
[Katekyo Hitman Reborn Fanfiction] You Are My Prince
(家教同人)你是我的王子
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It's already 2020, so maybe you're already working now. I really like this article. There are very few articles about Bell among tutoring fans, and there are even fewer good ones. I am very grateful to the author for writing this article. I wonder if the author is still writing? If the author sees this comment, if possible, please write some more tutoring fanfics! It doesn't matter if you don't write. Anyway, thank you very much.
Wow… Can't see the picture
Hey hey hey! ! ! For those who are addicted to silver, Kagura's time travel is purely a personal bad taste... But it's really awesome, nearly 100,000 words. Anyway, I can't write dialogue and plot at all~ Thanks to you, I finally got Gintama poisoned. I haven't done any homework these days! ! ! Well, no matter what, let's spread the flowers, the ending will be a big event~^ ^
After everything was over, the prince and princess were happily together in the sound of blessings. Do all fairy tales end like this? After many things, defeating the wizard and those who hindered them, they were finally together... Well, when I first saw the title of this article, I thought of the Grimm's Fairy Tales that I loved to read when I was a child. When you don't understand anything, you just hope to see a happy ending. (Only when the princess recognizes the prince, the prince is the real prince) Isn't this sentence particularly domineering? I saw words like this no less than five times in the article. I prefer to comment on an article from the perspective of the characters. Indeed, the plot will not change much for a fan article. Even the so-called butterfly effect cannot be separated from the fan article. And this article by Lu Ye Yin Yin is also written according to the plot step by step, so Amano Musume's influence is indeed very great! ? Speaking of the position of Balian Yunshou, it seems that a female protagonist can take advantage of it. That big, stupid, heavy and big machine (it seems to be called Mosca? Sorry, I forgot...) Seems to be really not as flexible as one person. What's more, the person who replaced the big machine is a real princess! ? To be honest, I think Lilicia is actually a Su, what kind of gothic aesthetics (uh, I don't know if it was mentioned in the article, I didn't think about it seriously), what attracted the two princes, (I definitely remember this correctly, the two princes Bell and Gil, parentheses, pseudo, really competed with her), and what kind of powerful ability (well, it seems to be an ancestral bracelet. This cannot be blamed on Lilicia, but on her unknown country where the Su dead people do not pay for their lives). These three points can constitute a Mary Sue. But if you look at the copy, you can see that no matter how arrogant and arrogant she is, she is still an ordinary weak woman... (Otherwise, how could she be attacked by Bell...) Speaking of the male protagonist, Bell is actually not cute to me, because generally you have to look at people's eyes. Whether a person is arrogant, restrained, pure or sleazy can be seen from his eyes, and Bell's eyes are indeed not exposed. In the copy, Lu Ye Yin Yin said, "I personally feel that Bell's character traits have been downplayed, that is, Bell is a bit more normal, and sometimes he complains." Personally, I don't think so. Even if there is, it is not obvious. Now this sentence is placed in the copy, which means that there is no silver three hundred taels here. Before the matter is over, the prince and princess will also have a fight... ↑This sentence does not come from any Andersen fairy tale or Grimm fairy tale, but from the mouth of a certain idiot Mei. Well, I think it's not that enemies don't get to know each other if they don't get together. If you put it in this article, it would be really amazing. No matter how romantic a prince and a princess are, they are just two young couples... (Face covering). The article is not long, and I guess the author didn't intend to write a long one. Maybe it's a mid-length ending? Personally, I think the writing is pretty good. Except for the idiotic period dividing line, the article is still interesting. However, the plot and characters are a bit clueless... Maybe... (Face covering). Well, this is a contradiction. I am actually scolding Amano-niang indirectly... Finally, I want to talk about the cover image. Everyone in Jinjiang knows the importance of book covers and copywriting. The copywriting of this article is good and attractive, but I personally don't like the cover... I went shopping at Xuye Palace, a photo station, and found that the column pictures made by that photo shop were really beautiful, but the cover pictures were really lacking, maybe because the store clerks were different. The font is block letters. It would be nice if the word "" was a little more flamboyant or written in official script. Also, the red patch below is a little more abrupt... If it's too much, Ayan's flower shop is okay, but Xuye Palace may not accept it, so I won't advertise to Ayan ORZ (Hey! I wish Lu Ye Yin Yin better and better as she writes! Your articles are really interesting~ Well, actually I like the one about the Forest of Fireflies the best~ above. Light-colored small building | Changpingpu BY A Mei
Savinleti's words... I remember it's from C3 Rubik's Cube Girl, right?
Good looking! Author I love you! ! ! Hey, are you a woman? . . No one has ever said such a perfect, perfect, perfect article. It looks good, looks good, looks good. I support the prince and princess, and keep writing. . . . . Wuwuwuwu, this is it. When you open a new pit, I will take it seriously, unequivocally, give full play to my extreme nature, continue to chatter, do my best, do my best, concentrate, speak loudly, and roar like a lion from the east of the river. . . It seems like something strange has gotten in. . . Come to complain, bah, come to comment, it's well written, I'll leave a long comment! ! ! ! Although NNNNNNNNNNN younger than you, I am very excited after watching it! ! ! It's really extreme! ! ! How great! ! ! Very strong! ! ! That's awesome! ! ! ! Awesome! ! ! ! Push hard! ! It's so beautiful, it's a mess, it's earth-shaking, it's unparalleled, it's unparalleled, it's unparalleled, it's cute, it's cute, there's something wrong, haha, if you write about Squavaro, Hibari Kyouya, etc., Me will definitely come and read it! ! ! ! ! ! ! There are only a few words left, go ahead and write well.",,,,!!!!!! I also want to write!!! Except for a few questions!!!!!! I support you!?!!!! The question mark was typed wrong!!!!!!! Let's start with Squavaro!!!! Tsundere is so cute!!!!!! Look, look, look, look... ------------------I am the gorgeous dividing line Y(^_^)Y in the next paragraph of text--------------------------------------------------------–------------------------------------------------ A certain second-rate girl stayed
Hey, my dear, when will you start the story about the God of Death... By the way, describe our Makoto as tall and majestic~ ^Dis^
Hayato Jokudera, it's the pinyin of sun, right? - [It seems so, I don't know.
Come on~ I hope there will be a good ending
That's it, is it over?>.W<