There is always a flower that blooms at just the right moment, simply to affirm our love.
-- Epigraph for the "Language of Flowers" series
A smiling face in shape, pure gold in color. The golden sunflower is just like sunshine. Its language is "silent love."
Lan Ningzhi's youth, however, was anything but silent. There were noisy classrooms, military training, homework, and the college entrance exam to keep her busy... And there was that boy, playing guitar with a sun-warm smile, singing "Country Road." His repeated lines of "Take me home to the place I belong" drew a silent reply from her heart: "My love will get you home"...
Such was youth, much like yours and mine. There was the awkwardness of "Lan Ningzhi is a coward" and "Yi Han is a bad guy," and the difficulty of "We drifted like duckweed, and only by comforting each other could we put down roots of our own." The familiar school bell and warm smiles were the only things that never changed!
If, like me, you were in your first year of high school in 2005 and loved the Rockets and Tracy McGrady; followed the 2006 World Cup in Germany and Japan, watching Beckham and England; watched Liu Xiang win the Grand Slam in 2007; ate New Year's Eve dinner amid the snow and ice in 2008, witnessed the May 12 earthquake, looked forward to the Beijing Olympics, and heard "Boundless Oceans, Vast Skies" at the Bird's Nest... And now you're rushing around to make a living, head down at work...
Then come on in for a look. Maybe you'll find a little of yourself here. This is a scrapbook of youth. I'm grateful it has carried and recorded my youth!
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The reason why I write a long review is actually because I am too lazy. I couldn't sleep last night, and suddenly I had the urge to read Xiao Han's article, so I took my phone and watched four o'clock in the morning. After reading it, I have some thoughts, and I feel the need to write them down. Everyone knows that it is not easy for authors to write articles, and they are too lazy to follow the article and repost the messy comments from the beginning. So I'll write a long one. As compensation for not leaving a message last night, it's not in vain for Xiao Handi to type so many words.
I appreciate the literary talent of Han Di in the article "Yin". Some of the psychology of the characters, the surrounding environment and the small discussions interspersed are quite in place, and some paragraphs are very exciting. My favorite part is probably the part about the death of Yi Han's mother. There are a few sentences that are really touching. Reading tragic articles sometimes requires the same experience. If readers don't have the same experience and can't get into the drama, it will be difficult to cry for an article. Therefore, my principle is that as long as a piece of writing that has nothing to do with my experience can move my tear ducts, even if it is just one sentence, it is a classic. Chapter Thirteen, just in Chapter Thirteen, a long paragraph, very good, except for the sentence about the bright red flag covering the body, which was a bit shocking. There are also some small paragraphs, discussions and descriptions, which are all beautiful.
I usually write ancient poems, and occasionally write campus essays. Personally, I feel that things around me are often more difficult to deal with. Sometimes when you encounter something, you feel it is very dramatic, but when it is turned into words, especially novels, which require some artistic processing, how to make the story more attractive, authentic, and not like living in life is often more difficult than the ancient sayings that are carefully researched. Writing campus articles basically only needs to be consistent with school life. A school involves nothing more than students and teachers, so how do you deal with the subtle relationships between students and students, teachers and students, and how do you grasp the psychology of students of different ages - the mentality of junior high school students, high school students and college students are completely different. When dealing with these relationships, the author needs to carefully consider, for example, what was your mentality at the time, what was your relationship with your classmates and teachers, even if it is copying the model of idol dramas, with these additions, an article can have its own highlights and not fall into the trap of being conventional.
As an old man who hasn't left high school very long, what I don't quite understand is Teacher Gamma. I think there are differences in students' thinking from generation to generation, but it is not very likely that teachers seem to change. Gama looks like a middle-aged man in his thirties or forties, and according to my observation, everyone in the class teacher at this age is stronger. This is not the early 1980s. As a class teacher, no matter how much attention is paid to grades, face in the class is still important - especially in sports activities. A basketball game held by a school requires all classes to participate. Even if they meet an ordinary science class that is full of basketball elites, they still have to fight hard to save face, not to mention that the opponent is also a liberal arts class. So the only explanation is that he is an old man who is about to retire, and he still has to be a class teacher, so he must be strong, then... Well... The plot requires it, so be it...
Let's talk about Lan Ningzhi's character. Overall, I feel like she is like a boy. She always hangs out among boys and collects a lot of "wives." She usually fights with a group of poor students and teachers, but when things really happen, she is always weak and even needs Jin Che's protection. She is also very soft-tempered and has no independent opinions. Considering the reasons for this kind of personality, I think it may be related to Yinzi's family conditions. She is in poor health and has a poor family background. In fact, she has low self-esteem. But in this case, her usual style should be different from that of those high-ranking disciples. If I deviate from the original text, I might consider Ginzi's family to be like this: 1. Definitely unhappy, lacking love but protecting, maybe single parent or divorced, 2. The family's material conditions are not bad, no one cares about the money, so the whole person is more awesome, and dares to resist the teacher with a group of boys - I will not consider that it is set in the article In this situation, a poor student with poor health who was admitted to high school with high scores from the county below must be strong. She definitely does not have many habits of city children, and Ginzi is not the kind of person who insists on saving face. Therefore, from my personal point of view, the protagonist's character should be reconsidered and slightly changed...
It is good to start the story from the perspective of sports, because in fact, apart from studying, high school students only have so much entertainment, and it is most practical and possible for everyone to build friendships in these places. As mentioned before, I have always liked Xiao Han's writing. It can be seen that his writing skills are sufficient, and his psychological description is also a highlight. However, the author seems a bit confused in the handling of the entire storyline, especially the relationship between the characters and the explanation of the character's background. I often have to ponder for a long time when reading a piece of lyrical or psychological description. For example, at the beginning, the heroine is sick, what kind of illness she has, and she seems to be in pain - just explain it directly. The specific reasons do appear later, but if it is given to impatient readers, it will be lost long ago. Another example is the relationship between Yi Han and Ye Lin. Is the relationship between them good or bad, just friends? I didn't understand such issues until the end. The finale was not bad. The character of Xu Laohu was successfully created. With only a few strokes, it was of great significance and became the most original knot of the entire tragedy.
Let's talk about the issue of Longjiang. I don't know if this place is real, but I can feel from the author's spoken language that Xiaohan may be very close to me now. I have been living in Jiangsu and Zhejiang for more than two years, and I am still familiar with the spoken language here. It is necessary to have local characteristics, but the reason why I want to mention the issue of spoken language is because I think everyone speaks the same way in writing. The regions are the same, but due to the different personalities of each character, the tone of speech must be different. For example, if you say "yes" in the same way, a girl can say "yes", but a boy should say "yes". If you say the first way, you will look rosy - this is just a detail. When I mention the spoken language, I just raise a higher requirement, because this difference is more reflected in the lines. Such words can only be said by Lan Ningzhi, Jin Che can't say it, and those sons can't say anything, and they can only say what their own characters should say. This goal is gradually achieved...
In fact, as mentioned above, Ye Zi is indeed a bit picky and has high standards and strict requirements, and the last point is the most practical - Xiaohan... You can pretend that I didn't say anything about the nonsense mentioned above, but you must listen to this point... Typos... Some may be typing errors, just proofread the manuscript; and occasionally there are a few, such as the "walking in step" - how often do people write this kind of mistake? We have also been taught in military training that "walking in unison" means that you cannot walk casually and everyone must be in order. Walking in goose-step is more formal - "qi" and "zheng" have similar meanings, so when we say "start", it means "start walking", which is wrong.
Finally, give me some encouragement~ I generally appreciate the writing, and Xiao Han is also very good~~ Keep up the good work~~
This article is reproduced from Jinjiang Literature City, original address: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=620600
The reason why I write a long review is actually because I am too lazy. I couldn't sleep last night, and suddenly I had the urge to read Xiao Han's article, so I took my phone and watched four o'clock in the morning. After reading it, I have some thoughts, and I feel the need to write them down. Everyone knows that it is not easy for authors to write articles, and they are too lazy to follow the article and repost the messy comments from the beginning. So I'll write a long one. As compensation for not leaving a message last night, it's not in vain for Xiao Handi to type so many words. I appreciate the literary talent of Han Di in the article "Yin". Some of the psychology of the characters, the surrounding environment and the small discussions interspersed are quite in place, and some paragraphs are very exciting. My favorite part is probably the part about the death of Yi Han's mother. There are a few sentences that are really touching. Reading tragic articles sometimes requires the same experience. If readers don't have the same experience and can't get into the drama, it will be difficult to cry for an article. Therefore, my principle is that as long as a piece of writing that has nothing to do with my experience can move my tear ducts, even if it is just one sentence, it is a classic. Chapter Thirteen, just in Chapter Thirteen, a long paragraph, very good, except for the sentence about the bright red flag covering the body, which was a bit shocking. There are also some small paragraphs, discussions and descriptions, which are all beautiful. I usually write ancient poems, and occasionally write campus essays. Personally, I feel that things around me are often more difficult to deal with. Sometimes when you encounter something, you feel it is very dramatic, but when it is turned into words, especially novels, which require some artistic processing, how to make the story more attractive, authentic, and not like living in life is often more difficult than the ancient sayings that are carefully researched. Writing campus articles basically only needs to be consistent with school life. A school involves nothing more than students and teachers, so how do you deal with the subtle relationships between students and students, teachers and students, and how do you grasp the psychology of students of different ages - the mentality of junior high school students, high school students and college students are completely different. When dealing with these relationships, the author needs to carefully consider, for example, what was your mentality at the time, what was your relationship with your classmates and teachers, even if it is copying the model of idol dramas, with these additions, an article can have its own highlights and not fall into the trap of being conventional. As an old man who hasn't left high school very long, what I don't quite understand is Teacher Gamma. I think there are differences in students' thinking from generation to generation, but it is not very likely that teachers seem to change. Gama looks like a middle-aged man in his thirties or forties, and according to my observation, everyone in the class teacher at this age is stronger. This is not the early 1980s. As a class teacher, no matter how much attention is paid to grades, face in the class is still important - especially in sports activities. A basketball game held by a school requires all classes to participate. Even if they meet an ordinary science class that is full of basketball elites, they still have to fight hard to save face, not to mention that the opponent is also a liberal arts class. So the only explanation is that he is an old man who is about to retire, and he still has to be a class teacher, so he must be strong, then... Well... The plot requires it, so be it... Let's talk about Lan Ningzhi's character. Overall, I feel like she is like a boy. She always hangs out among boys and collects a lot of "wives." She usually fights with a group of poor students and teachers, but when things really happen, she is always weak and even needs Jin Che's protection. She is also very soft-tempered and has no independent opinions. Considering the reasons for this kind of personality, I think it may be related to Yinzi's family conditions. She is in poor health and has a poor family background. In fact, she has low self-esteem. But in this case, her usual style should be different from that of those high-ranking disciples. If I deviate from the original text, I might consider Ginzi's family to be like this: 1. Definitely unhappy, lacking love but protecting, maybe single parent or divorced, 2. The family's material conditions are not bad, no one cares about the money, so the whole person is more awesome, and dares to resist the teacher with a group of boys - I will not consider that it is set in the article In this situation, a poor student with poor health who was admitted to high school with high scores from the county below must be strong. She definitely does not have many habits of city children, and Ginzi is not the kind of person who insists on saving face. Therefore, from my personal point of view, the protagonist's character should be reconsidered and slightly changed... It is good to start the story from the perspective of sports, because in fact, apart from studying, high school students only have so much entertainment, and it is most practical and possible for everyone to build friendships in these places. As mentioned before, I have always liked Xiao Han's writing. It can be seen that his writing skills are sufficient, and his psychological description is also a highlight. However, the author seems a bit confused in the handling of the entire storyline, especially the relationship between the characters and the explanation of the character's background. I often have to ponder for a long time when reading a piece of lyrical or psychological description. For example, at the beginning, the heroine is sick, what kind of illness she has, and she seems to be in pain - just explain it directly. The specific reasons do appear later, but if it is given to impatient readers, it will be lost long ago. Another example is the relationship between Yi Han and Ye Lin. Is the relationship between them good or bad, just friends? I didn't understand such issues until the end. The finale was not bad. The character of Xu Laohu was successfully created. With only a few strokes, it was of great significance and became the most original knot of the entire tragedy. Let's talk about the issue of Longjiang. I don't know if this place is real, but I can feel from the author's spoken language that Xiaohan may be very close to me now. I have been living in Jiangsu and Zhejiang for more than two years, and I am still familiar with the spoken language here. It is necessary to have local characteristics, but the reason why I want to mention the issue of spoken language is because I think everyone speaks the same way in writing. The regions are the same, but due to the different personalities of each character, the tone of speech must be different. For example, if you say "yes" in the same way, a girl can say "yes", but a boy should say "yes". If you say the first way, you will look rosy - this is just a detail. When I mention the spoken language, I just raise a higher requirement, because this difference is more reflected in the lines. Such words can only be said by Lan Ningzhi, Jin Che can't say it, and those sons can't say anything, and they can only say what their own characters should say. This goal is gradually achieved... In fact, as mentioned above, Ye Zi is indeed a bit picky and has high standards and strict requirements, and the last point is the most practical - Xiaohan... You can pretend that I didn't say anything about the nonsense mentioned above, but you must listen to this point... Typos... Some may be typing errors, just proofread the manuscript; and occasionally there are a few, such as the "walking in step" - how often do people write this kind of mistake? We have also been taught in military training that "walking in unison" means that you cannot walk casually and everyone must be in order. Walking in goose-step is more formal - "qi" and "zheng" have similar meanings, so when we say "start", it means "start walking", which is wrong. Finally, give me some encouragement~ I generally appreciate the writing, and Xiao Han is also very good~~ Keep up the good work~~ This article is reproduced from Jinjiang Literature City, original address: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=620600
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