Transmigrate? Oh... transmigrate...
Transmigrate?!
Transmigration is all the rage. Before the college entrance exams, Li Qi might have welcomed it with open arms. But now she has survived the hellish final year of high school and crossed the narrow bridge of the college entrance exams. She was just about to embrace a wonderful youth, college, and future, and everything else besides. And now she has transmigrated?
Unbearable!
...But all she can do is endure it all over again.
A model student transmigrates into a version of Lin Daiyu. Li Qi grits her teeth, looks up, and smiles.
I hope this Liuli is not an ambitious person
Let me urge you =. =
Finally back for more... Hugs!
Girl. Your updates are too slow. As promised, what about daily updates?
Gu Yunying Hello, Shiyin Dada. I can forge such a fate with Dada in vain. The main reason I was frightened was because of the column where Dada's points replaced the number of words. When Bai Bai plucked up the courage to take on the task of writing 45,000 words, he discovered that the original number of words was 3,000+. I hope you won't scare the little guys in the comment team next time. When deciding on the title of this book "Gu Yunying" and the copywriting, Bai Bai was hesitant. However, supporting newcomers and new articles, and growing together with people who love to write articles, is the original intention of the review group. After reading the article in vain, I am very happy that I did not miss this article. This heroine has a personality that Bai Bai likes, she is smart and considerate. Now let's start a review 1. Title and copywriting Huahua The title and cover of the book add a lot of points to the text and have a more ancient charm. I don't know if Gu Yunying comes from Li Bai's poem "All the birds are flying high, and the lonely cloud is alone." If the ancient style title of JJ's book has its origin, it will actually be very popular with readers. You can also feel the heroine from the title of the book, "From the depths of the clouds, laugh at his drama." Bricks This copy is an absolute failure, it's like an incomplete wedge. I can only understand from it that it is a time-travel story of a high school girl. What kind of time-travel story is it, and where does it travel to? Palace fight? House fight? Or Qingshui Xiaotianwen? Readers have no idea. I want to ask the author if he writes like this. Will you be patient enough to click on it? My suggestion is to change the copywriting as soon as you have time. 2. The plot of the story Huahua This is a story about the pseudo-Red Mansion. Over the years, many people have worshiped Cao Dada. Most pseudo-young people who like literature and art have watched Red Mansions when they were young. Bai Bai's father once said, "To have a son, you must read the Three Kingdoms and Sun Tzu's Art of War. To have a daughter, you must read Dream of Red Mansions." What his father probably meant was that men should know how to calculate and plan, and women should have more charm. I dare to write this fake Red Mansions article, so first of all I give it a free compliment. Writing is not necessarily to surpass the predecessors, but to surpass oneself and realize a certain dream. The character arrangement in this article is very clear, and the direction of the story is well controlled. The huge interpersonal relationships in the Zheng Mansion are reasonably arranged. Bricks 1. There are too many catchphrases and colloquialisms in the article, and there is no detailed revision after writing the article. There are many ""s in a text, so when you look at the text, you will know that the author did not carefully correct his language problems after writing the text. Good writing requires the author himself to practice and cultivate the right way. Chapter 5: Preparing for entering the palace, Zheng Jin's expression became even more uncomfortable: "Second aunt... Is very good to you." "First aunt is also very good to me." Whether it was Qin Shuang who said it or Xiao Zheng said it made Bai Bai a little confused. Chapter 8 Typos: "Just waiting for the descent", this should mean "down marriage"! It is recommended that you read a chapter at least twice every time you finish writing it. 2. The setting of the plot requires careful consideration. For example, in the article, "Of course I am willing to accompany the Empress Dowager... But what should I do with my ancestors? I promised my mother that I would fulfill my filial piety to my ancestors for her... I, I can't promise you, I have already promised my mother first. Besides, my ancestors no longer have my mother, and they can no longer live without me. So, so..." Bai Bai thought that the heroine's answer in this paragraph was inappropriate and did not take the honorable Queen Mother's face into consideration at all. How to refuse requires skill. My suggestion is that the author needs to think about it and read more about how to decline politely in the books of great writers. In addition, for words like mother, it is more appropriate to use the written word "mother" as much as possible. Three characters The heroine Huahua is a girl with modern characteristics of communication and intelligence, and she is not a novice in dealing with worldly affairs. This is very worthy of praise, it is a completely different route taken by Sister Lin. Maybe Sister Lin from the Red Mansion would be more lively and not leave Brother Bao so early. Bricks 1. Qin Shuang's occasional writing is too pretentious. A modern girl in the third year of high school still gets into the arms of her grandmother while talking. It looks very awkward and uncomfortable. 2. The male protagonist is not very clear, although he feels like he is the cousin of the Zheng family. But that's probably why there aren't many words in the article now! In summary, this article is a warm and joyful Qingshui article. In fact, a large number of readers in JJ currently like this very much. Therefore, the author can write with confidence. It is normal for newcomers to write more immaturely. The author is most likely a young and not very scheming girl. There are many things written on Zhaidou that look inadequate and unnatural. Suggestions: 1. Read more works of great masters and learn from their house fighting experience. 2. The paragraphs in the first chapter need to be rearranged. It's such a long article, and it's really tiring for people reading it. It would be best to get a typesetting device or something. 3. It is recommended that each chapter has a word count of 3000+, which is beneficial to the points of the larger article. These are all personal suggestions in vain. You are welcome to discuss them with the author. Finally, I wish that Da Da's article will become more and more popular. I have saved this article in vain and decided to follow it to the end. Please keep updating! Mr. Baizi, Commentary Group of Ink-dyed Thousand Cities
I have always felt that the heroine always seems very alienated from the world. She is a witness to everything but never participates in it. If they participate, they are all in the role of "making peace" or "saying good things". Such an attitude is not good for integrating into this world. But seeing that she had asked the girl to inquire about things, I felt that she had finally taken a proactive stance. Worthy of praise!
Well, not bad, the updates are very positive and worthy of praise!
It's really difficult for Baochuo!
Hello, Shiyin Dada. I can form this fate with Dada in vain. I am mainly frightened by the column where Dada's points are used instead of the number of words. When Bai Bai plucked up the courage to take on the task of writing 45,000 words, he discovered that the original number of words was 3,000+. I hope you won't scare the little guys in the comment team next time. When deciding on the title of this book "Gu Yunying" and the copywriting, Bai Bai was hesitant. However, supporting newcomers and new articles, and growing together with people who love to write articles, is the original intention of the review group. After reading the article in vain, I am very happy that I did not miss this article. This heroine has a personality that Bai Bai likes, she is smart and considerate. Now let's start a review 1. Title and copywriting Huahua The title and cover of the book add a lot of points to the text and have a more ancient charm. I don't know if Gu Yunying comes from Li Bai's poem "All the birds are flying high, and the lonely cloud is alone." If the ancient style title of JJ's book has its origin, it will actually be very popular with readers. You can also feel the heroine from the title of the book, "From the depths of the clouds, laugh at his drama." Bricks This copy is an absolute failure, it's like an incomplete wedge. I can only understand from it that it is a time-travel story of a high school girl. What kind of time-travel story is it, and where does it travel to? Palace fight? House fight? Or Qingshui Xiaotianwen? Readers have no idea. I want to ask the author if he writes like this. Will you be patient enough to click on it? My suggestion is to change the copywriting as soon as you have time. 2. The plot of the story Huahua This is a story about the pseudo-Red Mansion. Over the years, many people have worshiped Cao Dada. Most pseudo-young people who like literature and art have watched Red Mansions when they were young. Bai Bai's father once said, "To have a son, you must read the Three Kingdoms and Sun Tzu's Art of War. To have a daughter, you must read Dream of Red Mansions." What his father probably meant was that men should know how to calculate and plan, and women should have more charm. I dare to write this fake Red Mansions article, so first of all I give it a free compliment. Writing is not necessarily to surpass the predecessors, but to surpass oneself and realize a certain dream. The character arrangement in this article is very clear, and the direction of the story is well controlled. The huge interpersonal relationships in the Zheng Mansion are reasonably arranged. Bricks 1. There are too many catchphrases and colloquialisms in the article, and there is no detailed revision after writing the article. There are many ""s in a text, so when you look at the text, you will know that the author did not carefully correct his language problems after writing the text. Good writing requires the author himself to practice and cultivate the right way. Chapter 5: Preparing for entering the palace, Zheng Jin's expression became even more uncomfortable: "Second aunt... Is very good to you." "First aunt is also very good to me." Whether it was Qin Shuang who said it or Xiao Zheng said it made Bai Bai a little confused. Chapter 8 Typos: "Just waiting for the descent", this should mean "down marriage"! It is recommended that you read a chapter at least twice every time you finish writing it. 2. The setting of the plot requires careful consideration. For example, in the article, "Of course I am willing to accompany the Empress Dowager... But what should I do with my ancestors? I promised my mother that I would fulfill my filial piety to my ancestors for her... I, I can't promise you, I have already promised my mother first. Besides, my ancestors no longer have my mother, and they can no longer live without me. So, so..." Bai Bai thought that the heroine's answer in this paragraph was inappropriate and did not take the honorable Queen Mother's face into consideration at all. How to refuse requires skill. My suggestion is that the author needs to think about it and read more about how to decline politely in the books of great writers. In addition, for words like mother, it is more appropriate to use the written word "mother" as much as possible. Three characters The heroine Huahua is a girl with modern characteristics of communication and intelligence, and she is not a novice in dealing with worldly affairs. This is very worthy of praise, it is a completely different route taken by Sister Lin. Maybe Sister Lin from the Red Mansion would be more lively and not leave Brother Bao so early. Bricks 1. Qin Shuang's occasional writing is too pretentious. A modern girl in the third year of high school still gets into the arms of her grandmother while talking. It looks very awkward and uncomfortable. 2. The male protagonist is not very clear, although he feels like he is the cousin of the Zheng family. But that's probably why there aren't many words in the article now! In summary, this article is a warm and joyful Qingshui article. In fact, a large number of readers in JJ currently like this very much. Therefore, the author can write with confidence. It is normal for newcomers to write more immaturely. The author is most likely a young and not very scheming girl. There are many things written on Zhaidou that look inadequate and unnatural. Suggestions: 1. Read more works of great masters and learn from their house fighting experience. 2. The paragraphs in the first chapter need to be rearranged. It's such a long article, and it's really tiring for people reading it. It would be best to get a typesetting device or something. 3. It is recommended that each chapter has a word count of 3000+, which is beneficial to the points of the larger article. These are all personal suggestions in vain. You are welcome to discuss them with the author. Finally, I wish that Da Da's article will become more and more popular. I have saved this article in vain and decided to follow it to the end. Please keep updating! Mr. Baizi, Commentary Group of Ink-dyed Thousand Cities
The review of "Mo Ran Qian Cheng" has been published. The author please hurry up and get the review.