Just like a certain editor said, 'It is on the XX list or X recommendation. If you don't add 50 collections a day, I will be sorry for her.' Sorai-san must have hooked up with an editor before, but Sorai-san probably rejected her... There's no problem in hooking up now.
BY SibaoDelusional Syndrome Group
In fact, the vigilante is not bad, but since I am a crazy fan of the leader, I don't want to see the leader's lover cheating on me, so I cover my face. If something really happened! Then come out = =←What's your position? Asshole.
The knight is still a good partner when going out. So Chrollo, as the male protagonist's boyfriend, are you going to lose your role again?
When I just finished the movie, I wanted to calm down and rewatch it in a few days before writing down my thoughts. However, more than a month passed before I knew it. I'm really sorry... I feel that when I read fan works, I look forward too much to the appearance of the original characters, so I remember that when I started to follow the story, I was actually a little anxious at the beginning. I kept thinking about when Asa would join the brigade, what would happen to Chrollo and how he died at the hands of Sheba, etc. It was only when I re-read it, because I had developed a relationship with Asa, that I was able to read "Asa's story" instead of "No. 8 Of the brigade". So Cai Qiao, who I liked so much later, was actually only regarded by me as an NPC responsible for spoilers at the beginning. Even during the death part, I thought casually: "Oh, he died, well, I am happy with you." "It wasn't until later that Asa joined the troupe and began to think about Cai Qiao. Through Asa's memories, I finally saw Cai Qiao's cuteness. This kind of plot of leaving but being everywhere and being affected by every move inadvertently is completely my fault. Then, Knight, I really didn't feel any ambiguity between him and Asa. Well, actually, it was probably due to my subjective wish. I would rather they were companions and people who had truly trusted Su En, a partner who I met in the travel group after going around in the past. In a sense, I like it. I like Leon more than the vigilante. In the second game of the hunter exam, although I guessed that Asa was dreaming from the beginning, that chapter was really beautiful and really had the atmosphere of "Oh, it would be great if I could not wake up." - As expected, memories are my secret. I think one of the reasons why I like Asa is that I like him so much that I never forget him. (Also, I'm really curious, what did Chrollo dream about?) Chrollo, in fact, I basically don't like this guy... Every time I read a fanfic, I try to remind myself that "there are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people", but to some extent, I still have the established impression left by the original work and other fanfics, so until the hunter exam, I was still confused about how this guy Chrollo and Asa got together. Later, I felt that these two people were a perfect match. This change was probably due to their mutual discussion (I felt so shameful for saying this). The author used this to portray the personalities of the two people very well. Only after reading this paragraph did I realize that the author's Chrollo also has this side, and he does not just use competition to increase intimacy. Although the author said, "Chrollo has actually identified Asa before the ending... If he can get it without killing, then "killing" is meaningless. "But I always feel that if Asa had not died in the Kurulu Mountain, he would have died in the hands of Chrollo sooner or later. Well, it may be my personal prejudice against Chrollo, weakness, influence, instability... None of these are important. In fact, Chrollo doesn't need any reason at all. One day he will be curious to know if he can kill Asa, and then he will do it. There are also some thoughts on things that are messy and difficult to organize: Even after watching it again, the plot of "Lies" is still a bit jumpy, confusing and hard to understand. Asa was less than ten years old when he was beaten half to death by the black-haired man. He had been with Cai Qiao for a few months. He was nineteen years old when the third team was shot incorrectly. When the third team collapsed, Asa left the Colosseum for a year, so Asa stayed in the Colosseum for eight or nine years? When I joined the brigade, I stayed in □□ for two years. It was another five years when I had a heart-to-heart talk with the knight outside the □□ building. After that, I spent a year beating up enemy guests. So Asa was around 27 when he died? I like the author's words, coupled with Asa's out-of-the-box thinking, it is very interesting to read. In the second game of the hunter exam, I prefer the rewritten version. Well, regardless of what I said before about examiners eating human flesh, it reminds me of ants. I like the rewritten version of Chrollo's method of passing the exam, which just brings out the rope ability, which is better connected with the rest of the story.
Good hunter articles are all BE…
Some people's life is very short, some people's life is longer than the rest of the people around them, some people live their lives mediocrely, and some people encounter many things that others cannot encounter. Number eight is a very simple number. Anyone who has watched "Hunter" knows that this actually represents a person. The name of that person is unknown in FJ's book and his appearance has not been seen. But he is just a person, a person who once lived in the popular street. Because of its brief appearance in the book, it was given a word - cannon fodder. Despite this, in the world of "The Hunter" written by FJ, the literary point is that this is a living life, and the vulgar point is to provide a guarantee for the smooth development of the plot (==). It feels like Dongba... The article is written in the first person. This first person is a very subtle person - the good thing is that it can express the protagonist's own thoughts well without any abruptness, but the bad thing is that if it is not written well, the sincerity of the article will be ruined. Perhaps it's because the article is written in the first person, so if it weren't for the protagonist's name on the front desk before meeting Cai Qiao, I would have honestly thought that this was a story about a person whose protagonist's name is 'I'. It's not one of the new series in July, see you first - Xiaoshuangzi almost wanted to complain like this... Then, after waiting for a few chapters, your name finally came out. Otherwise, if the plot continued like this, Xiao Shuangzi would really think that you would not know your name after joining the brigade under such circumstances. She almost hugged the author's lap and yelled, "Author, you don't need to finish the original work like this... Ah... Ah..." Well, Xiao Shuangzi's shameful idea didn't come true in the end← ← Thanks to Young Asa, but boy, do you really have anything to do with your sister in Twins... It was quite surprising to see young Asa come out of the refrigerator at first. According to the original description, I definitely thought it was a coffin. However, in "Hunter", the only way to express it is 'is the coffin edible?' However, the unexpected fact that it was used as a food reserve touched Xiao Shuangzi's cuteness. Don't you think the cultivation of food reserves is surprisingly cute? Cai Qiao's name, which is full of Chinese flavor, indicates that she is a time-traveling girl. In a book that does not feature a time-travelling girl as the main character, there are probably three endings for the time-traveling girl - one, living the life of a passerby and occasionally getting out for a little fun; the other, dying in the plot; the third, dying a beautiful death by Minnasang in the brigade; the fourth, unexpectedly happy ending... By the way, are you ready... As for three o'clock and four o'clock, don't complain... The fake BG Xiaoshuangzi mentioned in the original copy really thought it was a very ordinary story in which the time-traveling girl pestered Chrollo and then all kinds of things happened and the person who was cheating always wanted to be cheated. Then, the story got back on track. However, it seems that Xiaoshuangzi guessed wrong, right? So, is it Asa who seems to be pretending to be BG? But Cai Qiao is a really good girl. Although she told Asa when she was about to die that she wanted to use Asa as a food reserve, she still couldn't do it. Otherwise, even if she knew Asa was still alive, she would have given him a fatal blow or something and then continued to use Asa as her food reserve. Miss Cai Qiao and boy Asa have different kindnesses... The scene where Asa mispronounced Cai Qiao's name was funny, but after Cai Qiao's death, looking at it before, I still felt a bit... Regretful. Of course, this is for Xiao Shuangzi, not Asa. Young Asa doesn't seem to be a literary person. But at the Colosseum, Asa started to feel a little different. He began not to care about his body and liked to live in excitement. Although his lazy nature was still retained, there was one thought - boy, you have grown up, Mama-san was very touched and distressed by this thought (...). Being taken away by the third team was a surprise. But when I think about where Asa's skill LV has been improved, I also know that Asa is just a passerby there. Because he didn't regard himself as one of them, maybe Asa had no idea at that time. The article took 20 chapters, or almost half of it, to write about what happened to Asa after they were separated from Chrollo, until they met Chrollo again and then developed JQ (mistake). It is quite detailed and allows people to see what happened to the boy Asa. Xiaoshuangzi personally feels that it is a happy and sentimental thing to watch a boy who once became such a boy through such and such things, and to watch the growth of others. I feel that the boy I see in front of me seems to exist, in the world I understand, and is not just a life that once existed without even knowing the background... Xiao Shuangzi only read Chapter 20 and stopped reading the article. It's not that the article is not well written. To be honest, Xiao Shuangzi really likes this type of article. Hunter is actually one of her favorites =W= One is because Xiao Shuangzi has been procrastinating for too long. Please let Mr. Sorai SM me as much as you want [face covering]. The other is because Xiao Shuangzi went to an internship not long after receiving this article. She input data into the computer all day long, so that Xiao Shuangzi could not stand the idea of seeing only violence in the text on the computer. Again, the problem with your article is not Sorai-sama's but Xiaoshuangzi's own convulsions. I'm sorry that this review took so long [Bow] Illegal gathering|Produced by Changpingpu By Shuangzi
After reading this article, I felt very shocked. I didn't sleep well one night. I thought it was a very happy article at the beginning, but I was attracted by the frozen pork in your introduction. I had to read it regardless of whether it was a tragedy. I don't know what other readers are thinking, but as the plot progresses and the skin of joy is peeled off, some crazy, helpless, and depressing things emerge, and all of a sudden, they choke my breath. When □□ was disbanded, Su En's death, and finally Asa's death, each one was a regret, but your grasp of regret and the shaping of the characters, to be honest, I have read widely and my words are quite tricky, but this article of yours is undoubtedly successful. The only regret is that when other arrangements are turbulent, love is a bit weak. Thank you for bringing me laughter and tears in your article. I like you Su En, Cai Qiao, Xiake, Chulolo, and Asa.
Passing by. After reading it, I really like this article.
I had finished watching it before, and the indescribable feeling of cruelty really made my balls ache. Asa is a popular street person who has never been happy from the beginning. But Asa has always lived in a cold and humorous way, which makes it even more sad. The feeling of watching someone you love die and being unable to hold on to anything is what it takes to survive day after day. Asag is very affectionate, and he can also be very kind to others. What a good kid, he just got the lunch. Tears flow, Sorai-san, you... [Trembling fingers To be honest, when I read your previous article and saw that ending, I was very sad. I thought Chrollo was too scumbag, but maybe I had Charlotte in my heart. But now I know that Chrollo's true love is Asa! I was healed from another angle, covering my face. Asa, who faced death calmly, also cared about Chrollo. This pair was so cruel that he burst into tears! I want to watch Chrollo's side story, I also want to watch Knight Rider, and I also want to read the new biography of Chrollo's son Ciel! Sorai-san, let's dig a hole!
Tragedy, why did I watch Ruge first, and now I want to go back to it again?
For now, hunters are not considered a cold subject among fandoms. On the contrary, I have seen many published books about hunters. So why did the author only have more than 200 collections of his books by the time he was finished? The author's writing style and plot are very good, which is of a relatively high standard among hunter fans. I was very happy when I read the author's article. I didn't read the author's data. While I was reading, I thought the author's data must be very good. However, after reading it, the ending was beyond my expectation. There are very bleak data in the final article. There are 126 book reviews and 256 collections. This is a very subtle 1:2 data. Sorai-san can publish it but has not signed a contract with it, so is it cooperating with someone other than Jinjiang? As far as I know, if you sign a contract, you can publish or produce customized printing, and Jinjiang will definitely let Sorai-san issue a notice. Jinjiang Publishing is almost the same as publishing on other websites, and you will not let Sorai-san finish publishing the article on Jinjiang... So the reason why Sorai-san didn't sign a contract with Jinjiang is because of cooperation with other publishing houses [Ah hey! . I won't talk about Sorai-san's writing and plot, because Sorai-san's writing is very good, very good. Sorai-san's works remind me of the classic hunter fanfic "Hunter×Hunted". What I'm talking about is why Sorai-san's data turned out to be bleak even after the writing and plot were complete. Sorai-san has previously completed a hunter article, "Andante Cantabile", which shows that Sorai-san has his own regular readers, and I also looked at the data of "Andante Cantabile". Except that the collection is not as good as that of "No. 8", The number of clicks and comments are higher than "No. 8". I don't know what a strange phenomenon this is. One thing that can be easily explained is that Sorai-san has lost your readers. Why was it lost? Actually, I don't quite understand it. I can only give a few reasons. For example, Sorai-san, your writing style has deteriorated, the plot arrangement is not as good as the previous work, etc. However, I compared the content of the articles of "Andante Cantabile" and "No. 8". I can definitely say that Sorai-san's performance in "No. 8" Is obviously better than that of "Andante Cantabile". None of the reasons I mentioned are valid. Then I went to read another order I picked up, "The Fragrance of Flowers". With Sorai-san's experience, I immediately looked at the data. I swear I was choked. The total number of book reviews for "The Fragrance of Flowers": 401, the current number of collections: 1136, and the points are 6,473,144. I began to wonder why the gap was so big. You have to know that Sorai-san, your novel has been completed and "Flower Fragrance Assault" is currently being serialized with only 70,000 words. I vaguely feel that I know the reason. The copywriting of "Flower Fragrance" is very romantic, while the copywriting of No. 8 Is very formal, especially Sorai-san said, "No. 8 Will die. According to the plot, it is normal for the article to end after the protagonist dies." I think this is probably one of the reasons, because few readers in Jinjiang like the ending of BE. When they see it, "Oh, this is BE", so no matter how good Sorai-san writes it, they will leave it immediately. Then I watched "The Scent of Flowers" with the mood of writing a long review for Sorai-san. After looking at it this way, I finally understood the reason - Sorai-san's success lies in the writing and plot, but he also failed in the writing and plot. I don't know when readers of Hunter fandom began to like this kind of tone, the bloody novel about multi-person romance... It has everything in "Flower Scent", and a little bit of Sorai-san's "No. 8", But only a little bit. "The Fragrance of Flowers" focuses on romance, and the author focuses on writing emotions. What does Sorai-san's "No. 8" Focus on? I think it also focuses on romance, but Sorai-san is very rational. You describe emotions delicately and use the plot to promote the development of emotions, instead of the author of "The Fragrance of Flowers" who uses emotions to push the development of the plot. Sorai-san doesn't need much advice from me. You are very good and write very well. It's just that the current Hunter readers are no longer the Hunter fans who like to read plot-oriented Hunter fan fiction. Therefore, your article needs to be written in a good way and has a plot, but there are no readers. If you really want me to say something, I would say, Sorai-san, if you want your next article to be read by more people in Jinjiang, just like "The Fragrance of Flowers Attacks People", you can learn from "The Fragrance of Flowers Attacks People"... Sorai-san, please keep your current status. The author of "Flower Fragrance Assaults" does not need to add another one. Ps: If possible, Sorai-san can also hook up with the editor in Jinjiang. After signing the contract, your work - not to mention being included in V, your work will definitely increase the exposure, and more readers will read it. Just like a certain editor said, 'It is on the XX list or X recommendation. If you don't add 50 collections a day, I will be sorry for her.' Sorai-san must have hooked up with an editor before, but Sorai-san probably rejected her... There's no problem in hooking up now. BY SibaoDelusional Syndrome Group