The first clash between a certain guy and a certain girl:
"What's with the attitude? Your whole shoulder board only has half a book title mark on it."
"Orders from above: each company is to pick one person for the vanguard and have them train half a day early so we can see what they're capable of. I think the student in the middle of that middle row will do. Stop looking at the person next to you. I mean you."
The girl wiped away her tears and muttered under her breath, "Oh my god, who said that as long as you don't lead the line or stand in the front or back rows, blending into the middle is safest?"
Their first real clash:
"Why are you so annoying? Stop crying, do you hear me!"
The girl immediately shut up…
Later on:
"Why do you chatter like some little wife? Can you just shut up?"
This time, the guy was dumbfounded!
This is a story about a fake childhood sweetheart and a fake childhood friend awkwardly stumbling their way to a happy ending. It's also a story about a half-baked soldier teasing a supposedly innocent college girl of the new century.
It's very well written, why don't you continue writing it...