The Legend of the Condor Heroes: The Little Apprentice Sister of the Eastern Heretic

To be honest, I really regretted buying all the articles. I thought the article was good at the beginning, but I didn't expect it to become more and more messy later on. It was purely for the sake of being bloody, and tangled for the sake of tangle. The article was too spread out, the structure was incomplete, and the plot jumps without any causal connection. The protagonist's personality changes repeatedly without any basis. It is completely imagined by the author and does not conform to the trend of the character's own development. It is very artificial. All I can say is that it is such a pity that what could have been a very good article was ruined.

I really hope to see how Huang Yaoshi and the heroine participate in the story of the Divine Eagle ╮(╯_╰)╭. Huang Yaoshi is a lonely person in the Divine Eagle. I really hope to see the story of him coming to the Divine Eagle with his wife and children. The fandom is our own YY. Whether we participate in the original work or not actually doesn't matter. Maizi actually doesn't need to care too much, but Maizi said that he won't write fanfics. As a reader, I really feel that it is a pity.

Fandom is a gray area that is spurned! ? (/ _ ; )

How could it be over like this? . . . . . . . . . . . . My dear, I am so sad. . . . . . Chasing for a long time. . . I bought V without finishing a chapter~ Although there are ups and downs in the middle, you have to believe that those who can persevere are in love. . . I burst into tears at the end. It felt like something was missing, not to mention the feeling you had when you finished writing. . . I really like the feeling of the two of them together. In the end, this kind of mutual love is so beautiful. Although it can only exist in our imagination, it is enough to have such a beautiful place in our hearts. Really, thank you ~ Thank you for bringing me such a good story. It has been so long. I am so grateful.

Just when I thought I was fooled, I changed it - -. . . . . . . .

Although it deviates from the plot. . Forehead. . And it's a little off. . Take off. . Um~~But I just like it. . . I like Huang Yaoshi here. . It is not just a layer of skin like other articles. . I don't believe that a man who is so arrogant and proud will change for someone. . And lost oneself. . I think. If there is no such thing as the bone and blood. Huang Yaoshi is no longer Huang Yaoshi.

In fact, the writing is still okay, keep it up, and look forward to the update.

Others write that Huang Yaoshi is either his apprentice or his neighbor. The scene when the heroines meet Huang Yaoshi is also after the beginning of Condor Shooting, but Maizi's setting is not like this. In fact, Maizi's article gives people a refreshing feeling in terms of subject matter and content, but the clicks after adding V are not high. I think the reason is that There should be more, and the most important thing is that many female readers like to put themselves in the role of the heroine when reading doujins, because everyone likes to read doujins because they like these characters or complain about their fate, but Maizi's heroines are often not easy for girls to resonate with. Mo Xie's character is not a very popular character╮(╯_╰)╭. I have read so many stories about Huang Yaoshi, and I think Maizi's Huang Yaoshi is the one closest to the original work, and his emotions are also written based on his character, including some of the compromises he made towards the heroine in the later period. In many fanfics, after Huang Yaoshi fell in love with the female protagonist, he either transformed into the male protagonist of Grandma QY, or dragged him from beginning to end, while the female protagonist often had to accompany her happily. The former type of Huang Yaoshi has become extremely deformed, and the latter type of Huang Yaoshi, I feel that with his kind of personality, only the heroine Bao Nu can tolerate him. Let's have fun with Smiley Face every day! ! And will that kind of unequal marriage last? I'm very skeptical. When I read the article "The Little Junior Sister of Dongxie", I was very happy at first, because I had never seen articles about the marriage between Huang Yaoshi and the heroine. This subject is really new. Readers like me are actually very curious about how people like Huang Laoxie manage their marriages after they get married. Many time-travel novels write about Huang Yaoshi and the heroine, "The prince and the princess live happily ever after" and it ends. But marriage is not the end but a new beginning. After marriage, whether there will be conflicts in the personalities of two people, how to compromise, how to get along, and how to raise children are all very wise. I was really looking forward to this article, but I had the urge to abandon it a few times while reading it. First, I really didn't like the character of the heroine in the early stages (I don't like rebellious boys and girls). Second, the content written by the author in the later period was suspected of being bloody for the sake of being bloody. It belongs to the Tang Sect and is from the world. For example, some readers said that it was all original and not a Condor fan. The protagonist of the Condor fan did not come out to make soy sauce. Maizi always said that there were so few clicks after adding a V, so he wrote it for himself and some readers. In fact, if Maizi did it because of his love for this article, then please ignore the clicks and the opinions of some readers, and just write it according to your own ideas. But if Maizi is a professional writer, in order to increase the number of clicks, he needs to figure out the psychology of readers. Just like the girls I mentioned earlier, they all have a sense of empathy and hope to resonate with the heroine. In fact, this subject matter is very good. It is not an unpopular one as Maizi said before. If Maizi starts from Shooting the Condor, he will write the part where the heroine gives birth to a child. After finishing the part, he will write some stories about Huang Yaoshi and the heroine after seeing his son-in-law Guo Jing, and then switch to Shendiao and write about Huang Yaoshi and the heroine's feelings towards those people. Some stories about animals, and then following the divine sculpture to the story of Yitian Slaying the Dragon, it is a good interpretation of this fanfic, because from my point of view, the highlight of this article is Huang Yaoshi's indestructibility and the story is about the marriage story of a man with Huang Yaoshi's personality. These two highlights are very interesting. I think it's a bit biased for many authors to just write whatever they see is popular now. As long as they write good wine to put new wine in a bottle, it will arouse a great response. The character of the heroine written by a good author will make us readers know who wrote it as soon as we see the heroine. It is more in line with the taste of a certain kind of readers, and there are still many readers like me. For example, the characters of the heroines in Domu Mudo, which I like more, are more ordinary and popular, and the writing is not bad, but the conception of the work is more logical. The characters of the various heroines in her works will not change to create very abrupt characters. Her heroines are all relatively ordinary people, but I will definitely read her literature, because readers like me like the ordinary reactions of ordinary people when they encounter extraordinary things (a bit convoluted). There should be more readers like this in Jinjiang. I will also read Yaozhou's Wenwen. Her heroine is also the kind of ordinary person who reacts like normal people when encountering extraordinary things. They write about ordinary people but their heroines are completely different and we don't mix them up. I think this is the mainstream of novels. In real life, everyone is ordinary, and girls all hope to have some extraordinary experiences (in their dreams). Some of the early articles by famous writers were also terrible, so Maizi can also grow up slowly. By the way, this is my first long review in Jinjiang for many years. I really like Mai Zixie, and I think Mai Zi can become my favorite author. The above are some of my heartfelt remarks after reading this article. Of course, they are just the opinions of one family. I hope Mai Zi can see it (*^__^*) Hehe... My long comment was deleted%>_<%

I don't recognize anyone who came out, and I'm very confused. Your article no longer needs to be written by fans to be original... Call Huang Rong, call Ouyang Ke, call everyone you recognize... Oh, by the way, I'm actually here to urge you to update O(∩_∩)O~

Really. . . I want to slap them too. . . . Everyone is so careless. . .