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Brothers, it's a mess and it's a mess. I bought it and finished reading it to give you some clues.
It's really annoying to be threatened!!
Get to know each other soon~~ Otherwise, Xiaolong's kidnapping would be too smooth!!
The plot is okay, but the writing is not, with typos and misspellings, improper sentence segmentation, improper use of compound sentences, repeated subjects, unclear semantics, and inappropriate word choice. My child, you are in junior high school. The detailed description is not enough, the psychological description is not appropriate, and the transitions in some places are too abrupt. If nothing else, let's correct the typos first.
The ending was too quick, and a lot of the process in between was just covered in one stroke... Looking forward to the next episode...
The title of today's big article has turned into a bunch of question marks in my favorites. . . ╮(╯_╰)╭. . . . .
Hug~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Let's start a side story... Abu is reborn... I'm so touched Score, today I came up and my penis didn't smoke.
Poor little Mr. Malfoy was miserable, and his jealous old father-in-law was the most cruel. I don't believe I can't post it! ! !
Poor little Mr. Malfoy was miserable, and his jealous old father-in-law was the most cruel. After typing, I realized, am I the sofa? ? ? ?
Well, I want to say that there are many chapters that I can't see. It says that the file failed to be read. Can you help me fix it? Thank you.