This is the story of a wealthy man who transmigrates to the Tang Dynasty.
Fang Yanhui knew about transmigration, but had never wanted to transmigrate himself. He knew that someone who couldn't succeed in one place wouldn't succeed anywhere, and a world built on fantasies was only ever a fantasy...
But he transmigrated anyway!
Not only that, he had to give up his finance degree and take up writing classical poetry!
That was already miserable enough, but things got even worse!
He discovered that he could no longer be called a man!
This really was a world that screwed you over!
So, in this infuriating world, he gradually made his way to the center of power, only to turn toward a life in the countryside just as he finally got a taste of it.
Li Bai and Wang Wei once drank with him. Who remains in his world now?
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Seeing the protagonist working so hard, I was worried for him. I think the author might as well have him dress up as Pei Di, Cui Xingzong or something, and mess with Wang Wei. However, this article is very detailed and contains a lot of research.
A little rushed, with a lot of white space, but the flaws don't hide the good points, and the aftertaste is endless.
The beginning was very attractive, but it ended poorly.
I have been in a literary drought recently, and I suddenly found this article from the pile of old papers. The characterization is really good, but it's just too lame. What a pity...
It ended all at once, a bit hasty and anticlimactic. The content is full of food and very rich and exciting. The outlines of emotions are understated but leave a deep feeling that is endearing. The narrative content of the story mostly focuses on the protagonist's inner thoughts and dialogues. It makes people fully feel that the protagonist is the center of gravity, I like it very much. After all, some authors often paint the supporting characters with too heavy and rich colors. It makes it impossible to distinguish the priorities of the protagonist and the supporting characters, and passers-by A, B, B, and D often pull the story apart. So much so that the work is skewed! The author's brushstrokes are delicate and exquisite, not only surrounding the theme appropriately, It also allows the supporting role to fully play its role>> set off the protagonist and rationalize the direction of the story The content of the work is very plain and solid, and the narrative is smooth and straightforward. Although there are no fancy words or exaggerated adjectives However, the author ably and concisely highlighted the key points and drew outlines to make the content clear and concise. Very straightforward and simple, what is surprising is that, Although the work is very plain and straightforward, it does not give people a feeling of poverty or boring. But there is a very pure connotation pulling my mood. Slowly guide readers into the article structure outlined by the author And it directly touches the readers' senses and emotions. The characters in the story are very clear and understandable at a glance Although it's a pity that the ending is really confusing But I still like the direction of the story created by the author. The author's descriptions of mental situations are so sophisticated and profound that people are fascinated by them. This technique inadvertently synchronizes the mood of the reader and the characters in the article. It's very powerful and I admire it, But I still hope there will be a follow-up or something, After all, this article is really cut off. Too hasty! It's like the stream of Yiwan River suddenly became like a kite with its string broken, making people sigh with regret! Looking forward to the author's future works, Thank you for sharing : )
It feels good, but is it over or is it a trap?
In fact, Chen Xi's writing style is quite good, but the protagonist's personality is too unpleasant, dark and stingy, similar to Jia Huan, not to mention that all the talented people in the prosperous Tang Dynasty were written in such a way that they lacked any grace and grace, and the character creation was biased.
I don't know if it's my misunderstanding. I think this relationship is too slow to warm up, right? It made me lose my enthusiasm...
Is it a trap? . . . . QAQ
The brilliance of this article lies in the portrayal of the character's heart. I think common sense errors are not a big problem, and a slight modification is enough. But why did Mao stop the writing when it was about to reach its climax? I hope I can make up the second half in the future... Wrong, I should have said that please continue this beginning...