(Interstellar) Divine Bottom X Divine Beast

I'm awful at writing blurbs, so I'm posting both versions I've written to see how they go ORZ

Action-packed version:

This is a story about a complete transformation.

Randall, a good-for-nothing young noble, disappeared during a military wilderness survival exercise two years ago. Two years later, the young noble returned, but he was a completely different person.

An ancient, mysterious divine beast attached to his body. Enemies from beyond returned. His blond mentor had once been the youngest major general. Two planets kept firing at each other across the vast universe...

All these things wove a complex web, forging an age-defying hero who would overcome every obstacle.

Lighthearted version:

Young noble Randall's life took a wild turn one day.

He fell off a cliff after getting into a fight.

His dear little brother turned into a villain.

And just before he died, he met a divine beast that couldn't even speak standard Mandarin.

Randall covered his face and spent two years evolving in the mountains.

Two years later, he returned in style, with a divine beast by his side and a whole new look!

PS

1. This story will go premium on May 18, with three chapters released that day~ Chapters 27 to 32 will be locked retroactively, so check before you buy = 3=

2. This is a one-on-one romance with a happy ending~

3. This is a student on top and teacher on the bottom, so don't pick the wrong side, dear~

My other stories:

You're Nothing but a Scumbag, modern urban romance

Potion Maker, Western fantasy~

The Fake God Project, a story full of wild twists and turns~

[Reborn in the Future] Star Music, a story about the entertainment industry~

Reborn Dance Night, a lighthearted story about boys dancing hip-hop

Reborn to Pursue, modern urban, lighthearted

Reborn to Cosplay, modern urban, lighthearted

Realm of Ruin, fantasy, demons versus humans, ongoing

Theme: Striving to become strong on one's own path in life