[Song of the Insects] Illusory Dreams

By the way, this is my first time seeing a fanfic of Song of Insects. . Ahem, but I have always read novels, not comics or animations~

Why is it that after raising such a rescue, it still doesn't gain weight [losing face]

I personally like this novel. The main reason is probably the calm narrative method and the heroine's character. From this aspect, there is nothing faulty about this article. The plot is very good and does not fall into clichés. Every time there is a plot that I did not expect. However, since the author asked me to write about the shortcomings, I won't talk too much about the advantages, but this is really an excellent article. [PS: The following suggestions are not very coherent. They are purely based on what I think of. Please don't mind w. 1: The narrative of the article is too bland. Although there are ups and downs in the plot, I didn't feel the impact of the plot when I was watching it. For example, when Ayanokouji Gen and Tokusaki conflicted for the first time, I vaguely pulled it away... Only in the next chapter did I realize that it was the key point, so I pulled it back and watched it again... |||| Due to my incompetence, I can't make any good suggestions in this regard. The only adjective I can think of is "falling rocks from the peak" as Mrs. Wei once said, which can probably describe this feeling of "sudden and unprepared". Please do your best, author! 2: Since I haven't read Song of the Insect, I really didn't understand the background of the story at first…. If the author wants more people who have never read Song of Insects to read this article, I suggest adding a wedge at the front to briefly describe the background, such as "In XXXX, the insect possessor appeared, in XXXX, the special ring was established..." Etc., For reference only. 3: As the author once said, the more the story goes, the heroine's growth line becomes less and less obvious... In the beginning, there will be emotions like "she just wants to be a good student in the eyes of everyone." Later, when the heroine and Niwa Qi are together, the psychological changes should be quite big. If the transformation of the heroine is the main line, then I suggest that this aspect can be strengthened in the description. 4: The description of other supporting characters is not vivid enough. After all, the heroine still has an inner monologue, and the other supporting characters feel like they are just props to advance the plot... For example, Shiraki Sukeichi's brother, he should also be a very complicated character [? ] Person, but so far I have not focused on describing his psychology, past, etc. I hope that while promoting the plot, we can also pay attention to the characterization of the characters? After all, I think an article is successful only if the characters are flesh and blood. 5: It's still a matter of plot…. The author attaches great importance to the development of the main plot, but the side plots are a bit weak. Chong Yu is a little better, the special ring side is completely hidden... In recent chapters, only Shiraki Shinichi has appeared. Regardless of whether Ayanokouji Gen was taken away by Mushiha or she went with Niwa Qi, there is no way that the top management of Tohuan would not react. Chong Yu and Te Huan are both important supporting characters [? , I think the effect will be better if it is driven by two lines? ... It's gone for the time being, because the number of words is still too small, and the plot has only just developed a little, so I can't write more... So let's talk about my personal feelings ^^ My current favorite is probably Shiraki Sukeichi, because I always like people with iceberg faces and dark underbelly. I originally thought he had feelings for Ayanokouji, but his behavior after Ayanokouji became Kitagawa really surprised me... I hope Brother Bai Mu can be more effective in future plots. I have automatically considered Shiraki Sukeichi and Ayanokouji Gen as official couples. If this article can continue to develop emotional drama in the future... Miss Ayanokouji is really ill-fated, which shows that being the protagonist also comes with a price. Be careful with Niwa Qi^^. Come on girl, I hope the author is a real mother, whether it is the ending or the update speed... Above. I finally finished sorting out this long and incomprehensible review. It's okay if the author girl accepts it, just don't dislike me. Liu'an.

I'm a little confused ||||, and I'm very poor at sorting out the plot, so I probably won't be able to finish the review I promised today because of my time problem, but I've already finished it. This is a student party. I will give a review tomorrow at the earliest and next weekend at the latest. The author girl believes me!

-Kou-Isn't this dead? ? ? ! ! Or is it just killing a personality? ! ! After talking about it for so long, I'm still as thin as ever. This article

Review of "[Insect Song] Illusive Dreams" - A Song of Dreams The author's sister didn't designate me, but it seemed that no one else in the shop had read Song of Insects except me, so this important responsibility fell on my shoulders. In fact, I was quite surprised when I first received it. I didn't expect that there would be fans of Song of Insects. Because I have watched it for a long time, what I still remember is the story of the parasitic children fighting for their dreams. I vaguely remember that the ending of the animated version was not very happy. [Guo Gong couldn't be more handsome (hiding his face) The first chapter is extremely serious, looking forward to the senior's back being devoured and dreaming of turning into an insect and dying - this gave the protagonist a big impact. But regarding this kind of problem that ordinary people can't understand... Is Huan too calm? It can be seen that the author describes the small scenes very smoothly, and the psychological activities, dialogues, and actions are all appropriate, but it is still lacking in terms of the novel. The author needs to work hard on how to connect the small scenes together instead of showing them one by one like a storyboard. The author has great skills in writing, dialogue, and small scene construction. However, judging from the first few chapters, the character of the protagonist is not enough. Is Gen Ayanokouji too calm, indifferent, cold-blooded, or has another hidden agenda? This question becomes more prominent after the accident at home. I think it's really unreasonable to have this kind of reaction after such a big thing happened to my family. But it's made very clear later on, and the heroine's character is unexpectedly special and likeable based on the many novels I've read. Although the protagonist has some psychological activities, most of them are just thoughts about events, and his personality is not outstanding enough (I still can't figure out what the protagonist is thinking after reading many chapters). I feel that the author was greatly influenced by novels and comics, but this narrative method is actually not very suitable for novels. It is not very convenient for readers to read. As for the characters that the author asked for suggestions, I personally think dual personalities are very lovable and interesting, but this premise must not be confusing. The frequency of the characters appearing in the author's article can be described as dazzling, which makes the plot rich but puts a great test on the reader's memory_(:3)∠)_ In terms of plot, I initially felt that it developed too fast, and the overwhelming number of characters and events appeared too hastily. It would be better if there was better foreshadowing. As far as the plot at the beginning is concerned, it will give people a violent feeling of "What is going on? Who is this person? Damn, what is going on?"... The whole article gives people a very serious feeling (actually it is very serious TUT), but if the plot is serious from beginning to end, the reader's heart will still be very tight and tired, and the ups and downs of the plot will be lost. In fact, plot analysis is not my strong point, so I can only give some suggestions. Maybe the author can refer to American TV series? After a climactic event or scene requires a calm transition and relaxation, it is better to loosen and tighten it, and it can better highlight the parts that need to be described. The plot seems rather fragmented and confusing due to the author's technique. The storyboard technique has its pros and cons, but I hope it can connect the states of each character in a scene. The plot so far has basically been a routine where a XX character appears and then finds out that he XX for the sake of XX... It is better to capture the main plot in a timely manner to promote the plot, and other fragmentary branch plots can be described less. By the way, I really like the various settings of this article=u=Although the emotional line is completely small and invisible (Hey), I hope it can still be unfolded_(:3)∠)_(But I like to catch birds ) The author's writing style is very good, the narrative is very smooth, and for a fan, he carefully researched the original setting, which is worthy of praise. The huge number of characters and organizational relationships in the original "Insect Song" is really destructive if you really look at it. I hope the author can grasp the direction of the plot well. ——If they work hard for their dreams, I believe that one day they will see happiness and realize their wishes. The so-called worm-possessed people are just people struggling in this floating world for survival and dreams. P. S Because there are very few people who have read Song of Insects, the author can introduce some settings of the original work in the author's remarks, such as the positions of insect feathers, special rings, etc., So that readers who have not read the original work will be less confused. By Black Spot ° Changping Pu Store clerk: Aki

Wait!! Is that junior an assimilation type!?? The adultization of separate and special types is not like this 0.0 Ugh... I don't know much about assimilation-type adult transformation either.

The riddle guessers are the most annoying

Schizophrenia? Possessed? Being hypnotized?

Is Ayanokouji Yume a tsundere? . Isn't Grace supposed to have [chest muscles, chest muscles, chest muscles]? If the essence of QAQ is not revealed, it will be like a new guy without glasses!