Reborn: The Idle Life of the Legitimate Daughter

At first, it was because Yanei knew the author, and then I watched Da Da Romance, and I felt that the style was very different. The plot of Da Da Danmei was really great, and the emotions in Da Da Romance were very natural, and I loved it all!

After reading it, I feel, hmmmm, I have been greatly encouraged. My wife is writing so well now, and there is also some dark history.

To be honest, my favorite in this article is Min Zhong, I dare to love and hate! It feels like Min Zhan's presence can be ignored, it's too dull! If I were Mingzhuang, I would choose Minzhong. Everything in the past life is different from this life, so why bother to stick to the past life!

I skipped to read part of it, and it showed that I started writing it in April 2012, and it should be my wife's debut novel posted on jj. Well... How should I put it, I can really feel my wife's progress in the past ten years. Thank you, madam, you really inspired me. I haven't finished reading this article, and I really can't stand it anymore. I feel that every character in it is not lovable, and every family is a crazy family, and no one can escape... I am really confused, why there are no highlights for all the characters, the heroine and her family, From the bastard father to the bastard eldest brother to the bastard concubine, the sisters, except for the little lackeys who have no idea, are "sisters looking forward to each other's death". I think the heroine's mother is no different from Mrs. Qin next door. They are all traditional "mother-in-laws" who sit firmly in the high hall. In the male protagonist's family, the father is selfish and tyrannical, the mother is cold and mean, the eldest brother is soft, the eldest sister-in-law is cunning, the second child is as stupid as a piece of wood, let alone the third child, there is no such thing as moral character, these two families are scheming and scheming, it's all guilt. The idea of the Zhaiyin Division is rubbish. Today you are plotting against me for thousands of taels. Tomorrow you will find out my father's will and use the goddess to play tricks on you... If you call them all evil, they are not that bad. If you call them good, I feel like these people are as annoying as flies. It's so easy for you to find a male protagonist who is willing to leave this miserable place and work hard as an official outside. He can't take care of his wife at home, and there is nothing outstanding about being an official outside. In the later period, it felt like it was all an imposed cheat. His ability to survive to the end and become the first and second-in-command was all due to the author's tricks. The main character is a combination of circumstances. But fate is good. I really don't understand what fun the heroine would have in living with such a person. She doesn't know how to talk about love, has no twists and turns in her life and works, and relies on tolerance when encountering difficulties. She was bullied by the third child when she was a child. When she grows up and becomes an official, she can set up a scheme to plot the death of the then chief assistant. The only character with some characteristics and arc is Min Zhong. After writing so many plots about him, he was not the male protagonist [dog head] in the end. I can only convince myself that maybe the author just likes this kind of "smart little bad guy" character. After all, whether it is Danmei or romance, there are several books with this kind of character, such as Yu Feng and Mu Jinlin. , Ji Wenye, Li Zhen in Danmei Jinyiwei, and Yu Yang in "Princess Rui" that my wife locked up, all have this tone (don't doubt it, I have almost completed all of Su Yi's articles over the years). In fact, I think the best ones are Li Zhen in "Jinyiwei" and Yu Yang in "Princess Rui". (Oh my god, Princess Rui, you didn't write it anymore [crying], I searched all over the Internet and found only forty-one chapters. I really like Yuyang. Damn my enemy, please unlock it for me and finish it. Wow, oh, oh, oh, oh (sorry, I'm off topic)) In short, I personally think that Mrs. Suyi Dujiang is a contestant in "Character > Writing Style > Plot Logic". What mainly attracts me are the characters, as well as the antique folk tale style "flavor". Plot logic cannot be forced in many cases (hold your forehead). The most outstanding one recently is Yanei around 20 years ago. Once the plot logic is no longer a hindrance, Su Yi's writing will become popular. So, madam (slap on the shoulder), please don't give up on the targeted improvement of plot logic. Believe me, as long as you maintain this frequency of improvement, you will sooner or later become a unique and representative writer of JJ. Come on

--I looked at it in frustration all the way... I can only say that under the protection of the halo, all the handsome, rich, beautiful, powerful, intelligent and wealthy are just paper tigers.

To be honest, I really like Qin Minzhong

It's quite nice, I feel a bit sorry for Min Zhong!

In fact, Min Zhong is a really brilliant person, but if I were the heroine, I wouldn't marry him. He is too unreliable and I don't know when he will be plotted against. But this man's life was quite hard. I hope he will be more open-minded and meet his true lover.

I just want to say: I really regret purchasing the paid chapters at one time!!!! I will definitely not be cheap when I see your works in the future.

After reading it, I felt very powerless, but I thought it was wonderful. Human nature is well portrayed, there is no good guy, but there are a lot of bad guys (the heroine ranks very high =_=). The biggest failure is that there is no distinction between priorities. Regardless of whether readers like Minzhong or not, they have to admit that Minzhong's appearance rate/opponent scenes are 10 times higher than Minzhan's, and for some reason, both Minzhan and Minzhong love the heroine so much? Also, Minzhong and the heroine are a good match in terms of personality (for example, if Xiao An threw the dancing girl into a well, Minzhong would never make a noise and report to the officials like Min Zhan did, and maybe he would teach Xiao An how to behave better). I won't discuss which one is more suitable to be the male protagonist, but I will point out a few things that I don't understand: 1. Why did Lao Qin Zha run away with Min Zhan during the heroine's 100-day banquet? At first, I didn't know that Lao Qin Zha loved Aunt Tao so much, so I thought it was quite reasonable. But later when Lao Qin Zha cried bitterly about his love, he couldn't help but be dumbfounded. At the 100-day banquet, Aunt Tao was already very ill (end-stage renal disease + inability to undergo dialysis... She wouldn't last long at all). With Lao Qin Zha's "deep affection", this couldn't be justified, haha. 2. What was Minzhan thinking when he impeached the chief minister in his previous life? Do you simply want to commit suicide or do you want to "lay it out" like this life? (Personally, I feel that given the emperor's personality, it's not a matter of planning. The emperor wants absolute loyalty from his chief minister, so impeachment of a small official is tantamount to suicide.) How should I put it, Minzhan confessed to the heroine that he wanted to get ahead for the heroine (he felt that the heroine married him for this reason), so he had to work hard to make progress. This reason is quite reasonable in this life, although his methods are extremely inferior. But he never fell in love with the heroine in his previous life. Why was he so desperate? Is it like the heroine said she has a strong personality? That's very funny. Minzhan really doesn't change that much for love, I think. What's more, he was like an idiot in his last life, and in this life, he will make endless calculations and sweat. 3. Why did Min Zhan love Han's ex-wife in his previous life? Normal ancient men, 11 out of 10 would not fall in love with a "bad woman" who lost her virginity before marriage and couldn't wait to get married while she was still in confinement (actually Han's ex-wife is one of the few good people in the book, with a good heart and a good life but a bad life =_= and she is really weak to the point of explosion, as unlucky as Yingchun). Maybe Minzhan deliberately wanted to antagonize the heroine and deliberately brought it up to stimulate the heroine's anger, but Minzhan himself mentioned the ex-wife who lost her virginity (or the first wife), didn't you feel very uncomfortable? Weird. 4. Why did Han's ex-wife marry into the Qin family during her confinement period? I can understand that Han Cuckold must have deliberately framed Han's ex-wife, but I don't understand his actions. A daughter who has lost her virginity marries into the family of her former classmate, and there are two sons in this family who may be officials. What benefits does this arrangement have for Korean cuckolds? You will only find enemies for yourself. Why didn't he wait for Han's ex-wife's confinement to be over before letting an experienced nanny teach his cheap daughter how to pretend to be young and seductive? At least if you hide it the first night, it will be more difficult to return it when you come to Qin's house. (Given the situation of Han's ex-wife, normal people can see that she has had a miscarriage and is in confinement. Who can hold back such a tone? Even if you hold back now, you will find an opportunity to repay Han's cuckoldship in the future, okay?)... I really can't understand it. (In the end, Minzhong only repaid Cousin Han for not having trouble with Han Cuckold, which is also incomprehensible. Although I am not a man, if I were Minzhong, I would go to Han Cuckold first. After all, although Cousin Han made Han's ex-wife lose her virginity and become pregnant, it was Qin Laozha and Han Cuckold who married Han's ex-wife to Minzhong.)