A note in advance: this is a continuation of Aixi's Prince of Tennis: I Am Echizen Ryoma. Please read the original first. This story is not plagiarized. It does not involve transmigration; it is a novel version of Prince of Tennis, aiming to bring back the excitement of Prince of Tennis. If you don't like the matches, don't read this. If you only like the princes, don't read this. If you don't care about the protagonist, don't read this.
Author: Everyone, would you like to take this chance, with all eyes on us, to say a few words to the protagonist?
Everyone: ...We would...
Author: Then let's have the protagonist speak first and say a few words to everyone. Ryoma, is there anyone here you like?
Ryoma: [Looking] There is...
Fuji: [Smiling with bright blue eyes] Thanks for liking me, Ryoma~
I like you a lot too~~
Atobe: I'm always your first choice, after all~ Hm-hmm~~
Ryoma: [Calmly] Karupin...
Tezuka: [Breaking into a nervous sweat] Echizen, don't joke around.
Atobe: [Narrowing his eyes] Which guy is this Karupin?
Fuji: ...Pfft... Karupin? Like Ryoma, he's very comfortable to cuddle while sleeping~~
Akutsu: [Fierce] Hmph... I'll kill him...
Sanada: (Turns around calmly to look for a sword.) I can't let anyone else take responsibility for him... Absolutely not.
Yukimura: Ryoma... why is your neck red?
Ryoma: He scratched me when we took a bath together today...
Everyone: (They all freeze, some calm and some not.)
Author: And that's that. Do your best, boys. You've still got a long way to go~~
Theme:
You can feel the author's sincerity. There is no need to be someone else's, just write in your own style. You have worked very hard, so don't be too anxious. Essie's front and back preparation is indeed excellent, but there is no need to be another her. Your advantages are also obvious. If it were me, as a newbie, it would be enough to make me proud. Writing and reading are like falling in love. It is indeed difficult to excel if you don't have enough passion or experience, but this cannot be compensated by desperately concentrating on lyrics and thinking of material.
Please continue to work hard. If you can persist in doing this ten years ago, no, five years ago, you will become a leader in this circle.
Never forget your original intention and you will always succeed.
Mutual encouragement.
I went back and read it carefully. In 15 years (according to the ending time), Ai Xi didn't come back to update the article? ! Did Landa see it wrong?
I am also very grateful to Lan Da for writing this article for us to read, which satisfies our anxious mood. Come on (? ??_??)?
After reading Ai Dada's article and then reading your article, the obvious gap is revealed. The relationship develops too fast, the writing is not good, and the content of the article cannot be connected with Ai Dada's article at all. Ryoma went abroad not to compete with Ed but to participate in the All-American. Tezuka's character in the article is also different from Tezuka in Ai Dada's article.
I don't know whether Ai Lan can read it or not, but I want to share my thoughts on this article. I read Ai Xi's article first and then your article. In my opinion, everyone's feelings towards Ryoma in Aisi's novel are hazy, and there is an inexplicable feeling in the brotherhood. After all, they are all still junior high school students and are ignorant of that kind of emotion. In Ai Lan's article, I felt that their relationship developed too fast, which made me feel like they couldn't connect. But apart from the chapters being a bit messy, the writing is still good.
Come on, dear~~~ In fact, your writing is very good, which is also a comfort to us who have been greatly fooled by Ai Xi~~~ And compared to those who write Ryoma like a scumbag, your writing is really good. You have to know that many people are just watching and leaving comments~~or they are waiting for the completion before reading. Girl, hold on! ! ! !
Don't write carelessly, the writing is still very good, keep up the good work.
I fell into another trap QAQ
When I fell into Ai Xi's trap and couldn't get out, this article gave me a certain amount of comfort. Thank you.
Ai Lan's writing is very good, please continue writing, I will always support you^O^^O^
I started reading your articles very early, and I have forgotten whether it was last year or the year before. I was relatively free at that time, and I searched for your name several times a day just to see if your articles had been updated. At that time, I didn't have a mobile phone or a Jinjiang account, so I could only use my computer to read your articles on the web again and again. When I saw this chapter, I actually had the urge to register an account, and of course I did start to register. But I spent half an hour and failed to register successfully. Although I have forgotten the reason why I failed to register successfully, I will never forget my mood at that time! I like the people you write, whether they are Tezuka, Sanada, Ryoma, Atobe, Fuji, Yukimura, Akutsu, or Momojo, Kaido, Kikumaru, Oishi, Kawamura, etc., I like them all. I think your writing has a different kind of charm. The characters in your writing are also so flexible. I often can't help but laugh with the characters in the article while reading them. I want to say that the people in your writing are not unnecessary, and I eagerly hope that they can be resurrected and can lead me to experience their world again. I sincerely hope that I can write another fanfic about Net King and see Ryoma and the others reborn in your writing.
You can feel the author's sincerity. There is no need to be someone else's, just write in your own style. You have worked very hard, so don't be too anxious. Essie's front and back preparation is indeed excellent, but there is no need to be another her. Your advantages are also obvious. If it were me, as a newbie, it would be enough to make me proud. Writing and reading are like falling in love. It is indeed difficult to excel if you don't have enough passion or experience, but this cannot be compensated by desperately concentrating on lyrics and thinking of material. Please continue to work hard. If you can persist in doing this ten years ago, no, five years ago, you will become a leader in this circle. Never forget your original intention and you will always succeed. Mutual encouragement.
I went back and read it carefully. In 15 years (according to the ending time), Ai Xi didn't come back to update the article? ! Did Landa see it wrong? I am also very grateful to Lan Da for writing this article for us to read, which satisfies our anxious mood. Come on (? ??_??)?
After reading Ai Dada's article and then reading your article, the obvious gap is revealed. The relationship develops too fast, the writing is not good, and the content of the article cannot be connected with Ai Dada's article at all. Ryoma went abroad not to compete with Ed but to participate in the All-American. Tezuka's character in the article is also different from Tezuka in Ai Dada's article.
I don't know whether Ai Lan can read it or not, but I want to share my thoughts on this article. I read Ai Xi's article first and then your article. In my opinion, everyone's feelings towards Ryoma in Aisi's novel are hazy, and there is an inexplicable feeling in the brotherhood. After all, they are all still junior high school students and are ignorant of that kind of emotion. In Ai Lan's article, I felt that their relationship developed too fast, which made me feel like they couldn't connect. But apart from the chapters being a bit messy, the writing is still good.
Come on, dear~~~ In fact, your writing is very good, which is also a comfort to us who have been greatly fooled by Ai Xi~~~ And compared to those who write Ryoma like a scumbag, your writing is really good. You have to know that many people are just watching and leaving comments~~or they are waiting for the completion before reading. Girl, hold on! ! ! !
Don't write carelessly, the writing is still very good, keep up the good work.
I fell into another trap QAQ
When I fell into Ai Xi's trap and couldn't get out, this article gave me a certain amount of comfort. Thank you.
Ai Lan's writing is very good, please continue writing, I will always support you^O^^O^
I started reading your articles very early, and I have forgotten whether it was last year or the year before. I was relatively free at that time, and I searched for your name several times a day just to see if your articles had been updated. At that time, I didn't have a mobile phone or a Jinjiang account, so I could only use my computer to read your articles on the web again and again. When I saw this chapter, I actually had the urge to register an account, and of course I did start to register. But I spent half an hour and failed to register successfully. Although I have forgotten the reason why I failed to register successfully, I will never forget my mood at that time! I like the people you write, whether they are Tezuka, Sanada, Ryoma, Atobe, Fuji, Yukimura, Akutsu, or Momojo, Kaido, Kikumaru, Oishi, Kawamura, etc., I like them all. I think your writing has a different kind of charm. The characters in your writing are also so flexible. I often can't help but laugh with the characters in the article while reading them. I want to say that the people in your writing are not unnecessary, and I eagerly hope that they can be resurrected and can lead me to experience their world again. I sincerely hope that I can write another fanfic about Net King and see Ryoma and the others reborn in your writing.