A princess whose kingdom was destroyed, a love that withered like blossoms, and a heartbreak that stretched from the highest heavens to the deepest underworld, leaving nothing but an endless emptiness on both sides.
All she wanted was to find someone in this world who would love her sincerely, with no schemes involved. A lifetime was too short. She wanted to stay with him forever.
He said, "Wait for me for twenty-five years. In twenty-five years, I'll come for you."
She replied, "Twenty-five years? That's so long. The cypress trees on my grave will have grown into timber by then."
All she asked for was to be together day after day, to support each other through thick and thin. It turned out the world held so many impossible longings, all destined to remain unfulfilled and dissolve into smoke on the wind.
For her, love seemed separated by layer upon layer of mountains and rivers, or perhaps by several lifetimes...
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I want to say, girl, are you really a college student? Not to mention the writing technique, the article is confusing and confusing, and secondly, your writing style is really... If it were my sister, she would also know that modern symbols like "~" should not appear in ancient style writing. Then there are poems, please don't time travel. It's hard for people to believe that you, girl, are not a primary school student (then you are at least a junior high school student. Girl, I have read an ancient novel written by a 16-year-old kid, and yours... Forget it, I believe everyone will understand even if I don't tell you) I really can't bear it... Please read the cultural courses first and then write.
I am LZ wearing a red flower. I want to say that the author, your personal pronouns are completely confused. Is your article a flashback or a chronological narration? I am confused! And since it is positioned as a serious drama and not a time-travel, please don't use the symbol "~", okay? This is the ancient dialect group, dear. Well…
Sprinkle some flowers This subject matter is rare. Come on, author!
The writing style is still good, and the pre-Qin themes are also pretty good. I don't want to write it yet... But the narrative technique of Dada looks messy, and the names of each chapter have to be renamed... Come on!
I like the copywriting very much. I accepted it.
Like it very much. Touch your head.
Is there some confusion between the era of the poem and the era of the text? It feels a little weird.
Keep touching. The punctuation is still a bit confusing, and the origin of "candied haws" is in the Southern Song Dynasty.
Touch the cool mushroom. The punctuation is a little confused.
I would like to give you a small suggestion. A large article should be written interspersed with memories and the present, right? It feels like it's all in one chapter. One moment I write about the story in my memories, and another now I write about the present. Although there are separators to separate them, the sense of immersion is shallow and makes people feel a little confused. Hope it can be adjusted