A vermilion beauty mark sat between her brows. Her eyes shone brightly, seeming to hold rippling autumn waves, and a faint smile played on her lips. Her beautiful, jet-black hair danced in the wind. Barefoot and clad in red, the youth stood before a pool of blood, a shimmering blue-green sword in her right hand. Her expression was haughty, her beauty cold and unmatched. Her name was Liangjing.
I told you, if you came back, I would never let you go again. Have you made up your mind?
She didn't answer, only smiling as she walked toward him.
I'll put a great deal of effort into writing this story, and I'd love to hear your suggestions.
Your writing skills are still very good, and your language and logic skills are very good, but there are still some small flaws. Although it is a small flaw, if you can correct it, I believe your novel will definitely become more than what it is now. Give me time to make your novel more exciting. Digging, autumn, I feel drunk, I want wine, I want to stay for dancing.
Wait a minute, why have you updated so many... I haven't had time to look at TAT Nest yet, so I'll make up for it first.
So awesome!! Come on! Optimistic about you
Very well written, Sissi~
Well written‼ come on!
Very well written. . Keep up the good work! I'm optimistic about you
You are still a student, right?╮(╯▽╰)╭ Come on. I hope you can continue writing, I'm fooling you╮(╯▽╰)╭wahaha. . .
Come on. I'm optimistic about you. .
It feels like "Three Lives Three Worlds Ten Miles of Peach Blossom"~
Very well written!!!! Come on come on! The name is also very nice, and I can vaguely see the shadow of the official paper!