You Are No Fox

Read and send flowers~ XDLaughing Bird~

. Did I see the ghost of Cheng Changli? = =Is this a tragedy? The article is very well written, but it's a pity that I came late. . Embarrassed

Well, it starts well and makes you want to read on. Receive it and spread the flowers~~

The large text is very well written, the descriptions are spot on, and you can see that a lot of care was taken. But it would be better to pay more attention to the characterization of the characters. When I have free time (power + speech), let me talk about the writing of the article in detail, Antarctic Animals: The three dances will keep the soul.

Receive article Receive article Geshu Ye Geshu Emperor, the name has a Western European feel, just like the names of foreign kings~ The suggestions are: When a character is angry, how does he get angry and what is his expression? Make the characters come alive.

Sprinkle a flower, come on, adults~

Already scattered and collected, may follow

It's better to leave a paragraph blank and on one line. It's just a suggestion. The heroine didn't show up, it's already the third chapter

Well, let me make a few comments. It's my personal reading habit, but the author's line spacing is too small. Generally, readers will be very tired when reading articles like this. I'm used to reading articles with a very comfortable layout, so my eyes feel a little uncomfortable. PS: It was a little slow to catch on, because of the copywriting, and then I was attracted in, and then in the second chapter, the heroine? The fox demon is out, and we can still look forward to the heroine coming out in the next chapter, O(∩_∩)O haha~ I'll be sad if I don't come out

It's a very graphic article, but the name is a bit hard to pronounce. The author ignored it because I'm lazy.