What a Weirdo, Where Are You Running?

… Why do you feel that the subsequent plot changes... Too quickly?

This ending leaves me speechless

It looks great, come on! Download Rampage!

Why is Tea Leaf so lazy lately? Updates are so slow Flower Demon and Lu Ya already have feelings for each other, so when can they confess their feelings?

On the 235th floor, let's take a look at the cover of the article first. It's not worth your life to be so cute. I can't put it down even with cute covers. A small suggestion is that the layout of the article content is not good enough. It is recommended that if there are a lot of dialogues, they should not be crowded together.

Why do we think the heroine is a bit of a noob? Looking forward to the heroine's character...

Here Comes the Fatty. Let's talk about the story of Rabbit. The dialogues are quite rich but lack of other descriptions. Also, Lu Ya talks too much, but on the other hand, it also expresses the character's characteristics. I won't say more. Come on.

It is recommended that the girl add more descriptions of scenes, actions, expressions, etc., Which will make the text richer and fuller~

Come over and give the girl some flowers on a sunny day The girl's writing is getting better and better~ I wish her a happy writing and your collection will increase greatly!

It can be seen that a lot of care has been put into it, the setting is amazing, and the character creation and interaction are also very pleasing, but I always feel that it lacks some features that make people feel moved. . . Maybe it's because the plot hasn't been fully developed yet. Come on, I will continue to pay attention to this article~