
The Miscalculation: Prequel
天机错前传
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 119k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 14y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
41Chapters
221Favorites
8.0Score
1.5kClicks per chapter
174Comments
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I really cried. Qaq Their relationship is really heartbreaking.
This cruelty makes me burst into tears. Please help me cry. It's so cruel???
I burst into tears watching this. . A feeling of life and death together. . Still bursting into tears. We can see their next life next week. .
I stayed up all night reading Be. You're looking for abuse, aren't you? Come on, stepmother
Score...
I plan to watch Two Lives Flowers after watching the prequel. Start looking forward to the two-year-old flower
Like. That's how persistent you are. Such love. It is only found in novels. Human beings are very miserable. . . .
Well, I would say that the first thing I saw when I came here was the fixed posting time? Life after life, life after life. . . I will save all the articles, and I will tell you when I read them slowly Don't you know each other? Sorry I'm going to lead the training, la la la
Ah! What a miserable couple! ! ! !
I forgot when I met Xiao Qingqing~ At that time, it seemed that The Secret of Two Lives was not finished yet~ Later, when it was finished, I was afraid to watch it. I delayed it until the prequel was finished, and then I started to "follow the story." I remember hearing many people say that the main story was very sad~ So I crawled over to read the main story first, and it took more than ten days to read it intermittently. I despised myself for the speed. After reading it today, I felt really tortured and uncomfortable, so I want to complain Let's talk about the name of the protagonist CP first. One is Mo Qianyu, the other is Mo Lishang. I thought of a sentence that appears later in the article: "If you don't leave, I won't give up. Could it be that the two surnames correspond to the meaning of "Don't leave but never give up"? Let's talk about Qian Yu. When I saw the word Yu, I remembered the last paragraph of "Looking for Qin". When Xiang Shaolong's son saw an eagle flying in the sky, he told him to change his name. The change was the word Yu. For him, Yu means that he will have great ambitions, but for Qian Yu, it has a sad meaning. He is carrying Qian Yu and cannot fly freely, but he has no choice but to break his wings and fall. Let's talk about Li Shang, this name is too straightforward, both words are filled with sadness. Xiaolion is really extremely sad. I don't want to be Li Shang, but I am still suffering from Li Shang in this life. I can only say Qingqing, don't you dare to be so cruel. Since this article is a prequel to Tianji Wrong, it naturally tells the story of a past life. Unfortunately, I haven't read the main text yet, so I can only comment on the prequel and talk about the plot. The story takes place in the troubled times at the end of the Sui Dynasty. It only touches on the background and love at the beginning, and also explains the reasons for the emergence of Xiao Ion, and then the protagonists meet. In fact, the emotional line of this story develops very quickly. Xiao Qianyu realized his feelings first, and after a slight struggle, he became firm. On this point, he strongly despised Xiao Li, for his duplicity, and often evading, which made Xiao Qianyu sad. Later, after a little abuse, he gave her to Xiao Li. A short period of sweetness, you must say that this person's intentions are "sinister". It's really a storm that is about to come. The little sweetness is just to pave the way for the big abuse. I would rather you keep torturing me until you become numb and I won't feel so uncomfortable in the end ~ I can't bear to give you a candy or a stick. I won't go into detail about the plot. The main line is very clear, and it advances little by little around the daily life of the two. The theme is in one word, cruel! I think if I were asked to recall the plot again, I would not be able to help but whip Xiao Qingqing. By the way, I really hate judging characters, so I just said it casually. Of the two, I prefer Xiao Qianyu, no, I firmly like Xiao Qianyu. As a wealthy daughter, she is actually not very experienced in the world. Perhaps it is because she is not very experienced in the world that she doesn't have as many scruples as Xiao Ion and is so brave. When Xiao Ion tried to escape again and again, she was the one who bravely and firmly grabbed him. If it weren't for Xiao Qianyu's unwillingness to let go, the relationship might have dissipated. From the moment she realized her love, I felt that her life also corresponded to her name. She really opened a thousand feathers. Although she was bound by thousands of things, her heart was free. No wonder she liked to travel freely. Let's talk about Xiao Li, to be honest, she knows her destiny. She lacks a life soul and is doomed to be alone, so it is understandable that she avoids Xiao Qian Yu's feelings again and again, in order not to implicate the other party, but she doesn't know that she will hurt the other party instead. That unintentional "don't touch me" is really like a knife stabbing her. Later, she was also wavering. Although it was for Qianyu's own good, she had never thought about how uncomfortable Xiao Qianyu would feel every time she said such words. Contempt~! At the end, Xiao Qianyu thought about giving the Sansheng Stone to Xiao Li, hoping to help her get rid of this lonely fate. The two of them used blood drops to make an appointment in the next life. Seeing this, I really want to cry. I want to poke Xiao Qing, dare you not to be so cruel~ The above is purely a comment made by confused people, so just take a look at it. Escape.