I would like to offer you one for collection~Sprinkle flowers~Great cheers~
I'm coming to see~
Very good!
The narrative is clean and neat, and the male and female protagonists have quite distinct personalities, but it is too short and leaves a bit of content behind.
I like this story very much and hope you will expand it into a novella
It can even be expanded into a longer chapter in the future
Add more details and people and things
Write the emotional development between the male and female protagonists more clearly
Write this affectionate and tyrannical emperor more fully
The sadomasochism between two people is more abundant
That would be great
Very nice! A little shorter!
I would like to offer you one for collection~Sprinkle flowers~Great cheers~
I'm coming to see~ Very good! The narrative is clean and neat, and the male and female protagonists have quite distinct personalities, but it is too short and leaves a bit of content behind.
I like this story very much and hope you will expand it into a novella It can even be expanded into a longer chapter in the future Add more details and people and things Write the emotional development between the male and female protagonists more clearly Write this affectionate and tyrannical emperor more fully The sadomasochism between two people is more abundant That would be great