Whose Forever Is It, Anyway?

We are all newbies, thank you for your points just now, because you are the first person to write a review for me, so I feel very warm in my heart (as a newbie, when I see other people commenting on her, no matter whether it is good or bad, my heart is always very warm). So, I will give you some of my thoughts after reading your article. Your article has a good beginning, but it is not immediately attractive and is rather cumbersome. In fact, when I wrote these words for you, I deleted and deleted them again and again, always trying to find the most suitable language without making you think I was being picky. Because I understand that for a novice, he always doesn't know what's wrong with his own writing, because these writings are his favorites, his own children, and he doesn't want others to say anything wrong with them. But I feel that good advice is harsh to the ear and beneficial to action, and good medicine is bitter to the mouth and beneficial to the disease. So I expressed my humble opinion, I hope you won't be offended. If you have any good suggestions, you can also speak out about my writing (especially the shortcomings of the writing).