[Hunter X Hunter] Die, Die, Die

The author's writing is very good, and I had really mixed feelings after reading it. When I read the copywriting, I thought it was a stupid one. At first, I complained about why the protagonist was so white, but then I became more and more fascinated as I read it. I finished it in the morning, and then I became depressed. Tears kept flowing and I cried all afternoon. I am still a little depressed now. The sky looks gray... It is so painful.

The heroine should be dead (black and white photo), is her consciousness, soul, or a completely created data character? Just be on the side of the guy with the silver hair from the beginning. This is said to be a fanfic of Hunter, but in fact it is more like a game setting based on Hunter. It is like loading the game again after the character dies in the level. The birthplace of the heroine is Meteor Street, and then enters different dungeons according to the choice. The difference is that the heroine is conscious, so she feels like a "human".

This is not blackening, this is crazy

So what... I just want to ask weakly... [After precise computer analysis, they calculated the reasons why they did this based on their existing behaviors and words in the comics, and then calculated their possible reactions in various situations. That's it. " "To put it simply, they are computer-operated robots that are so lifelike that even you can't detect them. ... Then, for other parts of the Hunter World = = In addition to the locations, characters and stories that happened in other places that appeared in the original work, is there no way to infer it based on the program? In this way, the heroine's life range is only allowed to be limited to such a small area ~ She has to deal with the familiar characters and plots for a hundred and ten thousand years ~ It's really pitiful ~

The silver-haired man at the end is so cute What is his relationship with the heroine?

First, I would like to apologize to my sister, because Cherry is quite busy with her internship during this period, so her review is late. Get to the point. First copywriting. The overall effect of the copywriting and cover gave me the feeling that the layout was clean and clear, and the content of the copywriting was also very straightforward, so straightforward that before I read the article, I thought it was really a spoof of Happy's female ticket article, but! Gu Liang, you have deceived me deeply. What is the outcome of this cheating? Of course, does this actually count as contrasting cuteness? [Looking at you bitterly...] Then there are the opening three chapters. This opening felt like a drag to me. The pace of plot development is very slow and chaotic, which makes people anxious. In fact, as a short story, although the first three chapters cannot be regarded as a serious opening, they are still important, and whether they can attract readers is still a crucial factor. How to grasp the rhythm of the article is also something that Guliang needs to pay attention to. Although in connection with the ending, you can find that the content in the first chapter is necessary to echo it, but I have to say that just looking at the beginning is still a bit boring, and there is nothing that can be used as a highlight to make people shine. In fact, I would like to add a word here. Although the tone of the entire article ranges from the spoof of the happy female ticket in the copywriting to the somewhat nonsensical (?) Partial BE open ending, I have to say that the setting of the heroine is indeed a highlight. However, this highlight was hidden by Gu Liang until the end. I personally think this is a bit of a pity. Of course, this is partly because this article is a short article. However, in my opinion, this highlight is in the previous chapter or even at the beginning. If Guliang had buried this foreshadowing more beautifully, then the beginning might not be so monotonous and ordinary. Next comes the plot. RPG-like level-breaking games are basically in a cycle - the heroine gets along with the original characters, then dies, is resurrected and then continues. Although the whole process was a joke, the psychological changes of the heroine were also portrayed by Gu Liang. But these alone are not enough to support the entire article. To be honest, the main plot line of the entire article is still too monotonous and boring, and the hidden plot is buried too deeply by Gu Liang, which makes the plot development clues of the entire article feel messy. In addition, because it is written in the first person, this article will have the nagging nature of the heroine, but without the focus or climax, it can be enough to arouse the resonance of readers. As for the characters, the heroine doesn't feel very distinctive to me. Of course, her character setting is excellent, but she was buried by Gu Liang until the end. [P. I mean it sincerely. When I saw the ending, I wanted to flip the table over. Gu Liang, please write a side story! Hey, hey, Mary Su Xiaobaiwen is crying, Gu Liang! And the characters in the original work are probably all related to the little spiders (?), So I actually had the feeling that they were actually strangers with only the names of the spiders. Of course, I'm not saying that Gu Liang has destroyed these characters in this article, but the character traits of the spiders are not outstanding enough and the images are not plump enough. They here are not as charming as the spiders in the original work. Finally, I want to say, Guliang's article is actually about the appendix? QAQ The ending feels a bit rushed, I don't know if it's my imagination. That's basically it. I still have to say that the above is the opinion of the Cherry family, which is inevitably biased. I hope Gu Liang doesn't mind. If there is anything wrong, you can point it out directly to Cherry. I hope Gu Liang's writing will get better and better as she writes. XD

The heroine died many times?

It turns out that the heroine is already dead?

This section seems to be a sign of starting a new journey (?)

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