My Zombie Brother

The promised extra story is dead

First of all, pay attention to missing words, word order, and typos. Then, □□feng is very loving, but I just feel that the whole story can be written more vividly. For example, write in the first person "I" or enhance the description of details. In terms of content, the story tends to be simplistic. Many plots are a bit awkward. To put it bluntly, the truth setting is cliche. If there is no evolver, more hints can be given, for example, the sister can understand the zombies (I remember the author has laid a hint that the brother and sister do not understand the language, but it always feels a bit thin). Also, for example, if the "brother" is not the older brother, then you can write about the surprise in their appearance. For example, in the memories, you can write about how handsome and smart the brother is and how ordinary the sister is. Everyone talks about how they can be brother and sister. If you want to create suspense, it would be better to peel off the cocoon bit by bit.

It's just despair... When did the illusion of hope exist?

Oh! Are both my brother and sister infected?

How do I remember that I left a message…"Look at the sky

In fact, I have always wanted to see a clone Zheng Zha

GOOD/W\\ Forgot to leave a message... Just leave it at the end Good night

Ah... I'm sorry, I didn't quite understand it, but it suits my personality very well. Author, why didn't you write this article... On a whim? . . Haha, after reading this article, I always have an impulse. Author, why do you think this is? Haha, author, please continue to work hard. Xiyi supports you very much.

Hug, I'm sorry... Even after you explained it to me, I still feel weird when I read it again... Go ahead and write a horror novel, sincerely... Yeah. I love you, author.

This is purely proof that my brother is an author who is more sunshine than good. Great readers, please don't be fooled by the hacky style of writing.