[Harry Potter] The Golden House

Wonderful article, fairy lady!

Haha?, The heartthrob professor. Fried Chicken likes this setting

\"Are you going to bake yourself and give it to me for breakfast?" This is the professor's counterattack, right?

The first deadly sin: subverting history! By the way, when I clicked into this article, I only saw the first sentence of the text: "The great King Vadermot led the all-conquering Death Eaters to defeat the powerful Order of the Phoenix"? What? What? What? Did I order it wrong? Are these all crazy horses? ? If you tamper with history, you won't be so thorough, okay? Unable to resist the temptation of my rising curiosity, I started this physically and mentally "tortured" reading with a question mark on my forehead. Did your evil purpose of attracting people to the bait be achieved? ! ! The opening chapter is about the magnificent Gaunt Castle, with its mysterious hanging gardens... It felt like I was watching the slow motion of the opening of a movie... It successfully made me stunned for a moment! ! ! The second most deadly sin: murder! King Widmot (this one is really a cheat) married "Lily" who appeared out of nowhere and used it to torture my dear captive professor. The savior of the magic world was tortured to the point of dying, and then let the professor finish it. I tolerated him. All the members of the Order of the Phoenix were collectively persecuted and the professor was forced to be the executioner. I could barely survive it. However, as a member of the Sihe party, I said that my little heart was deeply hurt by the way you killed Minmin! ! ! ! Do you think it's over? No! Then came the death of Father Lu. It was a pity that as a member of the Order of the Phoenix, he did not die heroically in the name of a warrior. The reason for his death was so aggrieved, but he died after having a romantic night with the professor! Ah! Ah! Ah! Insect, your heinous taste! ! ! Are you addicted to torturing people? ! ! What? Do you think it's over? No, a certain insect dragged the professor into the water. The secret keeper of the Order of the Phoenix just gave himself to the Avatar and killed me! ! Lauder, you deserve to die. Why should I pay the penalty to my professor? Is it okay to vomit blood all over the floor? ! ! ! Is it true that my heart is broken into pieces? ! ! ! Tears are streaming down my face! ! ! ! Chong, have you achieved your evil purpose of harming people? ! ! The Third Deadly Sin: Teasing the Reader! God, Merlin can no longer prevent a certain insect from developing its evil taste to a deeper level! I admire a certain insect so much that it makes Laud dream. It turns out that everything is just a dream of Lord, the Minister of Magic who has already married the professor and has a child! The person I married in my dream was a house elf who existed in reality! Isn't it so special? ! ! π_π! ! So all the nonsense in the following article is confusing and blinding, is it possible? ! ! The foursome of Shenma Jiedao forced out the potion genius! ! ! Lord Malod protects his little wife from Death Eaters! ! ! The amazing old Deng is accompanying the professor to collect herbs! ! ! ! The amazing Xiaolong made a mistake on purpose to help connect Lu's father! ! ! The savior of the amazing married woman Lili who kidnapped her was shouting from the side! ! ! Damn it... There's not much left of my old blood vomiting! ! ! To sum up, a certain insect was given to Avada by the Wizengamot! Avada! ! ! ! ! Cough, cough! A certain Lan's convulsions state ends here, and the following is back to normal! I've been liking Chong's writing for so long, and I've wanted to write a review more than once. I didn't know how to do it at first, and now to be honest, I'm a little afraid to write it! I always feel that everything I write is a bit too impractical to serve as a book review. This article made me burst into tears, so I decided to write a long review, so I came up with the bombardment of complaints above (hey, are you writing a review for others? Sweat!) Although the alternate history setting of this article is not novel, it has its own characteristics. Not sticking to the HP plot will give readers a sense of strangeness and freshness, and also provide greater room for expansion of the article. Of course, this is undoubtedly a big challenge for the author. Rather than saying that this is a good fanfic, it is better to say that it is a wonderful novel. I have to admire Chong's ability to control words and the overall grasp of the story. It does not seem to be inconsistent to install a political system on a group of notorious Death Eaters and the Dark Lord. Of course, this is a conclusion based on the gripping plot of this article. Regarding the characters, the HP characters in Chong's novel are not only part of the original work, which is also the key factor for me to say that it is a good novel. For example, the Malfoy family is the Order of the Phoenix, and Pansy is an undercover agent entrusted by Hermione. Since the story has broken out of the HP frame, it is inevitable for the characters to collapse, but whether the collapse is good or not depends on the author. How to not lose the general image of the characters in the original work in a story that is completely different from the HP plot, but also give the characters new and more profound connotations, so that the characters both belong to the original work and are higher than the original work. This really tests the author's writing skills! Personally, I think the character collapse in this article was quite successful. (Excluding extras!!!!) When I was reading, I felt a vague and tragic atmosphere lingering on Harry, Hermione, Draco, Lucius, Snape and other members of the Order of the Phoenix who endured humiliation. Members of the Order of the Phoenix were killed one after another, and the situation became more and more serious. When the three Dracos broke into the Golden House, which led to Snape's suicide, ambushes, and the crash of the Golden House, I believe that all readers will be emotionally overwhelmed at this moment like me! With tears streaming down his face, he burst into tears and screamed, "It's so happy!" In fact, the fact that the storyline can arouse readers' emotions and create resonance among readers is enough to prove that this is a successful novel, isn't it? I am not corrupt, and I don't care whether the CP is successful or not (please don't take photos of Fu Si party members), so in my opinion this article ends here! Regarding the extra chapter, I really want to complain. Originally, this article was a dark drama, but as soon as the extra chapter came out, I was shocked... Pause! I was about to growl again, so I no longer had pneumonia! (By the way, does this count as a long review? Does it count? Does it count? Face covering)

Phew, blood is sprayed all over your face →_→ I've been watching this for so long, and I've been feeling sad for so long As a result, I was told that you were fooled! The sad feeling of falling from high clouds to the ground

I wipe. I'm crying to death. . . The tearful girl really can't afford to be hurt. . How much LV hates LM, even in her dreams she treats him like this, O(∩_∩)O hahaha~. .

Dear friends, can you see the cover using a computer?

Did you do this on purpose? ? ? Not bad

Severus forced to wear a long white dress and veil? ? ? ? ? I'm convinced... But it's not bad. Scatter flowers

All for SS