I saw your post on the forum. In fact, I am also a newbie, but my situation may be a little better than yours. (Let me tell you quietly, if you only want points and not readers, you can teach your sisters to help me give a point or two.) In fact, your writing style is not bad in my opinion, but your article is in the wrong place. . . Jinjiang has a group of sisters ranging in age from 17 to 40 lurking all year round. They have relatively high requirements for literature, and this kind of youth literature is a bit different. . . Well, personal opinion. Anyway, come on, there is a post on the forum called "Newcomer, why are your articles so cold?" Go and have a look, maybe you can find the answer there~~~~~~~~ (The kind-hearted person floats away...)
I saw your post on the forum. In fact, I am also a newbie, but my situation may be a little better than yours. (Let me tell you quietly, if you only want points and not readers, you can teach your sisters to help me give a point or two.) In fact, your writing style is not bad in my opinion, but your article is in the wrong place. . . Jinjiang has a group of sisters ranging in age from 17 to 40 lurking all year round. They have relatively high requirements for literature, and this kind of youth literature is a bit different. . . Well, personal opinion. Anyway, come on, there is a post on the forum called "Newcomer, why are your articles so cold?" Go and have a look, maybe you can find the answer there~~~~~~~~ (The kind-hearted person floats away...)
No matter how you see it, you like it!
I am the sofa, haha.