The beginning of a large article always has a gray tone
I just wanted to see the two of them happily getting along and living together, and then I saw the end... This feeling, although it is not BE, can be regarded as a regret.
The first third hates Jiaming's snobbish relatives, the middle third is anxious for Jiaming, and the last third feels sorry for Jiaming.
Why can't we see two people living a happy life in love?
Otherwise, if there is a chance to continue with a short story?
I find it quite difficult to change from a gangster to a gentle person. Jiaming's experience was quite tragic. It's unrealistic to grow up like this. I didn't take revenge on the people who took away the family property. I find it unbelievable. After all, a person who has been robbed and jailed should not be so tolerant.
It has a light taste and is very beautiful. The past is like smoke. I can continue to write more if I have the chance.
The writing is very warmヾ(≧∪≦*)ノ
The beginning of a large article always has a gray tone
I just wanted to see the two of them happily getting along and living together, and then I saw the end... This feeling, although it is not BE, can be regarded as a regret. The first third hates Jiaming's snobbish relatives, the middle third is anxious for Jiaming, and the last third feels sorry for Jiaming. Why can't we see two people living a happy life in love? Otherwise, if there is a chance to continue with a short story?
I find it quite difficult to change from a gangster to a gentle person. Jiaming's experience was quite tragic. It's unrealistic to grow up like this. I didn't take revenge on the people who took away the family property. I find it unbelievable. After all, a person who has been robbed and jailed should not be so tolerant.
It has a light taste and is very beautiful. The past is like smoke. I can continue to write more if I have the chance.
What a beautiful writing style~☆