A Sleeveful of Lingering Regret, A Palace Haunted by Lost Souls (A Frozen Flower Fanfiction)

Some thoughts: This article is quite good. The characters and the plot are all ups and downs, and the characters have very distinct personalities. For example, Wang Qi, the queen, and even Li Zhenyun, Hai Lan, the little princess, etc. Are all quite prominent, leaving a deep impression on people, allowing them to feel their love and hatred. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist Hong Lin always feels underdeveloped and unreal. Others love him and give everything to him, but there is no corresponding response from him. This kind of response does not necessarily require intense emotional leakage, but Hong Lin is always indifferent. I have never seen him give anything, and I have never seen him comment on people and things. He has been pushed away by others and has no autonomy. This person is not independent in this article. We can remember Wang Qi's love for him. It was a love that shook the world and made us cry. He gave everything without regrets. After seeing this, Hong Lun immediately realized: "What a national teacher, now he is just an insignificant sesame seed." We can also remember Li Zhenyun, his piano, Hailan's perverted love before he was even there, the queen's boldness and cruelty, and even Li Chenggui's concern for his sister, his anger towards Hong Lin, and what he did, all are so profound and real. But only Hong Lin, the only thing he remembered was the chapter "Monster", in which he asked questions in front of the ministers without being humble or arrogant. At that moment, "it also made everyone see clearly the so-called 'monster'. For the first time, those who were familiar with him and those who were not familiar with him faced this person for the first time." "I really don't remember anything else he did or said. He didn't show any special expression of love to other people. I didn't see anyone he loved or hated anyone. No matter what others did because of him, he seemed to be a bystander and it didn't seem to have anything to do with him. I know that he may love her very much in his heart, but there are no scenes or details to support it. In the end, Wang Qi arranged for him to leave, and he really left calmly. And then... No more. As the absolute leading actor, I always feel that Hong Lin's image is not created enough. In front of so many other vivid protagonists and supporting characters, Hong Lin really needs to be revised! It's a family thing, so don't take it personally!

I saw Frost Flower Shop a long time ago, and I was particularly annoyed by the queen at that time.

The article is written in an atmospheric way and the plot has twists and turns, but the emotions are not written delicately enough, and there is no rebirth. It feels like another story.

I finished reading Frost Flower Shop yesterday and came back to read this article that I have collected for a long time. After reading more than 20 chapters, I was a little disappointed, so I went straight to the ending. What exactly did Hong Lin's rebirth change? Everything that should be kept and shouldn't be left is gone.

Why are things that are not bg classified in the fan romance category?

Ah? That's it?

After thinking about it, it is more likely that Chen Tongyi came to the rescue. After all, he is a member of the Chinese nation, haha Hong Lin's casual help when he was in trouble and downturn seemed to Hong Lin to be a small effort, but to the other party, it might be a small favor. If you think too much, go to bed first and wait patiently for the next chapter.

Ah, seeing the critical moment, Hong Lin was still very up to date, I liked it very much, and I was sweating for them. How do I get through this? Could it be Park Seung-ki? Or those two women? Can't think of it In fact, I still admire Seung Gi very much. He is a very capable and responsible person. This person is actually not simple. Of course, he also has his shortcomings and selfishness. It is a pity that there is not much description and analysis of him in this article. I just studied a brief history of Wang Qi's era and found that many of the events in this article are quite consistent with history, such as the Red Scarf Army's attack on the capital, and Xin Min's short-lived appearance, which happened to be in the first year, and was highly valued by Wang Qi, leading to a tragic ending. I really liked it so much that I couldn't help but talk nonsense again. Why was what I said in the afternoon blocked?

I came across this article by accident and liked it very much It is indeed a romance novel. Everything has feelings, regardless of gender. I have always liked the story of Shuanghua. I was heartbroken when I saw such a tragic ending. Everyone was like moths to the flame in this tragic story and gave everything they had. Wang Qi, here referred to as Wang Zhuan, as the last monarch, suffered from internal and external troubles, he was also very talented. Regardless of history, he loved the person he loved with everything he had here. Maybe there was something wrong with the way, which was related to his identity and special love object, but his love itself cannot be denied. The queen, a beautiful, dignified and generous woman, spent ten years in a foreign country guarding a husband who didn't love her at all. One can imagine her suffering. Later, she fell in love with Hong Lin, had a child with him, and became a love rival with her former husband. In fact, all she wanted was a family, a husband who loved her, and children together. Hong Lin is a very gentle person. This article also mentioned more than once that Hong Lin is a gentle person, whether he treats his superiors or subordinates. He didn't want to hurt anyone. I firmly believe that he has feelings, deep feelings, for the king and the queen, and his responsibility to them. He was thus painfully caught between the couple. Maybe no matter what happens to either of them, he will fight with his life, not to mention they have a child in common. It's just that between him and the king, it was an open secret that everyone knew and had no choice but to be able to openly enjoy the eyes and disdain of the world. However, between him and the queen, there was a palace scandal that must never be revealed. The love between three people is so entangled. There is Li Chenggui in this, and I know the ending will be tragic, with the country and family destroyed. I just hope that no matter what the final outcome is, they will not deny their efforts and their lifelong love. It's a family story, just say whatever you want, the author continues!

We are reaching the critical point, why didn't the author update it?