Betrayal

The ending was too rushed! One died and two survived, is that acceptable?

This resolution is quite satisfactory. Liu Yansi was destined to leave behind a past he could never return to; he probably brought this upon himself, hoping to remain in Shaoyue's heart. He was a tragic figure, and I've always found him quite pitiful. As for Qin Zhu, he gave his heart and won Shaoyue's heart. I think he has truly won her heart, at least Shaoyue will continue to try. Besides, since she follows the Lao-Zhuang school of thought, she is naturally optimistic and no longer as conflicted as before. After all, death and being abandoned are different, and he died for her, choosing to die willingly. He didn't really wrong her before! Alas, what a tragic story.

It can't be this fast, right? Are there any side stories? I was still wanting more, how could it just end like that? Nothing was explained at all? A few months, a child was born, grew up, oh, a few years have passed, and it's all gone in a flash. Are they not writing anymore? Are they not writing anymore???

It seems the author didn't want to continue writing, ending it so quickly. The main characters' personalities weren't developed in detail at all. While it's not completely off-track, it feels too rushed! It only briefly explained their fates, which are plausible, but where are the details? All the delicate emotional descriptions from the beginning are gone. Sigh, author, keep it up! Actually, this is a very good story. Best of luck!

The ending was too fast; I wasn't used to it.

It's over as expected, and this is how it ended! Liu indeed died. Otherwise, he couldn't exist anymore, right? At least, this way, he would exist forever in Shao Yue's heart. Poor man, choosing this path. He was always a tragedy! Qin Zhu will be resentful, but there's nothing he can do but accept it, right? Just like he accepted Liu Gang, he's actually still a stubborn and petty man, but helplessly, he still understands Shao Yue!

With so much complexity and so many tangled scenes, there should have been so much to write about! Author, you're in such a hurry to end this; it doesn't match the earlier descriptions at all! But at least we've seen the complete story; it's far too brief!

Liu Yansi was even more heartbroken! Although Shao Yue still cared about him, it was probably only because of their son. They also had a child together. What a pity, that poor child.

Really, it's over just like that? You... You're not as serious as you used to be (cancel this, I'm not even as good as you, I can't even be bothered to leave it unfinished, haha~) Liu died just like that? There wasn't even a direct description of his death. It must have been quite tragic, right? Alas, what a pity. The two of them couldn't have it both ways. He was determined to die, wasn't he? And Qin Zhu could only strive to live. Overall, it should be a sad story, though not a tragedy.

Is this really the end? It feels like there's so much left unwritten...