[Harry Potter] The Unspeakable

I don't know how to say it. It's been so many years, and you've really made me fall into so many pitfalls. When I read Snake Ancestor, I thought it was a masterpiece among fans. Its macro scale really made me unable to put it down. You said you wanted to rewrite it. Okay, but why did the rewritten version lack the addictive flavor? It's like cooking food alone. When he made it for the first time, he insisted on trying bold innovations, so he moved the kitchen utensils and ingredients in his hands. This was a pot of food that was not yet understood but already exuded an alluring aroma. Just when you were about to continue cooking, you were afraid. You were afraid that the next thing you added would ruin the entire dish, so you thought you no longer knew what ingredients should be put in and what spices should be added. You no longer followed your own feelings, and you began to hesitate, so you dumped the entire pot of food and made a new pot. Back up the ingredients, back up the spices, everything is the same, but you start to stick to the rules, how many grams of ingredients, how many spices, and the new foods you carefully improve and optimize are still those ingredients, but they become conservative and old-fashioned, and there are no longer any unexpected changes in taste. Then you get tired of it, and you think it would be better, so you just leave it there and let it get cold. But you have forgotten one thing, that is, you have given up on this pot of food once a long time ago. What you also gave up was the confidence, the randomness and the momentum when you first created it. What is left now is just an unfinished textbook example. I'm really... Disappointed.

This is my first time leaving a message to Fukasawa. I don't always read fanfics. After I finished 7, I read a lot of Snape's or Snake Yard in the month or two. The "Snake Ancestor" before the reset was the one that left a deep impression on me, and I suddenly wanted to read it again. Recently, I would flip through this on my phone before going to bed. When I opened it on my computer, I suddenly realized that I had already cheated. Strange readers always feel like they have known the author for a long time and suddenly come up to talk about things, but it doesn't matter~ Fukasawa's narrative style is like a mystery novelist narrating his own conspiracy. The author is the god in the story. Knowing everything from the beginning, he has to commit crimes while releasing clues and guiding the detectives to solve the case. Fukasawa is good at devising tricks, but the timing of putting clues is average, which affects the balance of the article. (For playing chess, it's just right~) Perfectionism tendency, in my opinion this is the reason why Fukasawa always digs holes. If you just write the text casually. . . But it's almost the same~laugh~ The name Fukasawa reminds me of Isawa Fukasawa, but the feeling is indeed the same as the story~ Maybe you can't see the message~ Jinjiang doesn't have any reminder or anything~ Best regards, Nat.

Damn, I really like your [Chess Spirit] Get over. You screwed me up so much! Please continue to update

Let me state in advance that I have no ill intentions at all! I have no idea what you are writing about, author... This is the first time in my history that I have doubted my IQ →_→ I feel very irritated and confused while watching this. This is also the first time... Alas! I won't say anything more, I'm sorry, I can only abandon the article. (Hold on to the wall and come out...)

It's so foggy, alas, I'm confused by you. I feel like all the factions are coming on stage. Everyone has their own secrets. The most transparent one so far is Snape! Embarrassed

I thought the professor's action of covering Harry's eyes was very considerate...=////=

Well, Snape wore it too... Harry said that he was a phenomenon... And felt strangely resonant...

It's really beyond recognition. To sum up: 1. The current Arius is the soul piece in Harry's scar in the original book or a certain post-war world. 2. Harry in this life came through the same post-war world, but he is a squib. 3. Because Harry did not kill the soul piece in the previous life, or they lived together for a long time, Aleus became Harry's soul piece in this life. 4. The professor and Arius have shared the secret. It is not clear whether the professor is wearing 5. The main soul of the Dark Lord in this life chose to kill Arius first, so Lily and James survived.

It looks great, it feels like taking off your clothes bit by bit... There has been no update for a week... Ah... What should I do... I'm worried.

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