If Harry were a girl,
if she were found by □□,
if she had been trained as a professional assassin since childhood,
if this girl were hypocritical, mercenary, and impossible to sway,
then how would the story unfold?
This story isn't disturbing, trashy, melodramatic, or preachy. It leans toward realism (as if Harry Potter fanfiction could ever be realistic, right?!).
Couple: undecided for now. Feel free to make suggestions.
[Tips: The protagonist is dark and selfish. If that's not for you, please don't bash the story. Just click the little red X in the upper right. Thanks for your cooperation.]
This is my first time writing on JJ. I hope you'll be generous with your encouragement and point out my shortcomings. I bow to you all.
It's well written, but it's too thin, and the storyline hasn't been developed yet. How can I comment on it? . . The subject matter is okay, but I don't know if I can grasp the feeling of sex. It's okay if she's not a noob, Mary Sue will be very normal, this is determined by her identity. Has the male lead been decided? I prefer Bryce.
The heroine doesn't have the vigilance of being an eldest daughter. She becomes good friends just by casually chatting with people. She's still a very good friend. It's hard to accept.
The heroine doesn't have the vigilance of a daughter. She becomes a good friend just by chatting with someone casually. She is still a very good friend, which is hard to accept.
Very good, keep it up, I like your style very much
I'm a little confused. Does she know the plot or not?
A moment later: "Is the plot finally about to begin?" Vicky sneered and looked at the dark night sky on the glass skylight.
After a while, he said again: He seems to be a well-born person with a good education. . Vicki thought.
Anyone who knows the plot knows that Mafuor has a good background, right?
I really like the big setting, but it's too thin! Collect them first, and then slaughter them when they are fat~~~, come on! !
In fact, my favorite character is Father L! ! ! Who are you planning to choose as the male lead?
Take in the little dragon! Just choose someone from the same generation as the male lead, but don't be a professor~
Eton is a boys' school
It's well written, but it's too thin, and the storyline hasn't been developed yet. How can I comment on it? . . The subject matter is okay, but I don't know if I can grasp the feeling of sex. It's okay if she's not a noob, Mary Sue will be very normal, this is determined by her identity. Has the male lead been decided? I prefer Bryce.
The heroine doesn't have the vigilance of being an eldest daughter. She becomes good friends just by casually chatting with people. She's still a very good friend. It's hard to accept.
The heroine doesn't have the vigilance of a daughter. She becomes a good friend just by chatting with someone casually. She is still a very good friend, which is hard to accept.
Very good, keep it up, I like your style very much
I'm a little confused. Does she know the plot or not? A moment later: "Is the plot finally about to begin?" Vicky sneered and looked at the dark night sky on the glass skylight. After a while, he said again: He seems to be a well-born person with a good education. . Vicki thought. Anyone who knows the plot knows that Mafuor has a good background, right?
I really like the big setting, but it's too thin! Collect them first, and then slaughter them when they are fat~~~, come on! !
In fact, my favorite character is Father L! ! ! Who are you planning to choose as the male lead?
Take in the little dragon! Just choose someone from the same generation as the male lead, but don't be a professor~
Not bad, come on, author