This is a story about a heroine who acts arrogant on the surface but is actually a good-for-nothing, and keeps getting abducted by some villain.
But in the end, who abducted whom, and who became whose doom?
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So happy, so happy~~Although there is no clear ending, it is so sweet~~~Yeah╭(╯3╰)╮
5555555555555Why don't you give a clear ending... Damn it... I like Qianjun so much! ! ! ! ! !
It's rare to receive an article that suits my heart in the article collection building. LZ read it in one breath with great joy. After finishing the literary part, I will make a more summary review below.
First of all, let's talk about this character. The priorities are clear and strong, and they complement each other, so I'm the first to praise him. Not to mention the distinctive and strong character, love and hate, which makes people shine and feel kind to the heart. Unconsciously, they have been moved by the character. Reviewers particularly liked the role of the witch Gattaca. She is flamboyant and free-spirited, and she also has a sense of loyalty to her friends and a daughter-like feeling for the person she admires. It often makes people laugh and endear her to her.
As for the plot, the main line is clear and straight, and the occasional gags can also make people smile, and the links are interlocked and advanced layer by layer. The foreshadowing and the overall plot trend are all in one go, reasonable but not artificial. The reasonable speculation and arrangement of the characters' personalities also increase the rationalization of many coincidences and twists in the plot, which is very careful.
The above mentioned two advantages, and then I will briefly mention the shortcomings. Since this article is very much written with the reviewers in mind, it may be a little bit superficial, sorry for that.
First of all, there are still some slight deficiencies in the connection between plots. For example, in the first few twists and turns of calamity after calamity, the author was a little impatient and explained it in a few simple strokes. Although it was not a serious problem, it still made the story a little hasty. This problem usually occurs at several important plot turning points. It is a pity that the readability of the article has been slightly compromised.
In addition, the foreshadowing is a little too obvious. Too much information has been revealed in the previous article, which has reduced the gimmick of the article. I believe many readers can already guess the rest of the story. This is one of the taboos in novels. The gimmicks of the article are not enough to whet the appetite, and the plot arrangement is too clear, which reduces the mystery of the story by half, which is a pity. Novels can naturally provide hints, and foreshadowing is naturally an extremely effective technique. However, if the author's intention is exposed in advance, it will become a failure.
Let's talk about the emotional drama. Due to space limitations, there is actually not enough foreshadowing in the emotional scenes. Whether it's Xia Yi's part or Lou Zhen's part, it's always a bit far-fetched. The author carefully arranges the memories of Xia Yi and Yun Chan, as well as several confrontations between the male protagonist and his male counterpart, and the psychological description and side foreshadowing, all of which are scattered here and there. But it's still not enough. For example, Lou Ming, although the several explanations after the encounter are considered to be emotional foreshadowing, they are still too hasty and superficial. Corresponding to the several actions he made for the heroine in the later chapters, it seems that the strength is not enough. Xia Yi is even more so. Although the front, back, side, and psychological, action, and demeanor are all described, it still lacks a bit of flavor. I only saw how deep and intense the love was described in the following text, but without enough foreshadowing in the previous text, it seemed a bit rough.
Just like a perfume, the first taste, the middle taste and the last taste are not yet able to taste the tone of the first taste. The middle taste begins to be strong, and the aftertaste is also strong and overwhelming, overbearing, but not delicate enough.
The above is my personal opinion. Whether it is good or bad, I can say it quickly. Thank you to the author for giving me a good article.
I'm so happy with the score, the minions were indeed cannon fodder, I'm very satisfied.
I have also read another article by the author, which is pretty good, but I like this one better in terms of subject matter, haha
Not enough, not enough.~~~~~~Please hurry up and open a book about Qianjun and Mumu~~~~~Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
It's so beautiful. It's really heartbreaking and happy at the same time. I hope I can see such a beautiful article again.
I'm so happy that there is actually a sequel, and I still like it. Hurry up and start a new post, I'm looking forward to it endlessly
The plot between the witch and the wood was the most annoying to me. Although it is an old story, it was not easy to write well.
Shi Xiayi finally got what he wanted, that awkward and arrogant character. Ha ha.
So happy, so happy~~Although there is no clear ending, it is so sweet~~~Yeah╭(╯3╰)╮
5555555555555Why don't you give a clear ending... Damn it... I like Qianjun so much! ! ! ! ! !
It's rare to receive an article that suits my heart in the article collection building. LZ read it in one breath with great joy. After finishing the literary part, I will make a more summary review below. First of all, let's talk about this character. The priorities are clear and strong, and they complement each other, so I'm the first to praise him. Not to mention the distinctive and strong character, love and hate, which makes people shine and feel kind to the heart. Unconsciously, they have been moved by the character. Reviewers particularly liked the role of the witch Gattaca. She is flamboyant and free-spirited, and she also has a sense of loyalty to her friends and a daughter-like feeling for the person she admires. It often makes people laugh and endear her to her. As for the plot, the main line is clear and straight, and the occasional gags can also make people smile, and the links are interlocked and advanced layer by layer. The foreshadowing and the overall plot trend are all in one go, reasonable but not artificial. The reasonable speculation and arrangement of the characters' personalities also increase the rationalization of many coincidences and twists in the plot, which is very careful. The above mentioned two advantages, and then I will briefly mention the shortcomings. Since this article is very much written with the reviewers in mind, it may be a little bit superficial, sorry for that. First of all, there are still some slight deficiencies in the connection between plots. For example, in the first few twists and turns of calamity after calamity, the author was a little impatient and explained it in a few simple strokes. Although it was not a serious problem, it still made the story a little hasty. This problem usually occurs at several important plot turning points. It is a pity that the readability of the article has been slightly compromised. In addition, the foreshadowing is a little too obvious. Too much information has been revealed in the previous article, which has reduced the gimmick of the article. I believe many readers can already guess the rest of the story. This is one of the taboos in novels. The gimmicks of the article are not enough to whet the appetite, and the plot arrangement is too clear, which reduces the mystery of the story by half, which is a pity. Novels can naturally provide hints, and foreshadowing is naturally an extremely effective technique. However, if the author's intention is exposed in advance, it will become a failure. Let's talk about the emotional drama. Due to space limitations, there is actually not enough foreshadowing in the emotional scenes. Whether it's Xia Yi's part or Lou Zhen's part, it's always a bit far-fetched. The author carefully arranges the memories of Xia Yi and Yun Chan, as well as several confrontations between the male protagonist and his male counterpart, and the psychological description and side foreshadowing, all of which are scattered here and there. But it's still not enough. For example, Lou Ming, although the several explanations after the encounter are considered to be emotional foreshadowing, they are still too hasty and superficial. Corresponding to the several actions he made for the heroine in the later chapters, it seems that the strength is not enough. Xia Yi is even more so. Although the front, back, side, and psychological, action, and demeanor are all described, it still lacks a bit of flavor. I only saw how deep and intense the love was described in the following text, but without enough foreshadowing in the previous text, it seemed a bit rough. Just like a perfume, the first taste, the middle taste and the last taste are not yet able to taste the tone of the first taste. The middle taste begins to be strong, and the aftertaste is also strong and overwhelming, overbearing, but not delicate enough. The above is my personal opinion. Whether it is good or bad, I can say it quickly. Thank you to the author for giving me a good article.
I'm so happy with the score, the minions were indeed cannon fodder, I'm very satisfied.
I have also read another article by the author, which is pretty good, but I like this one better in terms of subject matter, haha
Not enough, not enough.~~~~~~Please hurry up and open a book about Qianjun and Mumu~~~~~Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
It's so beautiful. It's really heartbreaking and happy at the same time. I hope I can see such a beautiful article again.
I'm so happy that there is actually a sequel, and I still like it. Hurry up and start a new post, I'm looking forward to it endlessly
The plot between the witch and the wood was the most annoying to me. Although it is an old story, it was not easy to write well.
Shi Xiayi finally got what he wanted, that awkward and arrogant character. Ha ha.