Saint Seiya fan, sweet article. It tells the story of how the indifferent Camus and Milo cleared up their misunderstanding and became immortal. Ps: Binghe here is a troublesome third party/
Intention:
Reader comments
"Du Yuanyuan spits it out. Fortunately it's not a banana peel, otherwise I would have walked far away if I kicked it down."
'Girl, what's going on with your stupidity? '
Why is my smile so low? ?
Lord Yaoyao~~
Chapter 1: You just pulled me into the drama, and you didn't do it this way~~
No one will tell you that I am in the drama~~~
Review of "Hunter: I Come from Infinite Horror" - Power supply: Naijizi
Hello, this is Chicken_(:з∠)_ (System prompt: I am the world's best fresh mode has been turned on)
To be honest, my favorite is the list of hunters hhhhh. I have also written articles about hunters, so I accepted your list quite smoothly (thumbs up
When I clicked on your article and started reading it, although I don't particularly like to comment on other people's copywriting or layout, I really think that your paragraphs should be divided... Especially when I saw the first chapter, I was stunned because it was the first time I saw such a long paragraph. Maybe computer readers find the article okay, but readers who read the article on mobile phones may have a bit of a hard time, but the paragraphs after Xiaonian are better!
By the way, I find it very difficult to read your article QUQ. Don't get me wrong. It's not that I can't read your article. It's because I don't know why. I can't even open your article. I can only click on the chapter through the Baidu book title. So I can't see your copy at all and I don't know who the hero is at the beginning. And after reading a few chapters, I can't click QUQ. But when I read other people's articles, everything is normal (I burst into tears.
>33<), but as a newcomer, you still have a lot of room for improvement (oh no, I would say that my writing is also terrible. I am such a scumbag, and I still comment on others like this. Is it really a man?
④Writing fan fiction has very high requirements for character restoration. Here, Xiaonian, your character restoration is pretty good. At least I don't think the readers will be confused. (I would say that writing about hunters is still a failure all the way to the end. QUQ.)
⑤Although the setting is very novel, I heard that it is more popular now to complain about the heroine. Although the cool heroine is also very good, but occasionally adding some elements to make her more cute will definitely make her more charming, because Xiaonian, your heroine feels a bit in line with the kind of romance novels... (I haven't read romance novels for many years. Xiaonian, you can think of this as a fart =v=
⑥I suddenly want to hook up with you. If Xiaonian plans to develop in Jinjiang for a long time, please be sure to be friends with Jiji! Because Jiji also likes to write strange settings! (It's dirty!
——From the "Nine Songs" long comment shop [Naijizi Commentary]
Li Er is about to give up, but aren't they in love now?
"Du Yuanyuan spits it out. Fortunately it's not a banana peel, otherwise I would have walked far away if I kicked it down." 'Girl, what's going on with your stupidity? ' Why is my smile so low? ? Lord Yaoyao~~ Chapter 1: You just pulled me into the drama, and you didn't do it this way~~ No one will tell you that I am in the drama~~~
Review of "Hunter: I Come from Infinite Horror" - Power supply: Naijizi Hello, this is Chicken_(:з∠)_ (System prompt: I am the world's best fresh mode has been turned on) To be honest, my favorite is the list of hunters hhhhh. I have also written articles about hunters, so I accepted your list quite smoothly (thumbs up When I clicked on your article and started reading it, although I don't particularly like to comment on other people's copywriting or layout, I really think that your paragraphs should be divided... Especially when I saw the first chapter, I was stunned because it was the first time I saw such a long paragraph. Maybe computer readers find the article okay, but readers who read the article on mobile phones may have a bit of a hard time, but the paragraphs after Xiaonian are better! By the way, I find it very difficult to read your article QUQ. Don't get me wrong. It's not that I can't read your article. It's because I don't know why. I can't even open your article. I can only click on the chapter through the Baidu book title. So I can't see your copy at all and I don't know who the hero is at the beginning. And after reading a few chapters, I can't click QUQ. But when I read other people's articles, everything is normal (I burst into tears. >33<), but as a newcomer, you still have a lot of room for improvement (oh no, I would say that my writing is also terrible. I am such a scumbag, and I still comment on others like this. Is it really a man? ④Writing fan fiction has very high requirements for character restoration. Here, Xiaonian, your character restoration is pretty good. At least I don't think the readers will be confused. (I would say that writing about hunters is still a failure all the way to the end. QUQ.) ⑤Although the setting is very novel, I heard that it is more popular now to complain about the heroine. Although the cool heroine is also very good, but occasionally adding some elements to make her more cute will definitely make her more charming, because Xiaonian, your heroine feels a bit in line with the kind of romance novels... (I haven't read romance novels for many years. Xiaonian, you can think of this as a fart =v= ⑥I suddenly want to hook up with you. If Xiaonian plans to develop in Jinjiang for a long time, please be sure to be friends with Jiji! Because Jiji also likes to write strange settings! (It's dirty! ——From the "Nine Songs" long comment shop [Naijizi Commentary]
Li Er is about to give up, but aren't they in love now?