[Jane Eyre Fan Fiction] Time Reversed

Monte and I left most of our dowry to Mrs. Wood, and while she was scolding us for being ungrateful and wanting more money, Monte and I used the remaining money to buy two ship tickets and head west to the American continent. Life on the ship was very hard, as we were often bullied because of our modest dress. Later, after Monte volunteered to become a seaman, our treatment was slightly better. When we arrived in the United States, the situation was worse than we imagined. The United States does not have anything the United Kingdom has! Maybe I shouldn't be so harsh, but a lot of things are under construction and everything is smoky. Roads are being built, railroads are being built, cities, if you can call them cities, are being built. People live in cramped houses, and it is normal for five or six people to live in a small room. We inquired about the price of the house and found out that with our current financial resources we could only rent it for two months. I spent a little money to rent a decent small room. There was nothing left in the room except a simple wooden bed, but this was better than others. At least there were only Monte and I on this bed that was difficult to turn over. That night we huddled up in a ball and hugged each other tightly. It was really cold, and there was no heating facility in the room. We were shivering from the cold, and Monte's lips turned blue the next day. But he didn't say anything, just grabbed his hat and T-shirt and went to the factory to apply for a job. He is a young man with no skills. The factory is willing to hire him, but only at the lowest price. Monte gritted his teeth and endured it silently. Every day when he came back, he would first take off his dirty T-shirt and put on a relatively clean white T-shirt. However, I had long noticed that he would get up secretly in the middle of the night to wash clothes. Maybe he just wants me to think he has a decent job, so I give him a hug every month when he hands me the money. "I love you, Monte." I whispered against his ear, and he lowered his head and gave me a deep kiss. When he gets up in the middle of the night every day to wash clothes, he will find that the clothes have been washed long ago. When he goes to the factory to work elsewhere to do manual labor, he will find that he does not need to squeeze in with the workers to eat, and I will prepare lunch for him. I had no other trades, and new cities were growing, with more immigrants and pioneers from England. In addition to painting and music, I reluctantly learned to weave. There was a huge demand for female textile workers in factories. Although they discriminated against women, they still had a basic subsistence wage. Every day after sending Monte to the factory, I would go home and change out of my home clothes before setting off for my textile factory. In this way, we will have two salaries every month, and we carefully plan our daily consumption. Gradually, our lives will become more comfortable. When Monte realized belatedly that I also worked in the factory, he got angry once, but he quickly forgave me. His face was full of regret and shame, and I told him it was nothing. "Mont, do you feel sorry for me?" I asked him, "But I don't want to see you working so hard alone." Later, I applied for a job as a tutor. The little girl in the hostess's family happened to want to learn piano. The salary of a tutor was low. Mr. Rochester gave me thirty pounds a year, but here I can make three or four pounds a year and I can laugh. There is no denying that we would have been better off if I had not left my inheritance to Mrs. Wood. But we can't abandon the family and not compensate her with anything. I'm even thinking that when our economy becomes richer, we can send some money back. Monte has worked in the factory for a long time. It is really unbelievable that he went from a small worker at the bottom to the head of supervisory workers. If you look at him now, you won't think that he is an aristocratic young master. He was wearing a white sweat vest with his legs crossed, and sticky sweat slid down his wheat-colored muscles. He and his workers smoked and joked around at noon, laughing happily and unrestrainedly. Every day when I go to deliver food to him, I wonder if my decision to come to the United States was the right one. But every time they see me go, they will cheer and shout: "Sister-in-law is here, sister-in-law is here!" My boy will jump down from the haystack neatly at this time, his eyebrows are full of masculine maturity, and the way he smiles now often makes me stunned. "Jane Eyre!" He smiled and kissed me, turned his back and grabbed the lunch box in my hand, "Let me see, what did you bring me today?" Behind him, the group of dirty workers who were once spurned by the upper class showed their simplicity, told disgusting dirty jokes and spoke vulgar language. The smell of cheap cigarettes spread from one person's mouth to another, and the sour smell of sweat was like the smell of rotten eggs. Everyone laughed wildly and boldly. "Hey, what are you looking at? Those two people!" Said a middle-aged Irishman with his hair wrapped in a yellow turban. "That's disgusting." "Stop showing off your affection, what do you want us poor people to do?" "Get out of here, get out of here, go fuck me next door!" "Go fuck next door!" A round of good-natured laughter followed. Monte bared his teeth at them in annoyance, turned his head and said with an embarrassed look, "Ha, Jane, don't pay attention to them." "Little Monte is feeling sick again!" "What the hell, his wife can't throw up?" "Little Monte, your wife has known for a long time that we are like this." "Little Monte, put away that nanny look of yours." In fact, I would cook some food for them when I had nothing to do, and naturally I got to know these disgusting and kind-hearted guys. The United States is like a melting pot, with people from different backgrounds and identities crowding in every day. But the difference between this place and the UK is that it is more open-minded, tolerant and free, and it makes her happier. "It's too late Monte." I raised my head and smiled at my boy, "Don't I know about your friends?" He was stunned, lowered his head, and blew a puff of smoke into my mouth. "I'm quite a gangster," he said vaguely. I opened my arms and hugged him tightly.

Why did it end so quickly? . . . I haven't had enough of it yet

I have read these novels many times, including "Jane Eyre" and "Wuthering Heights." This is my first time watching the fanfic. A very beautiful article, the writing is very much in the style of the original work, I mean the writing style. The character of Jane Eyre is also very faithful to the original work. I have always believed that the above two points are the basis of a good fanfic. If the writing style is too different, or the protagonist's personality has changed, I think it is not a fanfic, and it may be a good original work XD. On this basis, the writing style is quite good. Whether it is the description of the scenery, the transition of the scene, the dialogue, or the advancement of the plot, they are all very compact. When I opened this article, I had only one feeling - I found a treasure. At first, this list was given to me by my secretary. Recently, I mainly write about anime and manga (see how different it is from yours). The only thing I'm thankful for is that my reading volume is still barely adequate (it's not about online literature, so I was assigned?) When I read this work, I finished it easily - I am familiar with the original work, coupled with your beautiful writing~ Of course, due to time issues, it still took several days to read the entire text. I don't know how long I plan to write it, but I think it will take three times the current length to get the full picture. The core part of Jane Eyre's character has not yet been discovered - it can only be developed in intense conflicts. The plague encountered in school and the death of friends are part of the exploration of the protagonist in the original work, but it has been weakened here (because Helen must survive, I agree!), So I look forward to the fierce collision in the later chapters. Let me briefly talk about the reasons why I like this article. First, there are several major aspects, including the choice of rebirth time, and then the original characters. The time of rebirth was chosen after Helen's death and before meeting Rochester. Jane Eyre did everything possible to save Helen - this character actually had a prototype in real life, and was Bronte's sister in real life. The death of this character was an event that pushed her hatred of poverty and the hypocritical and morally corrupt powerful capitalists to the extreme. In the author's article, Jane Eyre survived her rebirth. Very beautiful. Then there is Monte. At the beginning, I had doubts about the place and time when this little boy appeared. A child from such a family background met her on a public carriage? His grandma still treats Jane Eyre so kindly? Talk to her? Later, the author gave an explanation of this place, which was very good. I started thinking it was a flaw XD. The correspondence and friendship between this little boy and Jane Eyre are just like my accompanying comments below. He, like Helen, was a ray of light in Jane Eyre's poor and unhappy girlhood, allowing her to see beauty and feel warmth. Very beautiful. At present, I am not sure who the author will allocate Jane Eyre to. But I think that Monte's actual family situation and his family's expectations for his marriage will become a major source of conflict and will truly reveal Jane Eyre's character. Having said that, I would like to say one more thing. As I commented below, I actually don't like the character of Jane Eyre very much (referring to the original novel). This person gives me the feeling that she is very confident and proud, but in fact this is all due to her deep self-esteem. Including the large number of classic quotes she said in the original work, in fact, it didn't move me at all, because if it is as she said, the outside is all illusion, and we are equal emotionally and spiritually, then I can't see why she couldn't face it with Rochester at that time, and Only when Rochester has fallen to that point does she feel that they can stand together - this is not me. At the end of the original novel, this meaning is very obvious: you are blind, lame, no one wants you, and you even have no money. Then, I can finally stand side by side with you. At the end of the original novel, even the reason for the death of Rochester's first wife was downplayed. I think... It goes without saying that this feeling goes without saying. This is a person who has low self-esteem deep down and appears very proud on the surface. It may also be related to the author's experience. The three Bronte sisters were all very poor, and Jane Eyre is almost Charlotte's autobiography. So it seems that the novel Jane Eyre inevitably carries some of the author's values ​​and emotions. At the same time, when you watch her sister's "Wuthering Heights", you can also see this shadow. The writing style of the whole text is intense and depressive. In Jane Eyre, only intensity can be seen. The depressive and even weird writing style and description of scenery in "Wuthering Heights" once made me read it as a horror novel when I was still young... Orz When I saw the author's first impression about Rochester in the article, I didn't know why I thought of "Pride and Prejudice". It is also about love under the gap between rich and poor. The writing style in "Pride and Prejudice" is much more relaxed and warm, and it is really closely related to the author's own experience. I'm not being mean... I just feel that the author's experience will affect the style of writing. People with different moods must see different scenery. It seems... It's too far away... The author's writing style has a sense of originality, but is more peaceful than hers. This is very good, and it has a sense of rebirth - since you are starting over, you have to grow, right? I really like some of the details, so I'd like to point them out here (I'm so jealous that I can't write about them). The first is Chapter 5 "Letter", about Jane Eyre's brave resistance to Mr. Brocklehurst's groundless accusations against her. When I saw this, I was thinking that this place is difficult to write. It is not easy to write it in a reasonable and smooth way. As a result, the author said it in one sentence: "Later, I wrote everything that happened in the letter." Then three lines explained the result. What should I say... I learned another trick... Then in Chapter 19, "Suspicion", the dialogue between the three people is very well-done, with Nick's persecution, Jane Eyre's refusal to give in, and Rochester's principled reconciliation. The plot is compact, the characters are distinct, and the love is great. I won't tell you that I was playing "Whispers of Autumn" right at the climax when I was watching it. It was so cool. And I'm not particularly loving… Chapter 3: Jane Eyre judges the paintings on the wall. "Look at those paintings. None of them are better than what I painted. The auction price is indeed hundreds or even tens of thousands of times of my paintings." This... I don't know if it is from the original work. When I saw it, I felt the part of Jane Eyre's character in the original work that I didn't like... Well, I really don't like the child Jane Eyre. Chapter 8: Speaking of the girls who died in the cold: "It's simply that the girls I know and are close to are not among them." First of all, there is a typo, and secondly... This sentence... Is a bit mean... And the part where our lovely Monte forcibly kisses her at Rochester's house... Because I am a child who likes to make up my mind, I couldn't figure out her series of actions on the stairs after reading it three times... You can ignore me about this... I always like to read novels as movies... Yuanmu. These are all trivial details that I just knocked down when I saw them. After I finished speaking, I found that I talked a lot of nonsense XD, because I really like it and the writing is very good. I hope you will continue to work hard! ! Finally, I wish you great gains in sales and reviews (that's for sure! Make a fist!)! Ps, the inverted v thing is the most beautiful~~~I can also watch it for free~~~Ripples~~~ (Hey, that's enough, you shameless child, I will automatically get out of here XD) BY light color Xiaozhu Changpingpu millet rice wine

I'm actually a little sad, to be honest, Jane Eyre and Monte let me down. As the heir to the family, he easily abandoned his responsibilities. When responsibility and love couldn't be balanced, he chose love - eloped with Jane; when Jane had enough dowry, he still did not choose to use the money to improve and revitalize the family, but left the money to his mother - obviously, the old lady would only use the money to continue squandering and maintaining the family's superficial respectability, and he once again abandoned his family. Monte shouldn't be like this. When he mentioned the family's situation to Jane before, he was clearly worried about the fate of the workers and farmers who worked for his family. After establishing a relationship with Jane, he turned around and forgot about those who depended on him and his family for survival. He gave up his responsibilities and obligations as an heir, threw away his hands, and went to open up wasteland in the United States. Should I be happy to say that he at least has courage and a pioneering spirit? Obviously, Monte's choice is perfect for his love. If Jane is allowed to stay in his family, she will definitely not be able to bear it. She is not Helen. To be honest, I don't see the potential of the mistress of the manor in this girl. From her explosive temper and stubbornness, as well as her handling of She has a bad relationship with her aunt (I'm not saying she did something wrong, after all, her aunt was very bad to Jane, but she really doesn't have high emotional intelligence, because her aunt is actually not a bad person. If she gets along with her in the right way, at least she won't be sent away. Of course, if she does, she might not meet Monte). Of course, Jane is still a lovely girl with many valuable qualities, but these are of no help to her becoming the mistress of a manor. Essentially, she and Helen are different people. So this ending is the best for the love between Monte and Jane, and I have nothing to criticize. But Monte gave up on the family, which disappointed me. It was his family's educational mistakes that made him lack the determination to take on the responsibility for the prosperity of the family. But maybe it was this that allowed Jane to get him and fulfill their love. Finally, I suddenly thought of the love in a city. The collapse of a city fulfilled their love. For Jane, it was the overthrow of a family that fulfilled their love. Although this kind of love is beautiful, it always makes people feel lacking. What is different from Love in a Fallen City is that the shortcomings of Jane and Monte's love are man-made cowardice and evasion of responsibility, while Love in a Fallen City is just a trick of God. Bai Liusu can still say, who knows what is cause and what is effect? But Jane might not have the face to deny it. If the Wood family just goes silent, it will have nothing to do with her at all. Of course, the main reason is that Monte is not responsible enough. In Downton Abbey, Matthew is able to gradually understand the responsibilities of the family as an outsider, and works hard to turn the tide. Although he may not succeed, he is respectable enough. And Monte was raised as the heir of the family since childhood, how could he just walk away? ! So many anti-Qiong Yao novels despise the fifth elder brother, mocking him for giving up everything and running away with Xiao Yanzi, saying that it would be better to give birth to him than to give birth to a piece of barbecued pork. So what happened to Monte who gave up everything and left with Jane? Since ancient times, elopements have never ended well. The one who runs away is a concubine. Zhuo Wenjun is still able to compose "White Head Song", but I wonder if Jane will have the courage to make a decisive decision. If possible, I still hope to have an extra episode where Monte and Jane return to Wood Manor in the end. Their behavior of giving up everything and running away really vilified the image of the male protagonist in my heart! ! ! !

Okay, the last little flower, the author actually writes well. It's a pity that I really don't like it. I rarely buy V in one go. It was indeed right and I regret it. . . .

I will never understand when it became understandable for an adult to bully, abuse, and spare no effort to slander and slander a child of several years old! If it weren't for the halo surrounding Pig's Feet, Jane might very well have been one of the many children who died in the plague at that hypocritical school! This is murder! The pig's foot is not dead, it can only be said to be an attempted murder! In the original work, the lack of mutual forgiveness at the end is the recognition of this morality! I don't want to say that word, but that's what I'm thinking right now, naocan

This ending is really... A pitiful extra. I finally understand why Jane Eyre is Jane Eyre, and the romance in Jinjiang can only be small talk.

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Being able to re-examine her past, Jane has indeed matured~

Please set a price, haha, I can't do it anymore, I feel like Monte is for sale.