(Ping Xie) The Miserable Life of a Girl Who Transmigrated into a Zongzi

I would also be willing to dress up as a bloody rice dumpling if I could see the live version of Mengyou Bo and Naoyou Kiss! ! ! [Crazy standing flag JPG.] (I want to wear, wear, wear, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, eeeeeaaaaaaaaaa!!!!"

This is actually a fake article from 9 years ago. You just wrote one chapter and you went too far! Why don't you read a few more chapters before leaving!

It's fate. I told my sister that I wanted to travel there, and my sister said that you should be careful and become a zongzi???, But I found this book at night. Isn't this fate?

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Hahaha I really want to see the sequel hahahaha

Niu?, The style of painting is so strange, hahahahahahahahahaha

Very boring... The style of painting is unique and unique that I have never seen before...

So cute, I can't help but dig a hole.

[Weakly raises hand] Actually, I think the character of the little brother was also criticized, and the innocence was also criticized. This is just like the author's attempt to rob the tomb and not understand the character's personality clearly. . . So it's black. . However, the writing style is much better than that of Meteor, so I won't give it a -2. . I really feel that the mistress's character is a bit regretful. . The first physique cannot attract just one rice dumpling, and the second one should give him a hard chop when he is kissed. I remember that the mistress is a tsundere. . Also, did the little brother talk too much? . Shouldn't the battle be over with just a few words? . Why is the fat man so frightened? Shouldn't he have immediately taken out his penis and given it to the rice dumpling? How dare he compete with me, the fat man, even with a small rice dumpling attached? Forgive me for my unprofessional rant. As a Ping □□ person who has also written Ping Xie articles, I feel that I can't stand the characters being out of shape. QWQ

I accidentally saw this... Well, although I can't say it's too dark, Wu Xie's character is indeed a bit broken. Wu Xie is a big man, and the most likely reaction to being kissed suddenly by his younger brother is to kick him. It doesn't matter whether she likes him or not, a woman wants to be kissed suddenly. Slap... I don't know when this article was set, but even Wu Xie at the beginning would not just hide behind his brother, so some people may be sensitive to this action and dislike it [In fact, I am not very fond of this action either...]. The writing style is pretty good, but the character's behavior needs to be studied more. I haven't read this author's previous articles, but judging from other people's comments below, there should be improvement? If you want to write a fanfic, you'd better think carefully about the character's personality, otherwise it's easy for people to dislike you. Looking forward to your improved works