A thousand years of splendor, a mortal world turned to sorrow.
When youth turns to gray, she looks back and sees that both flowers and people have changed.
Flowers bloom on the other shore, and hearts break.
Cherish the fading fragrance, for it easily turns to pain. Let love and hate both end, and let this life pass by.
While exorcising demons, the Lu family's female exorcist was harmed by mortals and fell through a time-space portal, returning to the beginning of her fate.
Two bonds from past lives, and two men of very different temperaments, accompany her through countless brushes with life and death. One is her mortal enemy; the other loves his kingdom more than he loves her. Where will her heart finally belong?
A cruel twist of fate and a thousand-year-old family curse force her to face the hardest choice of her life. Between the world and the one she loves, what will she choose? And at the end of her fate, will Heaven grant her one last gentle smile?
★~Click to add me to your favorites~★ Favorite this story ★~Click to add me to your favorites~★
Click to follow my author page: A Thought of Splendor
My new project.
Theme:
The characterization is pretty good~~~like it
I saw your post on the forum, so I came to read LZ's post, GOOD GOOD
My first long review, dedicated to the author!
The causes of past lives, thousands of years of resentment or waiting have resulted in encounters and disasters in this life.
Falling into another time and space is the prelude to encounter.
At that time, I saw Bai Yannuo. He was wrapped in a white robe and his silver hair was shawl. He was as elegant as an immortal who had strayed into the mortal world. I think Lu Ling'er was shocked, not by his peerless appearance, but by the demonic aura that filled his body. Yes, he is a monster. But Lu Ling'er is an exorcist. He instinctively kills demons and upholds justice.
But that day, he didn't kill her, and she didn't want to take advantage of him. Opposing identities, this should have been a life-or-death situation, but I don't know when it turned into a situation of silence.
Maybe there is some divine will somewhere.
Later, they helped demons and people, eliminated demons and defended the way, and worked together to prevent Tianlu from destroying the world. There have been so many experiences of living and dying together that the two of them can't tell which time they got together or parted, and their love was deeply rooted.
Love is not cause and effect.
Until later, during the trip to Shushan, the thousand-year reason was revealed. Lu Ling'er misunderstood that Bai Yannuo was obsessed with Lu Suyan, the first generation of the Lu family. I guess she must have been sad and sad in her heart. Maybe she didn't know it at that time. Because of love, she cared, and because she cared, she didn't want to listen to Bai Yannuo's explanation.
Lu Ling'er is a too proud woman. Because she is a Taoist, she cannot be emotional, but after all, she is a human being and a woman, so she covers it up with indifference and builds a thick ice wall around her heart. But even she didn't expect that in another time and space, this wall would be melted bit by bit by a fox...
In fact, I had a premonition. From the moment I saw the title of the novel, the word "sorrow" seemed to foretell the ending of the two people. Deep love cannot be endured but shallow fate, and it cannot withstand the unpredictable nature of the world. In fact, I feel very sorry for Bai Yannuo. I thought that his protection would bring him happiness. Alas, I can only lament that fate has played a role in people.
Compared to Bai Yannuo, Huangfu An's love always felt like he owed something, an indescribable emotion. Perhaps Huangfuan's identity worried me from the beginning. He is a king, and if he is a king, he needs to be in the world. If he is a king, he will inevitably have three palaces and six courtyards. If he is a king, he will have a lot of helplessness. Even if he can be loved by thousands of people, after all, he is not a pair of people.
Maybe this is my stubbornness. I always feel that Lu Ling'er deserves better.
As for the ending, I would say it was unexpected, but after careful consideration, I found it to be reasonable. I just feel sorry for Lu Ling'er, for Bai Yannuo, and for the people and monsters in the story. All things have feelings, but it's a pity that the world is unkind.
I can only sigh in vain, but the love is deep and the relationship is shallow, and the world is full of sorrow.
The author's writing style is fluent, the writing seems to be at your fingertips, and the characters are full of emotions, which I think is very rare. The plot is laid out step by step and just right. It can be seen that the author writes very seriously;
However, I have some humble opinions, so please forgive me for any offence!
1. The layout is a bit messy. If more blank lines are used, it will look cleaner;
2. The plot jumps a bit quickly, but it also seems compact and consistent. It is just a family story. If it is wrong, the author please ignore it.
3. The action descriptions are a bit cumbersome, especially the long fighting scenes, which are a bit difficult to read. Let's see if they can be streamlined as much as possible. Leonard has a golden saying: "I always try to remove content that readers will skip." Write it here to encourage us.
The author's writing skills are very good and I look forward to more of your works!
Stop here.
I saw too many familiar things, and the writing style is good. It writes about fairy tales and fantasy. The most important thing is to establish your own world view. It is okay to borrow from it in moderation, but I see that there is nothing new now. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I've finished reading it~ What can I say, the writing is good~~ I just feel that the pace of the whole story is too fast and not detailed enough~~
Moreover, in the end, it was very unexpected that a man who I didn't think was the protagonist got together with the heroine~~Although I have no love for Huangfu or the person named Bai~~especially Huangfu who is the emperor~~I don't like it, I don't like it~~
Then there is the heroine. This heroine is very individual and aloof, but she falls in love with her in the end. . . I was thinking that she ended up with a fake lover, and how she felt about the lover she lived with~~ I think Lin Yingxiao put on the cloak of Bai and truly loved her, and what she loved might be warmth. . .
Hmm, I don't know if this is the right way to understand it. In short, the writing style of this article is absolutely positive and the overall quality is good~~
PS: We still like long-form fantasy fairy tales~~Writing more stories will make it richer~~Haha
Hmm~~There is a big section in the middle which is best to repair and divide into lower sections. It makes your eyes uncomfortable
Written in the first person. . . I won't do this, but I have to be sure about Yu'er's writing style. I like it~~
PS: Feel free to follow the friend chain and support each other~ The pen name is the name of the message~
Why, after writing so much, not many people commented or liked it?
Make a mark and I'll make up points for you later! ~~
I also don't understand why after he said so much, I can still listen without killing him.
This sentence made me couldn't help but giggle. Ha ha ha ha
Very well written, I like it~~
The characterization is pretty good~~~like it I saw your post on the forum, so I came to read LZ's post, GOOD GOOD
My first long review, dedicated to the author! The causes of past lives, thousands of years of resentment or waiting have resulted in encounters and disasters in this life. Falling into another time and space is the prelude to encounter. At that time, I saw Bai Yannuo. He was wrapped in a white robe and his silver hair was shawl. He was as elegant as an immortal who had strayed into the mortal world. I think Lu Ling'er was shocked, not by his peerless appearance, but by the demonic aura that filled his body. Yes, he is a monster. But Lu Ling'er is an exorcist. He instinctively kills demons and upholds justice. But that day, he didn't kill her, and she didn't want to take advantage of him. Opposing identities, this should have been a life-or-death situation, but I don't know when it turned into a situation of silence. Maybe there is some divine will somewhere. Later, they helped demons and people, eliminated demons and defended the way, and worked together to prevent Tianlu from destroying the world. There have been so many experiences of living and dying together that the two of them can't tell which time they got together or parted, and their love was deeply rooted. Love is not cause and effect. Until later, during the trip to Shushan, the thousand-year reason was revealed. Lu Ling'er misunderstood that Bai Yannuo was obsessed with Lu Suyan, the first generation of the Lu family. I guess she must have been sad and sad in her heart. Maybe she didn't know it at that time. Because of love, she cared, and because she cared, she didn't want to listen to Bai Yannuo's explanation. Lu Ling'er is a too proud woman. Because she is a Taoist, she cannot be emotional, but after all, she is a human being and a woman, so she covers it up with indifference and builds a thick ice wall around her heart. But even she didn't expect that in another time and space, this wall would be melted bit by bit by a fox... In fact, I had a premonition. From the moment I saw the title of the novel, the word "sorrow" seemed to foretell the ending of the two people. Deep love cannot be endured but shallow fate, and it cannot withstand the unpredictable nature of the world. In fact, I feel very sorry for Bai Yannuo. I thought that his protection would bring him happiness. Alas, I can only lament that fate has played a role in people. Compared to Bai Yannuo, Huangfu An's love always felt like he owed something, an indescribable emotion. Perhaps Huangfuan's identity worried me from the beginning. He is a king, and if he is a king, he needs to be in the world. If he is a king, he will inevitably have three palaces and six courtyards. If he is a king, he will have a lot of helplessness. Even if he can be loved by thousands of people, after all, he is not a pair of people. Maybe this is my stubbornness. I always feel that Lu Ling'er deserves better. As for the ending, I would say it was unexpected, but after careful consideration, I found it to be reasonable. I just feel sorry for Lu Ling'er, for Bai Yannuo, and for the people and monsters in the story. All things have feelings, but it's a pity that the world is unkind. I can only sigh in vain, but the love is deep and the relationship is shallow, and the world is full of sorrow. The author's writing style is fluent, the writing seems to be at your fingertips, and the characters are full of emotions, which I think is very rare. The plot is laid out step by step and just right. It can be seen that the author writes very seriously; However, I have some humble opinions, so please forgive me for any offence! 1. The layout is a bit messy. If more blank lines are used, it will look cleaner; 2. The plot jumps a bit quickly, but it also seems compact and consistent. It is just a family story. If it is wrong, the author please ignore it. 3. The action descriptions are a bit cumbersome, especially the long fighting scenes, which are a bit difficult to read. Let's see if they can be streamlined as much as possible. Leonard has a golden saying: "I always try to remove content that readers will skip." Write it here to encourage us. The author's writing skills are very good and I look forward to more of your works!
Stop here. I saw too many familiar things, and the writing style is good. It writes about fairy tales and fantasy. The most important thing is to establish your own world view. It is okay to borrow from it in moderation, but I see that there is nothing new now. I hope the author will continue to work hard.
I've finished reading it~ What can I say, the writing is good~~ I just feel that the pace of the whole story is too fast and not detailed enough~~ Moreover, in the end, it was very unexpected that a man who I didn't think was the protagonist got together with the heroine~~Although I have no love for Huangfu or the person named Bai~~especially Huangfu who is the emperor~~I don't like it, I don't like it~~ Then there is the heroine. This heroine is very individual and aloof, but she falls in love with her in the end. . . I was thinking that she ended up with a fake lover, and how she felt about the lover she lived with~~ I think Lin Yingxiao put on the cloak of Bai and truly loved her, and what she loved might be warmth. . . Hmm, I don't know if this is the right way to understand it. In short, the writing style of this article is absolutely positive and the overall quality is good~~ PS: We still like long-form fantasy fairy tales~~Writing more stories will make it richer~~Haha
Hmm~~There is a big section in the middle which is best to repair and divide into lower sections. It makes your eyes uncomfortable
Written in the first person. . . I won't do this, but I have to be sure about Yu'er's writing style. I like it~~ PS: Feel free to follow the friend chain and support each other~ The pen name is the name of the message~
Why, after writing so much, not many people commented or liked it?
Make a mark and I'll make up points for you later! ~~
I also don't understand why after he said so much, I can still listen without killing him. This sentence made me couldn't help but giggle. Ha ha ha ha