
An Extra Story of Being Reborn with You
与你重生之番外
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- Romance
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- Modern Era
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- 14y ago
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After letting go, Qin'er also gained her own happiness. Let me use a famous saying, although I don't know who said it, but the reality is like this, no one comes to you by chance, he will definitely teach you something. Yes, from that horrific prequel, the Qi family taught Qin'er that human nature is inherently evil! Qi Nianfu blamed the death of his wife on the three-year-old Qin'er. I speculated maliciously, not that nothing would happen if he was left to a child, but that Qi Nianfu believed that a three-year-old child had no ability to defend his own unintentional mistakes. Qin'er knew that she was wrong! Then Qi Nianfo's evil thoughts arose - you are a sinner, so don't think about living a good life. If the author didn't use sp themes to write, then I believe Qin'er would be abused even more miserably! He might even be killed before he even reaches the age of 20! Sorry, although there may be many people who admire the relationship between Nian Fo and Qin'er. However, I am indeed someone who wants to offend Qi Nian Fo countless times after watching the prequel. That's not his father's responsibility at all! He has wronged Qin'er countless times and came to make other children happy. This is no longer his responsibility as a father! This is called slow murder! To all children, including Qin'er. Finally it all comes true! That love thing is even more nonsense! You are really angry. I want to ask Qin'er where the anger is coming from! You don't care at all because you think it's none of your business! Only after you die will you know what kind of mental illness love is! And this mental illness made Qi Nianfo pretend to love Qi Yuqian, Qi Liudi, Qi Yucheng, and Qi Ruhua for seventeen years! Why does he love Qi Yu? I don't think we can comment from a normal human perspective: the five-year-old boy lost his mother, and he did not deal with the boy's pain of losing his mother, but kept abusing Qin'er. Instead of teaching Qi Yuqian, the eldest son, to take on the responsibility of his elder brother, he indulged him, making Qi Yuqian a sex-conscious idiot. Because Qi Nianfo himself is an abnormal person, how can we expect him to teach his children in a normal way? This is the pain point of this article: a group of lunatics in a mental hospital baring their teeth and claws in the dark, you will only find them annoying, but among the lunatics there is a normal person who desperately wants to look up and see the sunshine, and you will feel heartbroken for this normal person! I will be angry for this person! Complaints! This is also true. From March 2019 to today, June 2020, I can rest assured that I am unwilling to accept Qin'er! I like the first ending. Some people will complain about Qin'er when watching the prequel. They are mentally ill! You are obviously sick, why didn't you die early and let your whole family be insulted! In fact, I don't think Qin'er is living for her own body. The body tied to the torture bench is arbitrarily manipulated by everyone, which makes her sick, so she doesn't cherish her body very much. But she has always lived for her heart, never letting go of her bottom line and requirements as a human being, and also living for the little warmth from her first love boyfriend Gu Weixuan. Rather than saying that Qin'er is waiting for Qi Nianfo's forgiveness, it is better to say that Qin'er has been waiting for Qi Nianfo's apology! In the end, the attitude of Qi Nianfo and others made her know that these people were not worthy of being her relatives. Didn't she just leave so decisively to illustrate this point? The prequel text has no regrets. Qi Nianfu takes Qin'er's most cherished tin box to plead guilty. This is forcing a mother to choose between herself and her child! Use a child to bully a mother to your heart's content. How capable do you think you are? Qin'er naturally has no regrets when she died for her 'child'. But the climax at the end was precisely Qin'er's revenge. She wanted her death to be valuable and let those who killed her know clearly that she, Qi Shuqin, was not a white lotus flower that could be insulted, but a ruthless person who decided to do it. You don't even know where to hide your face. As mentioned earlier, Qin'er has always lived for her own heart and never lowered her bottom line and requirements as a human being. I think this is not false arrogance, but a kind of open-mindedness and an extremely high self-discipline that is enough to suppress her from turning into a lunatic like Qi Nianfo and others! This is the second most shining thing about Qin'er - extremely high self-discipline. The brightest thing about Qin'er is her responsibility. In the case of the demon ghost, Qin'er was in such a situation at that time and could admit that she was the one who released the ghosts of Bai Mao demon and Xiu Niang. I stopped talking after that, and when I did, I was just angry. But looking at the Qi family, how many people dare to admit their mistakes! The idea of one's own innocence is a family tradition that has been practiced by the Qi family for thousands of years! The fault is always someone else's. Qi Nianfo blames his daughter, never himself. I'm right, it's all your virtue that's wrong. If the son does not teach, it is the father's fault. In his house, the scapegoat was beaten to death! Can you accept him saying that he loves Qin'er! Ai Qin'er makes Qin'er suffer a lot of injustice. To be honest, I don't approve of such sadomasochism. Qi Nianfo is so stingy that he is reluctant to buy a dolphin for Qin'er. Is it fun to stimulate his young daughter who lost her mother? Let's look at Qi Ruhua again. He probably didn't care about Qi Ruhua, otherwise Qi Ruhua would torture the puppet when he was angry. Haha, it later evolved into torturing Qin'er. This is all because Qi Nianfo gave Qi Ruhua and Qi Liudi the opportunity to become perverts. What are these two? After being imprisoned for several times, they thought they were the Queen Mother. The arrogance and arrogance all come from Qin Nianfu's cruel beatings to Qin'er. But they are afraid, afraid that this beating will happen to them. Although this cowardice is human nature, it is undeniable that it comes from Qin Nianfo's brutal beating to Qin'er in the seventeenth year. That's why after Qin'er left, he was afraid that the beating would happen to him, so Qi Liudi became arrogant and could not let himself become the second Qi Shuqin at all costs. As for the torture and soldering iron, this is actually because Qi Liudi and others underestimated Qi Nianfu's love for Qin'er. As for what Qi Liudi said to Dr. Chen, he was actually just shirking his responsibilities and giving Qi Nianfo extra points by the way. His father loved his sister and catered to Qi Nianfo's gray hair. As for whether her father was really hurt or not, Qi Liudi didn't care. What she cared about was her future - she might fall out of favor. She could have solved the knot between Qin'er and her father, but she chose to watch and even secretly harm her. She felt the same way as her father chanting Buddha's name - in order to heal the trauma in her own soul. Qi Nianfo underestimated Qin'er's state of mind - he didn't know there was a kind of person who wouldn't admit guilt even if you beat her to death. In the first ending, Qi Nianfo is lonely. This is only six years later. Qin'er is still 50 years old when Qin'er passes away. In six years, Qi Nianfo is at most 57 years old. This shows that Qi Nianfo has already reached the age of 57. At least the two sons ignored him. As for the Qi family, they could not raise any questions about the demon case, so they could still watch the misery of Qi reciting Buddha's name! All in all, the Qi family has suffered retribution. What's wrong with Qin'er happily having a complete, normal and warm new family relationship? Qi Nianfo should use the remaining time to suffer and atone for his sins. He is the worst person and should be like this. As for the three sons and one nephew, they will also be punished accordingly. The second ending How should I put it, I think it makes the Qi family even more disgusted. Of course, this is unexpected and reasonable. What makes me feel most desolate is the Qi family's attitude towards praying to Buddha together. Qi Shuqin saved the Qi family from danger. What did the Qi family do to the father of a meritorious man? Of course, a large part of this father likes to seek death. But for the father of a meritorious man, why bother to "forget" his two meals a day? Why shamelessly kidnap Qin'er? Qi Yuliang seemed to be righteous and said bluntly: "A person who doesn't love his daughter, a person who doesn't teach his children well, he can be an ordinary person, but how can he be the head of our Qi family?" Then I want to ask, twenty years later, you have just acquiesced in allowing such a scumbag to become the head of your Qi family. When he made a mistake, no one stood up to criticize or admonish him. I think this is because Master Qi has a lot of evidence of the crimes committed by his clan members. They are all looking at the unlucky people who chant Buddha's name together. So, Qin Nian Fo, it is not Qin'er who has been receiving punishment, but you, Qi Nian Fo, has been receiving punishment. If your broken furnace is not inspected and repaired, will your wife die? So Qin'er's mother died not from Qin'er's unintentional mistake, but from your negligence of duty. You are so angry with your parents that God allowed Qin'er to take away your wife through his unintentional mistake. Is this not a warning to you? For seventeen years, you have intensified your brutal beating of your innocent daughter. God has settled this debt on your wife. If you don't repent, the demon case is extremely cruel, and God will take Qin'er away. The remaining children are waving and jumping in front of you with their teeth and claws. You feel like you are going to be mad to death! This is God letting them indirectly take over from Qin'er to punish you. For example, Qi Yucheng is unfilial to you! How could a shining girl like Qin'er stay in Hades forever? She never came back to your house because she gave in to your despicable methods! But for her to fight for the Spirit Hunting Department! Just to leave the madhouse and walk into the sunshine. This can be said to be a great responsibility given by heaven to this people. . . It's not an exaggeration to say that one general can accomplish everything. . . Just because everything in the world arises due to balance, and everything dies due to imbalance. Qin'er's family affection never belonged to the Qi family, so it wasn't her thing. Qin'er's family relationship lies in the future. She has her own home, her husband, her children, and her parents-in-law. Okay, add a gloomy old Mr. Qi. As for the third ending, this may be the author's attempt to comfort the readers, but to be honest, this is the most unacceptable to me among the three endings! Why did Qin'er become so stupid! The bad guys are having fun together! It's better to forget all grudges with a smile than Qin'er being stupid! A clean and sharp turn is the best! In the sequel, we recite Buddha's love together, so much that we want to call him a scumbag at any time! It's so scummy that it feels like a new world has opened up! Do you love your wife? Don't love it! Seventeen years ago, I want to ask if it was your wife who asked you to recite the Buddha's name to beat Qi Shuqin and avenge her, Chu Qingyan! Seventeen years ago, for the sake of power, Qi Yucheng, who participated in digging his mother's grave, was easily let go! Throw away your perverted daughter to protect your eunuch son! That's all you have to do to recite the Buddha's name together! Still blaming this and that! Go to the goddess and sue the Zhan family! Is there a lump on the head? He even boasted that he was disciplining Qin'er! Please don't taint the word 'discipline'! Tell Qin'er that you are disobedient, and I want to reprimand you! Why are you being obedient? Could it be that Qi Ruhua wants to strip Qin'er's face? Qin'er should stretch her face over and let Qi Ruhua scratch her face! The case of the demon! As you say! Qin'er should also thank you for framing me, thank you for extorting a confession through torture, thank you for expelling me from the Qi family, thank you for letting me rise to the top, all the way to the coffin! The most thank you to you is that despite being beaten and scolded for seventeen years, even the meticulous post-sentence care failed to find out the cause of Qin'er's illness. I thank you on her behalf. It was you who saved her step by step. Qi Ruhua is full of lies knowingly. . . Do you have the nerve to say that you approved it in a daze? He looks upright and responsible! If I were Qin'er, I would definitely let the devil who helped Qi Ruhua peel off his skin and lose his hair give you, the head of Qi, one. I won't talk about the rest. It's great to see Qin'er standing in the center of the stage without any problems and retreating from the rapids with a very forward-looking attitude. She has a happy family. Let me be kind enough to say that Qi Nianfo has also suffered a lot. Xiao Gu showed him what his father's responsibility was! Qin'er made him even more regretful and ashamed! Even if you want to die, you will be beaten back! That's it. Qin'er's defense was also shattered. Called 'Dad'. I don't really read abuse articles, but after more than a year, I finally put it down.
Qin'er's character is very complex. Her kindness allows her to be courageous and perseverant in the face of dissatisfaction and injustice. This is vividly demonstrated by Team Leader Qi in the first few chapters of this novel. She was weak and indecisive in some matters at the same time. During those unspeakable dark and bloody seventeen years, the only way she could save herself was to accept the situation and wait for death slowly. There was no struggle or resistance, and there was no immediate liberation from reincarnation. She could only admit her mistakes again and again, even though she was right. After knowing that she was ill, she had always wanted to tell Master Qi, which showed that she still longed for life even in that situation, but every time she wanted to tell her, she always backed down because of her own hesitation and the "just right" "family method". Anyway, it makes people read like the author said that he was sad for his misfortune and angry at him. Of course, this anger is not boredom but out of sympathy, a kind of anxiety. She is also stubborn, or stubbornness has always been the foundation of her character. She must do what she wants to do and never change, often showing a spirit of never regretting even though she almost died. She was unruly and unrestrained, and no one dared or could shake her mind. Qin Nianfo's own desire for power and control may also have made him instinctively disgusted with Qin'er's stubbornness, so what he has done in the past 17 years is to use subjugation, threats and coercion, hot and cold violence to make Qin'er constantly admit her mistakes and apologize, and suffer both physical and mental torture to repeatedly smooth out her natural edges. Her stubbornness magnified her kindness, allowing her to shine in the early stages of the game, changing her previous impression. But after all, it is only in the specific field of handling cases and redressing grievances. At the same time, it also amplifies her weakness. Once Mo Suyou is internalized and solidified as a matter of course by her stubborn heart, she can only resort to self-sacrifice, self-harm, and self-abuse. What she shows to the outside is the ultimate weakness. Just like Qin'er took her inhumane and unreasonable experience as a matter of course to atone for her mother's sins when she was in the Qi family, just like Qin'er initially left the Qi family because she chose to break up with Gu because of her father's pressure and felt that she had hurt him and felt sorry for him (she was still sorry, as if it was a fixed mindset) and chose to go against it, hurt her own heart, and did not face the feelings between the two. This stubborn and magnified weakness has been hurting Qin'er herself. In terms of stubbornness and self-abuse, Qin'er may have inherited Master Qi. Fortunately, Qin'er's kindness means that she will never abuse others for self-satisfaction. Of course, Qin'er's stubbornness also makes her crave affection all the time, including family affection and love. She has always regarded the biscuit box given by her lover as a treasure, and is willing to compromise because of the box in the end. She will also accept who she has been tortured for 17 years as her value to her father and her mother's atonement. When he meets the Qi family again for the first time, he will feel a trace of loss and confusion between fear and resentment. He will also be really willing to talk to his sister, even if he harms her in every possible way, and he will finally forgive the head of Qi and call him back to the original and most natural title. These can no longer be explained by kindness. Originally, I had finished posting my opinions when I wrote this, but suddenly I felt that there must be a source for these characters. Are they innate or acquired? Qin'er may have been the purest jade, but 17 years of tragic experiences could not shake her gentle texture at all, but it was enough to make her riddled with holes and destroy her entire value. But jade in stone can still make judgments. This kind of trembling and fearful life makes Qin'er's kindness buried in the snow, making Qin'er weak and indecisive, and letting her stubbornness continue to amplify her weakness. Qi Nianfo's education is undoubtedly a failure. I saw someone once said that Qin Nianfo's "strict discipline" towards Qin'er actually made Qin'er stand out among the remaining children in the Qi family. At least in this novel, regardless of the real world, Qin'er's kindness is innate, and the unkindness of other children is the result of the abnormal family model of chanting Buddha's name.
"After all, Old Man Qi didn't do anything to make people truly forgive him." - In fact, if Old Man Qi truly regrets, there is one thing he can do to atone for his sins: Go back to the main house of the Qi family and ask for punishment from the current head of the family for two things: one is that he neglected his duties and caused the accident, and the other is that he has been evading responsibility since then. How to punish these two things should be clearly stated in the Qi family rules. If Old Man Qi is willing to make this request in his capacity as the former head, the current head will definitely agree. This was not done to avenge or vent someone's anger, but to warn future generations of the Qi family not to be cowards like him again. This is his only chance to atone for his sins, it depends on whether he is willing to make up his mind.
Why don't you continue writing...
Do you dare to say that this is not the finale? Make another chapter about reunion or An An growing up or something. In short, if you don't update "Peony", then this chapter will continue.
Old Man Qi hurt his daughter so deeply, so it was a happy ending to have such an ending. Maybe time will heal everything in the future and fill the gap in Qin'er's heart. Who knows that Qin'er longs for her father's love so deep in her heart. After all, Old Man Qi has sincerely repented and made up for it with sincerity. I don't hate him as much as the boss of the Zhan family. The boss of the Zhan family and his wife who cheated on him may still consider themselves victims after so many decades, huh! How deep is my resentment towards the Zhan family? I made a lot of complaints over there and then came here to continue making complaints o(╯□╰)o
Regardless of whether Qin'er is relieved or not, it's hard for me to let go. Maybe "The Strings Are Broken" is really sad enough~ It's so sad that it's deeply rooted in people's hearts~ I would like to thank the author for adding this extra chapter. However, readers are left wondering, when will there be a side story about Liu Di becoming a spirit after his death and where does he go from here? When you enter the painting, you don't even have your spirit anymore, so there is nothing to think about :)
Finally saw it here I burst into tears when I read the main story. Now that I have read this extra chapter in one go, you have tricked me into tears again. I really like Qin'er in your writing, but when I think about those 17 years, I can't help but feel heartbroken. It's a pity that Qin Nianfo can't heal this wound no matter what... Finally, dear, please allow me to tell you solemnly that you have deceived us into so many tears. Simei and Shuqin over there must not be unfinished, and Xiao De and An An, I don't mind if you continue writing, really!!!
Applaud. Lan is getting better and better at writing. I like this ending
After all, Qin'er was soft-hearted and shouted out. But I am not willing to do so. Bad people should not have a happy ending.