Lin Xian'er of The Sentimental Swordsman

I like this ending very much, as the article says—— It's a pity that they fell in love too early It's a pity that Ah Fei was still too young at the time The long-lasting love can best withstand the test of time Xiaojing's ending is more realistic, natural and heartwarming

Sorry, I refuse to watch Xiao Fei's ending. I don't believe there are two choices in life. You can't have your cake and eat it too. Let me only think that one ending is more perfect. And I hate putting someone as pure as Xiao Fei in the background.

I have always felt that your writing style and detailed descriptions are fine, but there is indeed a problem with the outline setting. If you are writing a fan novel, in this kind of atmosphere, the plot of emotional entanglement and abuse will basically lose a lot of readers. Just let the BOSS torture the protagonist to promote emotional development. The acceptance of mutual abuse is really not high, at least not in fan fiction. If you still want to write a fanfic, take a look at the settings of those popular books. I believe your writing style is not good at grasping the plot. I wish Nao will make great progress in the future.

Although I know that this is just an ending, when people in the group chat about what they are most afraid of in a novel, the answer is that if the male protagonist is changed in the middle, he will give up. He is even worse than a Mary Sue. But be careful, many people really can't accept it, especially when the good male protagonist turns into a scumbag inexplicably because of the replacement.

I think Ah Fei is a scumbag. If Xian'er doesn't go to him, he will just forget about it. What's there to miss about this kind of man?

... I cried while watching Bastard again... I cried again when I saw Ah Fei recalling the past... What's going on with me recently? T_T Oh. Xian'er and Xiaojing are living a very relaxed and happy life. It's so gratifying to see... Let's move forward decisively!

I think this ending is very good. . Ignore what's behind

Xiaoqi, I haven't seen Nai for three days.

Why? When I think about the boat scene of Strange Smoothie Lee, I get a sense of horror.

Sprinkle flowers. . . Looking up