[Reborn!] Rosemary

I have always been impressed by this article, so I am here to make up for it and write a review today. Because it is a short story, there will definitely be things that cannot be written about. For example, Bai Huahua's several appearances are a bit abrupt. Because there are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers, the author may have written that she became a sex worker in order to show that the girl has always been on the right path in her heart. However, because I support the legalization of the sex industry and seriously resist the humiliation of sex, I can even roughly feel the author's intention. But I can't feel that the characters are full. After all, I think sex work is also a type of technical work, so the comparison and impact are reduced a lot. So much so that when I saw the scene later, I completely forgot that she wanted to maintain "righteousness" and that she felt that she would get what she couldn't ask for, but it would not be the same as it was before. Love breeds hatred (:3▓▒

It's so cruel... It turns out that the girl Piao Bailan was an angel with broken wings in her previous life... The devil and the yandere are so easy to pick...

Hello girl! QQThis is Tanzi's first time writing a long review of a short story. Please forgive me if it's not comprehensive. Well, the list is very short. It took about an hour to read it, but it took me a long time to think about how to write this review. It was said that the review was during the Qingming Festival holiday, but it was delayed for two days. I am very sorry! Q port Q To be honest, when I took the order, I didn't expect that short reviews would be more difficult to write than long reviews. When I actually opened the word document and started coding, I felt like I had nowhere to start. The girl asked for venomous words, but in fact there is no place in the article that can be venomous, so I still use the "setting", "plot" and "characters" of the three essays to analyze this article. 1. Background settings Most of the settings of short stories come from a sudden fragment, or a very simple idea: a sudden inspiration flashes in my mind, and I write it out in one breath while I still remember the feeling. Therefore, most short stories are the product of impulse, and this article is probably the same. The background setting is taken from Bai Lan's battle in Tutoring. It may be a parallel world, or it may be before the original plot takes place (since Li Baoen is not dead yet). Apart from this background and original characters like Bai Lan and Li Baoen, it doesn't seem to have much to do with the original work. So I peeled off these impressions of the original work to see the essence. The setting of this article is that of an undercover heroine. Of course, short fan stories do not need a particularly large structure, nor do they need too many tedious details. A few strokes to outline the outline of the world are enough. 2. Plot and characters Because of its short length, there are not many characters in the article. There are probably only two main characters, the male protagonist and the female protagonist. Li Baoen may barely be considered an important supporting role. There are two time tracks in this article, one is the progression of the heroine's time, and the other is the heroine's memories. The latter is interspersed with the former in a scattered way. The plot is clear at a glance, from Bai Lan's perspective: my childhood sweetheart is an undercover agent who wants to kill me. However, such a simple plot actually contains a lot of content. The heroine's nostalgia and emotion for the past; her two loves for Bai Lan; her uneasiness when taking the medicine... These are just the heroine's one-sided emotions. Bailan gives people a sense of mystery. Appear inexplicably, leave inexplicably, and come back inexplicably. The heroine's view of the hero changes and turns at these three points. From an unknown stranger, to a childhood sweetheart, to an object of love and hatred (fog)... Strictly speaking, the heroine cannot be said to understand Bai Lan's past and present. All the emotions happened in an ignorant and passive manner. The emotions wrapped up in the plot are complex but not complicated, just like spring water gushing out one after another, cold and transparent. And compared to Bai Lan, who doesn't write much but writes mystery throughout the whole text (the imagination space is too big, there are too many Hamlets, and the system cannot filter Q mouth Q), I personally think the heroine is more worthy of analysis. The heroine has a tragic life experience, and her revolutionary friendship with Bai Lan becomes the spiritual pillar of her future life. Even though Bai Lan treated her later and turned the heroine from a fanboy to a fangirl, she fell in love with Bailan again. For what reason did she become an undercover agent, and why did she want to help Vongola get rid of him even though she knew she was in love with Bai Lan? For those children in the orphanage? This reason seems a bit small. ——If "a stack" is used as the quantifier, the overnight fee left by Bai Lan will probably not be small. For world peace? Although the article doesn't have much positive comments about Bai Lan, it doesn't seem like he wants to destroy the world? To repay Li Baoen's love? ——I Zunxin thinks this reason is very... Far-fetched. 3. Summary So, after finishing the whole article, apart from the failure to figure out the motivation of the heroine, I think this is a pretty good article, and it feels like a short story. As for the plot connection that the girl mentioned, I would say that the plot is actually very short, and the connection part is equivalent to a change of perspective... Q mouth Q may be because the review level is not up to par, I don't see any problem, Also: Although there is nothing particularly related to Tutor except for the background, since we are fans, let me mention it - Li Baoen's pet is a memory chameleon, and that thing does not respect lizards... Well, that's pretty much it~ Q mouth Q apologizes again! Sorry for the late order! =w=It's my first time to write a short review and I'm a little nervous. I hope the review will be helpful to the girl. Produced by Chang Ping Pu of Illegal Party by Tan Zi 2013.04.08

I like the ending, it's great >w<

Rabbit, if you don't update this post, I'm going to cry = = There are also villain notes = = One or two cheating endings = =

Suddenly I feel so stressed [cover my face]

The two of us completely delayed the manuscript... [Face full of blood]

Touch you, my sister is dead, so I came to see how you died (wait a minute