Logging In for the Last Time

It's very short, but I couldn't help but feel overwhelmed after reading it. I really like the author's writing style.

I really like this, the depressive writing style and the story-telling attack

I think it's just dependence and habit, or possessiveness, but it has nothing to do with liking. Just not bad

I like the tone of this article, and I can't help but think of my own dreams while reading it. Wu Heng said that he would only talk about his dreams with people who are not close to him. I wondered if I was like this, and then I found out that I would talk about it with those close friends. I thought that I would not regret it if I said it, and it would be embarrassing if it was not realized...

When I was reading the previous chapter, I thought that this article had an eleventh chapter.

The game I played back then was Free Fantasy. Pharmacist I always feel sad that those days will never come again. That's the only online game I've ever played (laughs)

When I read Chapter 10... The ending is pretty good. I want everyone to talk about Chapter 11 with embarrassment, I smiled vaguely when I saw it.

I went for it, the whole article was slightly sad, and the result...

Is this material for imagination, or is it the main text, or is it an open ending~ (FYI: I hate open endings, especially when it comes to open-ended questions such as whether Gou likes Shou, or whether Shou likes Gou)

Dear, let me write you a long review for the first time in my life. To sum up my feelings in one sentence, it is progress. Although you have followed your usual light style, if you use it well, it can become a characteristic of one party. I think this article has improved, not in terms of plot, but the jokes are old jokes, but your writing has obviously become smoother. The most powerful evidence is that the phenomenon of repeated words is basically gone. To say it is basic means that there are still some residues, such as the "light helplessness between the eyebrows", but maybe you want to arrange for it to appear repeatedly to emphasize it, I don't know. The second thing is that a lot of this article is a reflection of your heart, right? Including the attitude towards classmates, own evaluation, the structure of ideal type, the dark side of the heart, painting, IELTS, Singapore. Anyway, I think this is very good. The best way to collect books is to use books to collect books. In the same way, it shows in the text that it is generally smooth and true, and close to reality. There is no need to give examples one by one. I will leave my third analysis here. The third point is: basically every chapter has some highlights. To put it bluntly, it's a good sentence and a good paragraph. I think this is the biggest progress. In order to show that I have read it carefully, I will list for you what I think are the highlights: Chapter 1: You are a fucking scumbag and you blame others for looking down on you? Chapter 2: Thinking about it now, from that time on, I didn't like the image of anonymity being too beautiful. Beautiful things are usually illusory and can only be watched by everyone. It is not easy for anyone to protect them if they get them. This is especially true for people. . Chapter 3: What bothers me the most is people saying "work hard" or "come on" to me. Some people pity the sparrows who do not know the ambitions of the swans, saying that they will never be able to see the wider sky in their lifetime. But I think it's because the swans don't understand the powerlessness of the sparrows. Let the weak have illusions and let them fill the gap between reality and dreams with their blood. It is a huge dam that cannot be repaired until all the blood is shed. . Chapter 4: When I walked out of the Internet cafe, the sunshine was not warm enough. I just felt that the sky was full of dust. This earthy yellow air seemed to be a barrier between me and anonymity, or between me and most people in the world. . They bravely walked ahead in the yellow sand, but I fell into a pit because I was afraid of really seeing through the reality. In other words, I don't know what I want to do. I escaped the prison of rules, but fell into the net of freedom. Chapter 6: Regarding dreams, it is best to talk to "friends" who are neither close nor distant. Because there is no need to worry about competition, no need to worry about ridicule, no need to worry about being witnessed - they will be left behind one day. . Chapter 7: Dots of street lamps stretch under the mountains, and the mountains accompany us in silence. (Reminds me of Goethe's poem) We wander through youth like this. . Chapter 8: It seems like this has always been the case between us, and it's up to him to remind me that it's time to go. . Chapter 9: But I just stood there expressionless, watching the girl sobbing softly. One after another, weak and sad. . It's like some voice in my heart that has never come out. . Then I am not satisfied with it. Personally, I think the ending of be is better, because the two of them are more suitable for a distance and not suitable for a relationship that is too tight like love. Don't ask me why, it's just a feeling. Secondly, I think anonymity is not good, it is really bland - -, "I" is portrayed quite well. The third thing is the plot, which is too thin. The logic could be more rigorous. That is to say, if you take out the Danmei part, this article will not be valid. My dear, you can expand the clues in the future. When you write an article that is not just Danmei, you should also become a great master. Okay, the above is just nonsense. I'm going to have a late night snack.