A county magistrate who has refused promotion for eighteen years; a hunter who is always willing to take the blame for others; a strange little thief who always steals in the same way; the magistrate's beautiful, pitiful adopted daughter; a young maid with inexplicable hostility; a scholar who has mastered all six arts as he prepares for the exams...
A parasol tree shattered by lightning; a melancholy song of the phoenix seeking its mate; an uncanny remnant of incense in the censer; an unnamed memorial tablet deep in the study...
One wrong step brings a lifetime of regret.
The east wind travels a thousand miles, and a dream is far away.
Whose fault is it?
Whose heart is wounded?
[Note: Dear readers, when imagining the characters, please picture Chu Tianyou and Zhao Yu from the first series!]
Completed story:
Adventures in the World, Fan Fiction, Volume One:
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It's so beautiful and the writing is so good! ! !
Whether it's the characters or the cases (and the proportion of emotional lines), they all have the flavor of the original drama! I love it so much! !
Maomao, new pit, new pit, I'm so eager to see through it
I've been following this article for nearly a year, and I still haven't finished it.
If nothing else, let's talk about the love of a few people.
Let's talk about Hong Lihu first. He is the most infatuated person in the world. He took the blame for his love rival for the one he loved, which reminded me of Dickens's "A Tale of Two Cities", in which Carton took the blame for his lover's husband for the one he loved, and was beheaded in the end. At that time, I really liked this Caton (that's his name, I guess. If there's any mistake, let's just blame the translation, ^_^). His love was so selfless and great. Hong Lihu also loves selflessly and deeply, but Mao Da doesn't write much about this person, so his personality is not very distinctive and cannot give people a very shocking feeling. In fact, this person should be the person with the most stories. Maomao can also write more about this person, whether it is a positive description or a side description, to make this person truly "alive". In the best chapter, you can describe a little more in the dialogue between Tianyou, Wuwei, and Xiaoyu, so that this person will have a three-dimensional sense and can also arouse the resonance of readers.
Talking about Yu Ziqian, he is also an infatuated lover, who disappeared into ashes with a phoenix song, but it is much better than Hong Lihu. At least his feelings were reciprocated, but the love was a little short-lived, but as gorgeous as fireworks. He has the talent of being number one, good at both civil and military affairs, and is familiar with the books of sages, but in the end it is true that he cannot escape the word love. I feel sorry for him when I think about it. I still feel that there are too few descriptions of cats here. Yu Ziqian is gone, the country is missing a beam, the people are missing a good official, and Yulong is missing a capable minister. Isn't Yulong sad? Doesn't Zhao Yu feel sorry? Don't Shanshan feel pity for him? Won't Wuwei express his feelings? At least the cat here didn't touch people's hearts. Such a tragic story ended in just a few words. Not willing, not willing. Falling in love with a romantic woman, he was afraid that the world would stop him, so he stole sycamore branches. In the end, the sycamore tree was destroyed by lightning. Are you warning the world that no matter what kind of person you are, as long as you love, you must love openly and aboveboard. If Yu Ziqian had confessed his feelings to the elders of the clan from the beginning, I think even if they were to obstruct him, his true love would not have fallen in love with someone else's flower boat. Maybe, he can also be happy.
Let's talk about Li Xueqing, this girl's life is really rough. His biological mother hated him and thought of her own shame when she saw him. She had been living a lie for eighteen years, but her adopted daughter, County Magistrate Li, Mrs. Li, treated her as if she were her own child. She looks soft and weak, but she can indeed poison the magistrate's food. This girl still has a scheming mind. Although his love was not reciprocated, there was still someone who loved him silently and was willing to devote his whole life, including his life, to him. After learning the truth of that year, he didn't even have the courage to wake up. If she knew that there was such a person who silently guarded him, loved him, and was willing to sacrifice for his happiness, would she feel comforted and at least have the hope and motivation to live? At least, there are still people in this world who care about themselves.
I won't talk about Mrs. Li and County Magistrate Li, because many people are talking about them.
Want to talk about the five flavors? This young master is the cutest when he is possessed by the soul-returning incense. It can be said that he fell in love with Shanshan at first sight, so that he would spare no effort to please Shanshan and think about Shanshan, even though Shanshan loved his brother Tianyou wholeheartedly. Master Wuwei, the revolution has not yet succeeded, comrades still need to work hard. I believe that one day, your sister Shanshan will understand your feelings. The seeds of your love will always blossom and bear fruit.
In fact, what I want to talk about the most is the king and the marquis. Maomao's writing is cryptic and very good. Every time I see the interaction between the two, a warm current flows through my heart, giving people a warm feeling. My literary talent is not good and I really don't know how to describe it. Xiaoyu, who likes Wenli, always looks at his young master silently, and likes the king who always smiles happily at Xiaoyu. In the first part of the TV series, the interaction between the king and the marquis is really loving. Chu Tianyou always likes to talk to Xiao Yu with his eyes. The two have a tacit understanding. Xiao Yu knows what to do with just one look from him, and Xiao Yu's concern and protection for the king are all revealed with true feelings.
Among TV drama fan CPs (Danmei), one of my favorites is Lu Hua, and the other one is this one. There are many masters of writing Lu Huawen, but there are really not many good writers of Longyou, especially those of Danmei, and they are even rarer. Therefore, I have been squatting in the cat's pit, waiting for redemption.
There are a lot of verbose words, and I hope Maomao Haihan can't say anything.
Also, there is a question that has not been clearly explained in the article, which is how Zhong Lipei escaped from the prison. He must be a master at picking locks, but how did he break through the many obstacles when soldiers were guarding him outside. He had a strange way of stealing and didn't explain the reason. I wonder if Maomao deliberately left it in suspense.
During the vacation, I finished watching the Longyou trilogy. I really couldn't stand the TV series that had no ending. Forget about the substitutions in the second part. The character of Zhao Yu was directly axed in the third part. I couldn't bear it.
Fortunately, I searched online and found some fanfics to read. But for a guy like me who is super mysophobic, reading the fanfics is really self-destructive... I'll skip any that touch on my point.
I have to say that Cat Girl really struck me as cute. Even though this is a pure novel and I can't see too obvious Xipi, I still like it very much.
Before commenting, let me tell you something about myself. I have high requirements for reading fan fiction. I definitely won't read Nixipi (this is my own hobby = =). I don't like OOC. Once the fan is OOC, it's better to read original works╮(╯▽╰)╭ Don't read the supporting characters who steal the spotlight. Don't read the ones that are illogical and inconsistent. Don't read the article if it lacks IQ. I won't read the plot. I haven't even read The Mary Sue of Mary Sue and so on... So the amount of literature I can read is really pitiful (forgive me for being rude...)
To my eyes, the characters must be close to the original work, that is, the character and characteristics of the characters in the Long You TV series. From this point of view, the author's article is completely in line with my aesthetics and even exceeds my expectations. Cat Girl's grasp of the characters and personality is very precise. Her word choice, action description, and eye analysis can be said to be in place everywhere. Of course, the integrity of an article cannot only rely on the characters, which are just the foundation. The storyline based on this is the flesh and blood on the skeleton. I watched "The Order of Immortality" four times before writing the review. I read this article "The Mistake of the East Wind" again. From these two articles, I can see that Cat Girl's writing is first-class, her writing skills are profound, her thinking is clear, and her logical relationships are clear. The plot of the story is coherent, echoes back and forth, and the story is strong. The foreshadowing is just right. It is very attractive but does not make people feel too deliberate. I want to mention one more thing. Recently, I have also read some other articles. Those articles always give me the feeling that I am watching a popular science film for children... And the stories written by Cat Girl can really be read in one sitting. I wish the article would never end but continue forever. I have read fanfics for many years and there are too few that can make me feel this way. Cat girl, you did it.
I admit that I downloaded the entire article to read it. It can be regarded as a bully... I have dominated Cat Girl's two articles and I am really sorry if I don't write anything about her fascinating article. But I am a lazy + useless person. I wrote a lot but I don't understand what it means. Girl, please forgive me...
If I have a chance, I, a loser like me, would like to try writing something XD
Encouragement with you
Magistrate Li: Eighteen years ago, Li Yuanjie fell in love with a beautiful girl named Zhiyun. He fell in love with her at first sight and was unforgettable. Li Yuanjie fell in love with him at first sight. Is there still a blood relationship? The most difficult thing to let go of is the brother-sister relationship. It was a great joy to be the most beautiful girl in high school, but before I could enjoy this joy, it was downplayed because the person I liked was already the fiancée of my sworn brother. This miss became the most difficult pain in his heart. After drinking, he made a mistake, and one misstep turned into eternal hatred. Because of his wrong love, his brother slipped and fell off a cliff, and his true love died in love. From then on, all he felt in his heart was guilt. One day as an official, one day as a citizen. Over the past eighteen years, he has made outstanding political achievements, but he really only wants to be a small county magistrate in his hometown. Is this to atone for the past or to wait for the return of his sister and mother? What could be more sad and helpless than knowing that the one you love most is your biological sister? I can only say that God's will plays tricks on people. If there is an afterlife, I will just bury this love deeply in my heart, and just wait for the day when the brothers and sisters meet again and recognize each other, and let this love turn into the love between brother and sister, the love for sister. Seeing my sister happy makes me happier.
Mrs. Li: Eighteen years ago, she fell in love with the handsome Tanhua Lang. I thought that in this life, husband and wife would love each other and play the piano and the harp together. Unexpectedly, her husband had another love in his heart. I wanted to slowly seep into his life, and in his heart, he would fall in love with me one day. However, he could never reach the deepest part of his heart. Watching him struggle with guilt and regret every day, I was filled with heartache. If he does not love himself, we will not have the crystallization of love. In exchange for his eighteen years of full love, he "failed the late king, failed the king, and gave a life for a life", but he still had a little bit of love, a little bit of pity, a little bit of heartache, and a little bit of guilt for him. Are we really a joke? Jiuquanxia, can you give me an answer? If there is an afterlife, it would be better not to see it.
Very well written, waiting for Maomao's new articles
It's well written, but it's a pity that I can't read any new books.
Ah, I wonder if I can still squat in a new pit.
Dear author, do you have any other articles?
So pretty! ! ! The author writes so well! !
It's so beautiful and the writing is so good! ! ! Whether it's the characters or the cases (and the proportion of emotional lines), they all have the flavor of the original drama! I love it so much! !
Maomao, new pit, new pit, I'm so eager to see through it
I've been following this article for nearly a year, and I still haven't finished it. If nothing else, let's talk about the love of a few people. Let's talk about Hong Lihu first. He is the most infatuated person in the world. He took the blame for his love rival for the one he loved, which reminded me of Dickens's "A Tale of Two Cities", in which Carton took the blame for his lover's husband for the one he loved, and was beheaded in the end. At that time, I really liked this Caton (that's his name, I guess. If there's any mistake, let's just blame the translation, ^_^). His love was so selfless and great. Hong Lihu also loves selflessly and deeply, but Mao Da doesn't write much about this person, so his personality is not very distinctive and cannot give people a very shocking feeling. In fact, this person should be the person with the most stories. Maomao can also write more about this person, whether it is a positive description or a side description, to make this person truly "alive". In the best chapter, you can describe a little more in the dialogue between Tianyou, Wuwei, and Xiaoyu, so that this person will have a three-dimensional sense and can also arouse the resonance of readers. Talking about Yu Ziqian, he is also an infatuated lover, who disappeared into ashes with a phoenix song, but it is much better than Hong Lihu. At least his feelings were reciprocated, but the love was a little short-lived, but as gorgeous as fireworks. He has the talent of being number one, good at both civil and military affairs, and is familiar with the books of sages, but in the end it is true that he cannot escape the word love. I feel sorry for him when I think about it. I still feel that there are too few descriptions of cats here. Yu Ziqian is gone, the country is missing a beam, the people are missing a good official, and Yulong is missing a capable minister. Isn't Yulong sad? Doesn't Zhao Yu feel sorry? Don't Shanshan feel pity for him? Won't Wuwei express his feelings? At least the cat here didn't touch people's hearts. Such a tragic story ended in just a few words. Not willing, not willing. Falling in love with a romantic woman, he was afraid that the world would stop him, so he stole sycamore branches. In the end, the sycamore tree was destroyed by lightning. Are you warning the world that no matter what kind of person you are, as long as you love, you must love openly and aboveboard. If Yu Ziqian had confessed his feelings to the elders of the clan from the beginning, I think even if they were to obstruct him, his true love would not have fallen in love with someone else's flower boat. Maybe, he can also be happy. Let's talk about Li Xueqing, this girl's life is really rough. His biological mother hated him and thought of her own shame when she saw him. She had been living a lie for eighteen years, but her adopted daughter, County Magistrate Li, Mrs. Li, treated her as if she were her own child. She looks soft and weak, but she can indeed poison the magistrate's food. This girl still has a scheming mind. Although his love was not reciprocated, there was still someone who loved him silently and was willing to devote his whole life, including his life, to him. After learning the truth of that year, he didn't even have the courage to wake up. If she knew that there was such a person who silently guarded him, loved him, and was willing to sacrifice for his happiness, would she feel comforted and at least have the hope and motivation to live? At least, there are still people in this world who care about themselves. I won't talk about Mrs. Li and County Magistrate Li, because many people are talking about them. Want to talk about the five flavors? This young master is the cutest when he is possessed by the soul-returning incense. It can be said that he fell in love with Shanshan at first sight, so that he would spare no effort to please Shanshan and think about Shanshan, even though Shanshan loved his brother Tianyou wholeheartedly. Master Wuwei, the revolution has not yet succeeded, comrades still need to work hard. I believe that one day, your sister Shanshan will understand your feelings. The seeds of your love will always blossom and bear fruit. In fact, what I want to talk about the most is the king and the marquis. Maomao's writing is cryptic and very good. Every time I see the interaction between the two, a warm current flows through my heart, giving people a warm feeling. My literary talent is not good and I really don't know how to describe it. Xiaoyu, who likes Wenli, always looks at his young master silently, and likes the king who always smiles happily at Xiaoyu. In the first part of the TV series, the interaction between the king and the marquis is really loving. Chu Tianyou always likes to talk to Xiao Yu with his eyes. The two have a tacit understanding. Xiao Yu knows what to do with just one look from him, and Xiao Yu's concern and protection for the king are all revealed with true feelings. Among TV drama fan CPs (Danmei), one of my favorites is Lu Hua, and the other one is this one. There are many masters of writing Lu Huawen, but there are really not many good writers of Longyou, especially those of Danmei, and they are even rarer. Therefore, I have been squatting in the cat's pit, waiting for redemption. There are a lot of verbose words, and I hope Maomao Haihan can't say anything. Also, there is a question that has not been clearly explained in the article, which is how Zhong Lipei escaped from the prison. He must be a master at picking locks, but how did he break through the many obstacles when soldiers were guarding him outside. He had a strange way of stealing and didn't explain the reason. I wonder if Maomao deliberately left it in suspense.
During the vacation, I finished watching the Longyou trilogy. I really couldn't stand the TV series that had no ending. Forget about the substitutions in the second part. The character of Zhao Yu was directly axed in the third part. I couldn't bear it. Fortunately, I searched online and found some fanfics to read. But for a guy like me who is super mysophobic, reading the fanfics is really self-destructive... I'll skip any that touch on my point. I have to say that Cat Girl really struck me as cute. Even though this is a pure novel and I can't see too obvious Xipi, I still like it very much. Before commenting, let me tell you something about myself. I have high requirements for reading fan fiction. I definitely won't read Nixipi (this is my own hobby = =). I don't like OOC. Once the fan is OOC, it's better to read original works╮(╯▽╰)╭ Don't read the supporting characters who steal the spotlight. Don't read the ones that are illogical and inconsistent. Don't read the article if it lacks IQ. I won't read the plot. I haven't even read The Mary Sue of Mary Sue and so on... So the amount of literature I can read is really pitiful (forgive me for being rude...) To my eyes, the characters must be close to the original work, that is, the character and characteristics of the characters in the Long You TV series. From this point of view, the author's article is completely in line with my aesthetics and even exceeds my expectations. Cat Girl's grasp of the characters and personality is very precise. Her word choice, action description, and eye analysis can be said to be in place everywhere. Of course, the integrity of an article cannot only rely on the characters, which are just the foundation. The storyline based on this is the flesh and blood on the skeleton. I watched "The Order of Immortality" four times before writing the review. I read this article "The Mistake of the East Wind" again. From these two articles, I can see that Cat Girl's writing is first-class, her writing skills are profound, her thinking is clear, and her logical relationships are clear. The plot of the story is coherent, echoes back and forth, and the story is strong. The foreshadowing is just right. It is very attractive but does not make people feel too deliberate. I want to mention one more thing. Recently, I have also read some other articles. Those articles always give me the feeling that I am watching a popular science film for children... And the stories written by Cat Girl can really be read in one sitting. I wish the article would never end but continue forever. I have read fanfics for many years and there are too few that can make me feel this way. Cat girl, you did it. I admit that I downloaded the entire article to read it. It can be regarded as a bully... I have dominated Cat Girl's two articles and I am really sorry if I don't write anything about her fascinating article. But I am a lazy + useless person. I wrote a lot but I don't understand what it means. Girl, please forgive me... If I have a chance, I, a loser like me, would like to try writing something XD Encouragement with you
Magistrate Li: Eighteen years ago, Li Yuanjie fell in love with a beautiful girl named Zhiyun. He fell in love with her at first sight and was unforgettable. Li Yuanjie fell in love with him at first sight. Is there still a blood relationship? The most difficult thing to let go of is the brother-sister relationship. It was a great joy to be the most beautiful girl in high school, but before I could enjoy this joy, it was downplayed because the person I liked was already the fiancée of my sworn brother. This miss became the most difficult pain in his heart. After drinking, he made a mistake, and one misstep turned into eternal hatred. Because of his wrong love, his brother slipped and fell off a cliff, and his true love died in love. From then on, all he felt in his heart was guilt. One day as an official, one day as a citizen. Over the past eighteen years, he has made outstanding political achievements, but he really only wants to be a small county magistrate in his hometown. Is this to atone for the past or to wait for the return of his sister and mother? What could be more sad and helpless than knowing that the one you love most is your biological sister? I can only say that God's will plays tricks on people. If there is an afterlife, I will just bury this love deeply in my heart, and just wait for the day when the brothers and sisters meet again and recognize each other, and let this love turn into the love between brother and sister, the love for sister. Seeing my sister happy makes me happier. Mrs. Li: Eighteen years ago, she fell in love with the handsome Tanhua Lang. I thought that in this life, husband and wife would love each other and play the piano and the harp together. Unexpectedly, her husband had another love in his heart. I wanted to slowly seep into his life, and in his heart, he would fall in love with me one day. However, he could never reach the deepest part of his heart. Watching him struggle with guilt and regret every day, I was filled with heartache. If he does not love himself, we will not have the crystallization of love. In exchange for his eighteen years of full love, he "failed the late king, failed the king, and gave a life for a life", but he still had a little bit of love, a little bit of pity, a little bit of heartache, and a little bit of guilt for him. Are we really a joke? Jiuquanxia, can you give me an answer? If there is an afterlife, it would be better not to see it.
Very well written, waiting for Maomao's new articles
It's well written, but it's a pity that I can't read any new books.