Iron cavalry sweeps through the sands, banners planted far and wide to claim the realm. From the heights, golden goblets are raised; amid drunken dreams, the land blooms like a flower!
I have never believed that absolute good or evil exists in this world. In truth, born into this mortal world, we are all nothing but puppets. Some of us are simply happier than others. So, if you are a romantic or a perfectionist, please don't read this book, because I don't believe everyone gets a happily-ever-after, and I can't write a story where everyone does. I will focus on the characters' emotional ups and downs, the schemes played out on the battlefield, and the planning of strategy and tactics. As for the women fighting for power in the imperial harem, honestly, after watching so many awful palace dramas, I really don't want to copy them. But there's one thing I can promise: I will do my best to keep things realistic and give readers a genuine sense of emotional highs and lows.
Wanting both reality and authenticity is not a good combination. Keep up the good work!
From a conceptual structure point of view, it is quite thoughtful. However, one person's ability is limited. If we can cooperate, some disadvantages should be able to be overcome.
What does the female pig think about the queen? Or is she planning to have an affair? Hehe~
Hello, can you leave your contact information? I want to send you a chapter I wrote.
Girl, how old are you? You're still in school, and you're not studying literature. Let's take a look first.
The language is still very rich
Sure enough, I'm not suitable for palace fighting = =The scene changes too fast and I can't keep up with the rhythm. Also, horse training and stuff were in the very beginning of time travel, so there really isn't anything new there, and there's a suspicion that it's too late = =
The prehistoric civilization at the end is too abrupt, is there any point = =/br Even if it is to be a fiction, just introduce the basic content of the fictional background. You don't need to bring out such a funny thing. Girl, you are not writing funny articles, right? Orz/br But the author's attitude is very sincere. Come on, practice writing! [We are both newbies]/br And, is it my illusion that the little master made me feel inconsistent [Gongdou wastes one]
In addition, the palace hierarchy of the Haoyue Kingdom is also very clear: one queen, three wives, nine concubines, twenty-seventh wife, and eighty-one male emperors. The chief steward of the harem is Gong Zheng, and the others, men are called palace members, and women are called Gong Yu (the number of people is very small to ensure the orthodoxy of blood, and they all took birth control pills before entering the palace). The stewards of the harem are in order: Shang Gong Bureau, in charge of Si Yan, in charge of publicity and memorials; Si Bu, in charge of lists and calculations; Si Zheng, in charge of forms and punishments; Si Wei, in charge of the pavilions and palaces. The Bureau of Shangyi is in charge of official registration, the teaching of classics and history, paper and pen cases; the Secretary of Music is in charge of music; the Secretary of Bin is in charge of guests; the Secretary of Zan is in charge of etiquette, praise and guidance. The Bureau of Shangfu is responsible for the seals and seals, and is responsible for the seals and festivals; the Yi department is responsible for clothes; the decoration department is responsible for playing with soup, towels, and turbans; the battle department is responsible for guard weapons. The Shangshi Bureau is in charge of the food department, and is in charge of food; the Secretary of Ying is in charge of wine and glutinous rice; the Department of Medicine is in charge of medicines for medicine and witchcraft; the Secretary of Yi is in charge of making firewood and charcoal. The Shang sleeping bureau is in charge of the department's establishment, and is in charge of beds, mats, curtains, and sweeping; the Siyu is in charge of the chariot, umbrellas, and fans, and holds feather rituals; the Siyuan is in charge of the gardens, planting vegetables, melons, and fruits; the lamps holder is in charge of lights and candles. The Shanggong Bureau is in charge of the system and tailoring; the Secretary of Bao is in charge of gold, jade, pearls, money and goods; the Secretary of Cai is in charge of silk and silk; the Secretary of Weaving is in charge of weaving and dyeing. Among the six ministers, Si Yue and Si Shan have four people each, and the other twenty-two departments have two people each. Each department is divided into dians and palms to carry out their duties. There are ten people in the sixth grade, from the fifth grade. There are twenty-eight people in the department, from the sixth grade. There are twenty-eight people in the code, starting from the seventh grade. Palm twenty-eight people, from the ninth rank. In addition, there are a group of capable officers who protect the empress, but they all live in remote palaces outside the city, and they all take birth control pills to maintain the purity of their bloodline. . Is this just to make up the word count? The description is poor and the dialogue is not vivid. It's better to practice writing more. Don't always recommend yourself on forums.