My new story is about the biological mother of Kangxi's brother, Fuhquan.
This is the first story I've ever written, and it's a bit of a diary-style account. If you don't like that, feel free not to read it.
You can tell from how often I update that I'm working very hard on writing, so I usually won't reply to comments. If you like it, please leave me a flower. If you don't, just click the X to leave. Please be kind with your words!!!
This story is pure wish fulfillment~~~~YY~~~ All related plot points and information are fictional. Please disregard anything that doesn't match reality. If you're looking for historical accuracy, please move along.
Transmigrate?
What's going on?
Well, living the life of a young lady sounds pretty nice!
Be a happy, good girl, occasionally help others, and get a few perks for my family too. What a lovely life.
What?
I'm a cannon-fodder supporting female character?
A hotel power struggle? My dad is a cannon-fodder supporting male character???
No way. I'll decide how I live my life. I refuse to be a cannon-fodder supporting female character!!! And Dad has to be all right too!
Hmm! The almighty's illegitimate daughter? And you gave me a storage dimension? O(∩_∩)O Thank you!
The male lead is Li Anping.
My new story
My new story
Theme:
Personally, I feel it's so confusing and boring, and I don't have any sense of immersion at all. I use "I" sometimes and "Ke'er" sometimes, and the first-person perspective and the third-person perspective switch too frequently! I look so tired⊙⊙In a mess╮(╯▽╰)╭
A running account, a little girl's fantasy novel, boring
Okay, let's not talk about the unreasonable things in the article, let's just talk about the writing style of this article. After reading the first chapter, I really can't decide whether the author wants to write in the third person or the first person. The first person and the third person are mixed in the article. It's so awkward to read. Whoever reads it knows, since the heroine is called by the name of the character, can you trouble the author to stop using "I" and "I"? At least it has to be changed to the third person "she". The author has to at least read it through himself after writing it, or do you think it is quite smooth when you read it yourself?
After reading the comments, it seems that there are quite a few people who think it is good-looking. They may have different preferences. I do not deny others, but I am talking about my own feelings. My impression can only be: this is a Su article with insufficient writing power.
Yes, it's pretty good-looking, but the heroine's life is so enviable.
Not bad, thank you for your hard work! Beautiful~~
My pen power cannot control the content I write.
Much like a diary. . . . And it's really too colloquial
It's a good modern novel, but it has to involve cultivation. It feels like the story is cumbersome, and does the author think that the "human" golden finger given to the heroine is not big enough? Even if you want to play "God", I feel like you only see a bunch of cheats when you read the story, and the characterization is quite superficial.
I finally encountered the top-notch Su. -0- This kind of Su made me feel burnt on the inside and tender on the outside. It was terrible. -0-I feel like standing in front of a mirror and being hypnotized that I am the most beautiful woman in the world.
I'm a bit disappointed that modern literature touches on cultivation,
Personally, I feel it's so confusing and boring, and I don't have any sense of immersion at all. I use "I" sometimes and "Ke'er" sometimes, and the first-person perspective and the third-person perspective switch too frequently! I look so tired⊙⊙In a mess╮(╯▽╰)╭
A running account, a little girl's fantasy novel, boring
Okay, let's not talk about the unreasonable things in the article, let's just talk about the writing style of this article. After reading the first chapter, I really can't decide whether the author wants to write in the third person or the first person. The first person and the third person are mixed in the article. It's so awkward to read. Whoever reads it knows, since the heroine is called by the name of the character, can you trouble the author to stop using "I" and "I"? At least it has to be changed to the third person "she". The author has to at least read it through himself after writing it, or do you think it is quite smooth when you read it yourself? After reading the comments, it seems that there are quite a few people who think it is good-looking. They may have different preferences. I do not deny others, but I am talking about my own feelings. My impression can only be: this is a Su article with insufficient writing power.
Yes, it's pretty good-looking, but the heroine's life is so enviable.
Not bad, thank you for your hard work! Beautiful~~
My pen power cannot control the content I write.
Much like a diary. . . . And it's really too colloquial
It's a good modern novel, but it has to involve cultivation. It feels like the story is cumbersome, and does the author think that the "human" golden finger given to the heroine is not big enough? Even if you want to play "God", I feel like you only see a bunch of cheats when you read the story, and the characterization is quite superficial.
I finally encountered the top-notch Su. -0- This kind of Su made me feel burnt on the inside and tender on the outside. It was terrible. -0-I feel like standing in front of a mirror and being hypnotized that I am the most beautiful woman in the world.
I'm a bit disappointed that modern literature touches on cultivation,