I, Yu, Will Become an Immortal

Just a little YY... Feng Da has buried several clues and I don't know when they will be filled in. 1. Regarding the devil, I personally feel that it is not Jian Qingqing, but Xuanyuan Xingying. There are several reasons. First, Xuanyuan Xingying is also a woman, and she also had visions when she was born. Zikun sect also went to pick her up, but it was just a step too late; second, Xuanyuan Xingying also wanted to seduce Liu Xi; third, Xuanyuan's previous competition The fourth is that when Lou Ge Dongyi was investigating the case, Feng Da repeatedly said that Jian Qingqing's aura was clear and pure, and even covered up Zhang Chun's evil aura; When Xuanyuanfa attacked Jian, why all the treasures came out, what happened to Lou Ge was never explained, and the Zikun sect should be destroyed by the Zikun sect. Why did Xuanyuan directly attack Jian and what did it have to do with her. In the same way, Jian entered the mortal world, Xuanyuan also entered the mortal world, and was still seriously injured. What happened, what is the connection between Xuanyuan and Jian; in the end, she simply felt that Xuanyuan was a bitch, hiding it deeply. 2. Confess to Lou Ge, Miao Ling had a rough life, was he cured by Lou Ge? Such a good boy 3. I like Dong Yi, Liu He, and Xuan Wei. They are all upright and good young people. I especially like the interaction between Dong Yi and Xuan Wei. Oh, let's get together. 3. Nangong Zui likes and dislikes, and so does his name. Haha, he must have taken Lou Ge away from He Xiyu... I don't know if these will be answered in the next part two. May Feng Da, a good man, repay such a good boy with a good ending?

Damn it... I've been waiting for you to write it for so long, but I haven't updated the second part yet! I can't do it...

It's not very good-looking, and it gives me a sense of déjà vu between Du Xiaoman and Xie Kuangyi. If Lou Ge likes Hua Qiqi, it is really too far-fetched. It is impossible to see what attracts him to Hua Qiqi. Maybe the writing is also vague.

It was so uncomfortable after reading it. The first two-thirds were about the daily life of the sect that did not advance the plot, and the main plot was revealed only in the last third. Long paragraphs of sterile inner descriptions and dialogues are just trying to make up the word count. In the later period, I have been entangled in Liu Xi's past. People have always commented that Liu Xi is a scumbag. He is not a scumbag at all. Everything in the past life was just wishful thinking of Jian Qingqing. The last 20 chapters also emphasize that Lou Ge is not in love with Hua Qiqi. After watching it, I felt really bad all over.

The heroine is really not a writer. Her experience is too complicated, so she thinks a lot. In fact, she is a smart and kind person. In the end, Lou Ge was saved. I didn't understand why Hua Qiqi was so mediocre before, and thought Jian Yansang was more exciting, but looking back, in fact, Jian Yansang's hope in her heart has always been to be such an ordinary girl, and she has always been willing to be ordinary, and she doesn't care about comparison. It's just that the shyness, innocence and persistence in his character continued from the first life to the second life. He is a tragic figure.

I think Xuanyuan's inner demon is jealousy. She saw Lou Ge's true identity and was stimulated again. She was obviously the first in everything, but the best jade refused to choose her.

A 100,000-word love-hate novel should be written for this noisy carrot.

So Nang Nang still didn't escape, right? Dafeng didn't even think about it and couldn't explain what kind of demon she had become, and what bad things she had done with the magic oil. Seeing Shimen saying that it was Master's fault that he shouldn't have rolled her up and Xuanyuan Bi, I really felt sorry for her. Maybe she could spend her life happily by staying with her parents.

It felt like I had read a long contract. It's been foreshadowing for so long, but there's still a lot left unsaid in the end. What is Lou Ge's identity, what is his relationship with Master Liu, and why he doesn't have jade. Also, Nangong's situation was not explained clearly.

I read back the article I read ten years ago and it's still here!