The Barbarian Beauty and the General

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There is an obvious problem with the rhythm of the fight. Generally, not many readers are willing to watch such an obviously lengthy fight patiently, not to mention the majority of female readers in Jinjiang. Although there are "Tomb Robber Notes" and "Ghost Blowing the Lamp" that are better than others, they are originally adventure-themed and have a very good sense of suspense. In this regard, ordinary authors are probably far behind in storytelling skills. The writing seems to be... Not very mature. IMHO, lack of talent. Another very important thing is that the subject matter is too cold. Whether it's on a website or a physical book. It is difficult to become popular online, and there seems to be no market for physical books. If I had to write about ancient style, it would probably only be about Mary Sue or something like that. Many authors seem to look down on Mary Sues (don't get me wrong, little bear, I'm not implying you.), But there are very few Mary Sues who can write well, and the author's writing and storytelling skills are also very demanding. For example, "The Princess" and Yu Zheng's N popular costume beauty dramas. After reading too much, I really feel that Mary Sue is still the king in the romance market for women. In the final analysis, the books that female readers love to read are nothing more than romance + gore. There seems to be a post about eight languages ​​​​on Bishui. Xiao Xiong can check it out when he has time. It is said that Taiwanese language is vulgar, and many authors look down upon it. But if you really want to write a bloody romance story in Taiwanese and make money, it may not be something that just any author can do. I think that post is actually pretty good. It's just a joke, and it's probably the taste of many readers in the market. This does not mean that writing must be in the direction of Taiwanese language, at least this is a market direction. On the N website, there are still a large number of readers who love to read about princes and concubines. Of course, maybe Jinjiang is not included. If you can't lead the market, learn to adapt to the market. I have no idea what the most popular ancient themes are in Jinjiang now. Little Bear can find out, if you make up your mind to only hang out in Jinjiang. Ignoring the market and insisting on writing only what I want to write... Such an author is actually very admirable. But if things go on like this, the coldness becomes unbearable. I have also written cold articles before, and I have a deep understanding of the cold feeling. In fact, having said all that, I still want to advise Xiao Xiong, if you can switch to modern literature, you should switch to modern times. At least it is said that if it is written according to the direction of the market, the chances of publishing a physical book will be much greater. Subject matter such as ancient sayings is probably only suitable for mixed-net articles now. But now Jinjiang... Well, I don't know much about it anyway, and I can't say anything about Jinjiang's style. I wonder what books Little Bear usually reads? As for writing, let's read more classic literature. However, I think the biggest problem with Little Bear is not the writing. The biggest problem is that he still doesn't know how to tell a story, he doesn't grasp the rhythm well, he's not very good at telling stories, and the climax is not very prominent. After overcoming the magic of writing and plot, and then understanding the market, and writing in line with the market, it will definitely not be what it is now. Personal recommendation, in terms of writing, is definitely "Dream of Red Mansions" NUMBER. Needless to say, there are four great classics; the Ming and Qing script "Sanyan Erpai" is full of market flavor; and there is also "Lao Can's Travels", at least the text is very comfortable to read. There is also Liang Shiqiu of the Republic of China. Everyone from Mr. Han to professional editors have strongly recommended his prose. If nothing else, just read the Chinese text. The so-called "those who are close to vermilion are red". Tang poetry, Song lyrics, Chinese Yuefu poetry are amazing. If you can understand them, read more and find the feeling of the words. Speaking of the rhythm of the story, I suggest Little Bear watch more commercial movies with high box office when he has time, especially Hollywood blockbusters. If nothing else, at least it will be commercially successful. The rhythm and structure of storytelling in other movies are great! Originally, I had no sleep at night and came to leave some comments on Xiaoxiong's article. As a result, the more I talked about it, the more I commented on my growth. Don't ask me who I am, I can only say that I was once an author in Jinjiang, and I think I have a certain fate with Little Bear. I found that Little Bear still persisted, but the subject matter was not popular and it was really thankless. So... Without realizing it, I wrote a long review. If writing is purely for self-entertainment, then what I say is all nonsense; If you want more readers to read it, learn to understand the market and adapt to the market. Personally, I think the market judges heroes based on their achievements, and it doesn't matter whether they are high or low in subject matter or direction.

I really want to ask how the heroine was positioned at the beginning? Murder and robbery? Um... Wouldn't it be a bit cruel?

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