Reborn in the Age of Mecha

In fact, this article may be more suitable to be labeled as a drama. The battles and plots are very attractive. Although the ending is a bit hasty in the later stage, the big boss died after fighting side by side with the protagonist, and there is no description of the rehabilitation process. It may not be very satisfying, but the reality is like this. No matter what grievance you suffer, you can't be slapped in the face accurately, so it's okay. But the love scenes are really few and frustrating. Shou is always waiting, and gong is always hesitant and not decisive. In the last extra chapter, Colonel An is really aggressive. I think the lack of counterattack is simply because the author is forcing the point of force value (laughs).

Whenever I am in a literary drought, I come back to review some of my most beloved collections of articles. Among them, Cinnabar Big One, People Returning at Night in the City (Danmei), Jade Beauty in Love, and Yanran (Romance), whether hearty or tactful, all allow me to enjoy a wonderful reading time. Salute! Due to personal preference, I pay less attention to recent articles. I feel that the protagonists in recent articles tend to be more orthodox and heroic, and some are better than Luo Jing and Rex. I personally thought that this might be because the sweet life softened my writing style, ha~, no matter what, best wishes!

I'm here again, I'm still not satisfied

What kind of ending is this? ! Stay up late and see now... Doing this to me? ! Really? ?

Alas, there are so few comments. It is such a good article. When will the author write a new article? . . . Waiting impatiently

It would be even more handsome if the last sentence was said to Xiao Shou

This is the comment in the bar, I moved it here. >>>>>>>>>>>>Poor little An Ning, Rex doesn't deserve An Ning at all. Although the two of them can fight side by side, for a person like me who has an emotional mysophobia, An Ning is too wronged. He gave all his heart and soul to Rex, but Rex not only became entangled with Merlin physically, but also became more emotionally entangled. An Ning has been walking all the way alone, with no one thinking about him (except for the An Ning brothers who died, Lin En was protected by An Ning all the way without doing anything), so many grievances, so many thorns, only one person, even if the tears fall, they have to be swallowed back in the stomach, no one completely loves him, protects him, and cherishes him. In the end, Rex was forced to make the decision by An Ning, otherwise An Ning would have chosen Yang. In fact, I think it is better to choose Yang. At least this Yang should really love An Ning, be willing to let An Ning have a chest where she can put down her burdens, and also truly care for An Ning. Anyway, I look down on Rex. >>>>>>>>The above are comments from friends. I have the opposite opinion with him. Although I feel sorry for An Ning, it is his strength that makes him more attractive. Personally, I think Rex has already fallen in love with An Ning, but that cannon fodder was captured by An Ning's war-god appearance because of that war (I'm just making up my mind = =). Although Rex is very charming, he is a little timid about relationships, so he is a carrot and a trap. It just so happens that An Ning is strong, strong and able to understand his true feelings, so in the end the two of them can be together. By the way, can An Ning counterattack? When can you write a side story? Looking forward = = (Would I say that I have been looking forward to An Ning's counterattack after seeing it later!) I bought this section specifically, and I can't believe it hasn't been released yet! ! ! ! ! !

The writing is quite good, it is the best mecha story I have seen so far, but overall I feel that it is not as well written as "The Man Returns at Night in the City". After thinking about the reason, I think it is probably because there are a few places that were not handled well. First of all, the article has been climaxing, and the climax has been too long and it has become weak. In fact, there should be relaxed love in the middle, but it is a pity that the relationship between An Ning and Rex has no clear result until the end of the article. Instead, it keeps writing about the hopelessness and depression of An Ning's unrequited love. Secondly, I think the highlight of the article is to solve the mystery - why the An family was destroyed in one breath, and why General Lin never returned. With An Ning's perspective, we unveiled the truth layer by layer. Second, in the process of searching, An Ning experienced one dangerous situation after another. A story that is a little suspenseful and a little thrilling is the most fascinating. Obviously there is no way to solve the puzzle all the way through this article. The secret is already known to the readers halfway through the article, so half of the advantage of this article is lost. It even feels a bit like playing a game with a guide, which is a bit dry. In fact, at this time, you can increase the proportion of love while taking risks and establish a new climax point. Another problem is that the ending is more like a story about two people saving the world single-handedly. In fact, I always feel that the last scene should be written on a grander scale, especially for those therapists like Mr. Volo. Personally, I feel that it is more interesting to write about them summoning up the courage to explode seeds in a big crisis than to depict their timidity and cowardice, instead of just Mr. Volo fighting alone. I still remember the death squad battle that An Ning participated in at that time. There was the doubt and anger after being deceived, the cornered beast still fighting after the desperate situation, the unity and passion generated by the battle, the pain of the death of his comrades, and the entrustment of Xiao Linzi (is that his name? I can't remember it actually). In comparison, the battle at the end is equally exciting, but emotionally pale. At least in this battle, we can see that human beings are not only capable of scheming and vying for power among factions, but also dare to fight, sacrifice and sacrifice. The spiritual comfort that this spirit can bring has a more profound meaning than the technology of settling down. Finally, I am not very satisfied with the ending. I think it is best to end with Merlin seeing An Ning crying with Rex in his arms. I should add a description of the environment, the first ray of dawn in the east or the breeze after the rain stops, which means that new hope has arisen. Then in the next chapter, I will write about the follow-up in the form of memorabilia, for example, the settlement of the family is rehabilitated, the battle is completely won, the spiritual man falls from the altar, An Ning gets married, etc. It's very flavorful. Zhusha has been questioning his article, but this article is really great. I actually really hope that after Zhusha can settle for a while, he is willing to do a revision to make the story fuller and live up to such a good story.

Jiesu... The ending... Ouch! So fast! ! TAT... I can't bear to let it go... Merlin's behavior... He must have noticed the feelings between Xiao Lei and Xiao An... Presumably he and Caesar also made unexpected progress... Go and watch the super long episode...

Uh, there seems to be a bug here? An Ning should have seen Lei's naked body on the spaceship at the beginning -_, -The time Lei was stripped naked by the prisoners