After endless hard work, the good-for-nothing young man is finally molded into a great villain feared by everyone and capable of making flowers wither just by looking at them.
But!!!
Why, after enjoying just a few years of peace and comfort, is he reborn back at square one and sent to the righteous sect's waste-material camp to start all over again??
Ah!!! Pretending to be a little white rabbit among the righteous sect is so miserable. As expected, the leader of the demonic cult is where I belong. Yeah!
But why does he come with a free extra?
This was the first time Bai Wuhen saw his father smile, but it wasn't the first time his father smiled at him, because he had imagined his father smiling at him countless times in dreams and fantasies. He was eager to get his father's approval, but he didn't expect to change his father's stiff face, so he just thought about it in his dreams. But today, he discovered that his father could actually have expressions, so why couldn't he smile for him? ... It was as if the ancient seal had been torn away, and the desire... The desire grew stronger.
He longed that his father's smile was because of him. The blood in his body seemed to be boiling. He felt as if a wild beast had lived in his heart, roaring and clamoring!
"Never satisfied, human beings... Are indeed the most greedy beasts... What a sad and despicable evil nature!"
I'll take it for granted. I immediately fell in love with the father-son CP. . . Don't be too cute!
The writing is beautiful and I hope the author will keep up his hard work and finish it as soon as possible.
Throw flowers! ! !
What do you want to write about? I don't quite understand!
The protagonist's brother and father seem to like the protagonist very much. Why do those servants dare to humiliate the protagonist to this point?
A few comments: The text description is very procrastinating. I had to read each paragraph two or three times to understand what it meant. This kind of writing would still look beautiful if it were a short prose, but it would be absolutely cumbersome when it becomes a full-length novel. The text that is tiring to read is not easy to attract people to read further, and the main theme is not clear.
The character transitions are abrupt, and the jump from one description of a character to another is both abrupt and inexplicable. I don't know if this is the author's original intention to show that a character can suddenly possess several personality traits, or if this person himself has a mental disorder. But all in all, several characters look very funny when separated together.
The writing feels a little bit sensational, I hope you can work hard to correct it.
Silver...
What a desirable name!
Bai Zhenyu learned badly =A=
It feels really painful to rush around without knowing the truth...
Is the villain really going to counterattack? 0 0 Then I asked why Wuhen disappeared... So I was wondering how Wuhen's things were brought out of the Gobi... In short, the article is very good, the author would like to work hard to update it~
Why do I suddenly feel like I have changed my writing style⊙_⊙
This was the first time Bai Wuhen saw his father smile, but it wasn't the first time his father smiled at him, because he had imagined his father smiling at him countless times in dreams and fantasies. He was eager to get his father's approval, but he didn't expect to change his father's stiff face, so he just thought about it in his dreams. But today, he discovered that his father could actually have expressions, so why couldn't he smile for him? ... It was as if the ancient seal had been torn away, and the desire... The desire grew stronger. He longed that his father's smile was because of him. The blood in his body seemed to be boiling. He felt as if a wild beast had lived in his heart, roaring and clamoring! "Never satisfied, human beings... Are indeed the most greedy beasts... What a sad and despicable evil nature!" I'll take it for granted. I immediately fell in love with the father-son CP. . . Don't be too cute!
The writing is beautiful and I hope the author will keep up his hard work and finish it as soon as possible. Throw flowers! ! !
What do you want to write about? I don't quite understand!
The protagonist's brother and father seem to like the protagonist very much. Why do those servants dare to humiliate the protagonist to this point?
A few comments: The text description is very procrastinating. I had to read each paragraph two or three times to understand what it meant. This kind of writing would still look beautiful if it were a short prose, but it would be absolutely cumbersome when it becomes a full-length novel. The text that is tiring to read is not easy to attract people to read further, and the main theme is not clear. The character transitions are abrupt, and the jump from one description of a character to another is both abrupt and inexplicable. I don't know if this is the author's original intention to show that a character can suddenly possess several personality traits, or if this person himself has a mental disorder. But all in all, several characters look very funny when separated together. The writing feels a little bit sensational, I hope you can work hard to correct it.
Silver... What a desirable name!
Bai Zhenyu learned badly =A=
It feels really painful to rush around without knowing the truth...
Is the villain really going to counterattack? 0 0 Then I asked why Wuhen disappeared... So I was wondering how Wuhen's things were brought out of the Gobi... In short, the article is very good, the author would like to work hard to update it~
Why do I suddenly feel like I have changed my writing style⊙_⊙