Tai Cai Is Very Busy

Finally updated!!! Wuwuwu, you are a bad guy and you still haven't explained what happened to Chi Xiaoming. Wuwuwu. Has Nan Zhu ever liked Chi Xiaoming?? Forgive my mysophobic glass heart, oh oh oh

My sweet extra is finally here~ Ah Qiang~ Don't be lazy in the future, I will definitely keep an eye on you, oh hehehe~~

You didn't explain the relationship between Chi Xiaoming and Qin Xiao at all!! How could the male protagonist have such a girlfriend before meeting the female protagonist! Is he really keeping his integrity?? I strongly demand an explanation! Otherwise, I would feel so bad.

Let me go~~Aqiang, where is the extra story you mentioned? Where is the extra story? Damn it! Oh my sweet story! You've earned enough tears and don't care. I won't obey you~~ Change it to the extra story!!!

The inner flow is all over the face, the inner flow is all over the face!!!!! It's finally over. All kinds of expectations for the extra ING, Don't let me down, don't you-w-

GN, I'm from Bishui~ The writing is very good~ It's just the heroine's change of mind that's a bit fast~

Then what!!! The ending is very sweet, but is there a postscript?? For example, after the two meet again

Feeling so resentful

I'm a little confused about a small detail The robber said: "Here comes another one with a handle." And I said: "Qin Xiao, your sister is here!" What's going on with this "again"?

First of all, I read the big book title, Qilin Bucai, which I thought was a bit interesting. Usually I don't know what the title is about, so I usually click on it and take a look. The cover is very simple and clean, the kind I like. The copywriting is very interesting and basically reflects the personality of the hero and heroine. After looking at the attributes of CP, the sultry male protagonist is definitely cute to me! When I opened the first chapter, I felt a little regretful that I don't like first-person writing very much, because the first-person writing always gives me the feeling that writing in the first person tends to be too fake and artificial. Therefore, I read the article with trepidation. When I saw the first sentence, I felt that the large writing style was okay. At least the first sentence did not give me a fake feeling. I just want to give a small suggestion. The sentences should not be too long. It is okay to separate them with commas appropriately. Sentences that are too long will be tiring to read. The first person pronoun of "Da Da" is used very well. At least I, a person who is quite uncomfortable with the first person pronoun, did not feel any discomfort because of Da Da's writing. Finally, I wish your writing will get better and better!