When a clear wave sweeps over you, the familiar scenery is gone, and everything has changed.
The older sister becomes a princess consort and is unwillingly drawn into palace intrigue, while her younger brother drifts through the martial world. When they meet again, he fails to recognize the sister whose appearance has changed. Reunited at last, they must face the people they each love and navigate a tangle of conflicts. What path should they take?
The highest forgets love, the lowest cannot escape it. Those who know love best are people like us.
They were once husband and wife, bound together through thick and thin, yet they could not hold on to the simple, steady warmth of an ordinary life. One heartbreak after another wore away the boundless love they had at the start. They were once lovers who understood each other completely, yet they could not withstand the merciless winds of the mortal world. After repeatedly passing each other by, can they still grow old together and stay by each other's side for a hundred years?
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A love story between a peach-blossom beauty and a cold-faced man.
Old dreams of the past are hard to leave behind, but cause and effect are easy to understand. To learn what happens next, read the next volume.
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In fact, Chenchen writes the man in the first person like a woman. If you don't get it right, you can use the third person.
After reading this, leave a paw
Embarrassing! I always misunderstood that the person Yang Fengjun loved was Fu Jin, but I didn't expect that the person she admired was actually a greedy wolf who never appeared in the main text.
After all, Yang Fengjun is just a political pawn and a poor person. But I still won't forgive her for bullying Lin Qian.
Also, I hate Xue Yuzhi! You have let down the good intentions of Lin Qian and your mother.
Collect it first, this extra chapter is a bit long, please read it carefully.
It shouldn't be that my leg is really broken, right? This leg is really bad. How will I live in the future?
What? Are Lin Qian's legs really useless? Is there no chance of improvement at all? Could the author be too cruel to Lin Qian?
Today's status is very different. His ambition... Alas! Stop talking!
Pooh! If you really deceive people too much, let's see what will happen to you!
I'm sorry that I've been a little restless these past two days.
"Nai He Yuan Qian" is very literary and artistic, so the number of words and so on is also very large.
The typography and other typos are also very good, there is nothing to catch on the details.
But I got a little tired of looking at it.
Maybe it's my personal problem, but you can see it's really bland.
Her arrogance was not prominent at first, maybe because she was not an arrogant person.
Violent personality? I really can't tell.
["I'm fine." Although he held on, his voice still sounded very weak, "What happened? Why am I so groggy and can't remember anything?"]
Even though she woke up, she had such a personality after all, so it was impossible for her to say such things, right? You should always say "Who are you? Why am I here?" And so on... Anyway, a woman who is so domineering that her boyfriend wants to leave her will not be so thoughtful.
Pupu77 said that when she broke up with Chen Hao (the name is correct, right), she should have gone over and slapped him in the face and said, "You can still live well even if I leave you." In fact, this is what truly distinguishes one's character.
So you see that she is going to get married as soon as she passes. Even if she accepts this fact in her heart, her personality is still coquettish and domineering, and it is unlikely that she will be so submissive to Grandma Xue. So it's better to have a more prominent personality, so that her gradual changes can be highlighted.
[Lin Qian smiled and wiped away the tears on her face, reached out and hooked Xue Yuzhi's neck, opened her eyes and raised her body to press a kiss on Xue Yuzhi's face, and made a promise to him, "Your Majesty, in the future, as long as you treat me wholeheartedly, I will never leave your side."]
Puff puff puff, where was Lin Qian's aggressiveness, where was her arrogance, where was she? ? She is very gentle and proactive, what a good wife for a man! ! !
If you write the first and second chapters so excitingly and refreshingly, and leave some suspense, it will be more attractive.
In fact, I think the author's words are superfluous, such as psychological activities and so on.
Also, don't write the words "Can Lin Shen meet his sister Lin Qian through this? What kind of arrangements are there somewhere?" ╮(╯▽╰)╭You are not telling a story, it will really interrupt the reader's interest and rhythm in reading the article. Anyway, when I saw it, I had the feeling of eating a delicious fish well, but suddenly the fish bone got stuck in the throat and I couldn't swallow it.
Speaking of which, this article also has annotations, and I silently lamented how powerful it is.
Then I felt that the characters were generally weak. After watching Xue Yuzhi for a long time, I vaguely grasped his character.
Later, I felt that since the style of writing was not good enough, there would be no suspense at all. Let's just let it go as usual. In fact, it's quite good...
There is no passion, no heroine saying: "Why should I marry you? I haven't seen this ancient time properly!"
There is no male protagonist who says: "Follow me, you don't have to worry about anything."
But after watching it for a long time, you will find it interesting. There is a different flavor in the dull plot~
Well, the main thing is that the writing is very good! ! !
I admire and encourage Chenchen here. This article is OK. Although the collection is a little small, as long as you work hard and become a great god... A few thousand is not a problem╮(╯▽╰)╭
It's just that the previous reading made me impatient [I muttered quietly
Then I started to be impetuous and couldn't write anything. I asked 77 to read it and said that your copywriting was too literary. Well... Indeed.
Work hard to become a great god! ! ! You have the strength! ! !
What's the secret? Scratching my head and scratching my head makes me feel uncomfortable. In addition, she has become a concubine. Let's go quickly. There are countless beautiful men waiting for the heroine outside. Don't stay here. Overthinking will kill you.
The so-called "Specially ennobled Mrs. Fengxiao, waiting for the concubine system." Does it mean that Lin Qian and Yuozhi no longer have a relationship as husband and wife? Or is it just a status downgrade from a principal concubine to a side concubine?
In fact, Chenchen writes the man in the first person like a woman. If you don't get it right, you can use the third person.
After reading this, leave a paw
Embarrassing! I always misunderstood that the person Yang Fengjun loved was Fu Jin, but I didn't expect that the person she admired was actually a greedy wolf who never appeared in the main text. After all, Yang Fengjun is just a political pawn and a poor person. But I still won't forgive her for bullying Lin Qian. Also, I hate Xue Yuzhi! You have let down the good intentions of Lin Qian and your mother.
Collect it first, this extra chapter is a bit long, please read it carefully.
It shouldn't be that my leg is really broken, right? This leg is really bad. How will I live in the future?
What? Are Lin Qian's legs really useless? Is there no chance of improvement at all? Could the author be too cruel to Lin Qian? Today's status is very different. His ambition... Alas! Stop talking!
Pooh! If you really deceive people too much, let's see what will happen to you!
I'm sorry that I've been a little restless these past two days. "Nai He Yuan Qian" is very literary and artistic, so the number of words and so on is also very large. The typography and other typos are also very good, there is nothing to catch on the details. But I got a little tired of looking at it. Maybe it's my personal problem, but you can see it's really bland. Her arrogance was not prominent at first, maybe because she was not an arrogant person. Violent personality? I really can't tell. ["I'm fine." Although he held on, his voice still sounded very weak, "What happened? Why am I so groggy and can't remember anything?"] Even though she woke up, she had such a personality after all, so it was impossible for her to say such things, right? You should always say "Who are you? Why am I here?" And so on... Anyway, a woman who is so domineering that her boyfriend wants to leave her will not be so thoughtful. Pupu77 said that when she broke up with Chen Hao (the name is correct, right), she should have gone over and slapped him in the face and said, "You can still live well even if I leave you." In fact, this is what truly distinguishes one's character. So you see that she is going to get married as soon as she passes. Even if she accepts this fact in her heart, her personality is still coquettish and domineering, and it is unlikely that she will be so submissive to Grandma Xue. So it's better to have a more prominent personality, so that her gradual changes can be highlighted. [Lin Qian smiled and wiped away the tears on her face, reached out and hooked Xue Yuzhi's neck, opened her eyes and raised her body to press a kiss on Xue Yuzhi's face, and made a promise to him, "Your Majesty, in the future, as long as you treat me wholeheartedly, I will never leave your side."] Puff puff puff, where was Lin Qian's aggressiveness, where was her arrogance, where was she? ? She is very gentle and proactive, what a good wife for a man! ! ! If you write the first and second chapters so excitingly and refreshingly, and leave some suspense, it will be more attractive. In fact, I think the author's words are superfluous, such as psychological activities and so on. Also, don't write the words "Can Lin Shen meet his sister Lin Qian through this? What kind of arrangements are there somewhere?" ╮(╯▽╰)╭You are not telling a story, it will really interrupt the reader's interest and rhythm in reading the article. Anyway, when I saw it, I had the feeling of eating a delicious fish well, but suddenly the fish bone got stuck in the throat and I couldn't swallow it. Speaking of which, this article also has annotations, and I silently lamented how powerful it is. Then I felt that the characters were generally weak. After watching Xue Yuzhi for a long time, I vaguely grasped his character. Later, I felt that since the style of writing was not good enough, there would be no suspense at all. Let's just let it go as usual. In fact, it's quite good... There is no passion, no heroine saying: "Why should I marry you? I haven't seen this ancient time properly!" There is no male protagonist who says: "Follow me, you don't have to worry about anything." But after watching it for a long time, you will find it interesting. There is a different flavor in the dull plot~ Well, the main thing is that the writing is very good! ! ! I admire and encourage Chenchen here. This article is OK. Although the collection is a little small, as long as you work hard and become a great god... A few thousand is not a problem╮(╯▽╰)╭ It's just that the previous reading made me impatient [I muttered quietly Then I started to be impetuous and couldn't write anything. I asked 77 to read it and said that your copywriting was too literary. Well... Indeed. Work hard to become a great god! ! ! You have the strength! ! !
What's the secret? Scratching my head and scratching my head makes me feel uncomfortable. In addition, she has become a concubine. Let's go quickly. There are countless beautiful men waiting for the heroine outside. Don't stay here. Overthinking will kill you.
The so-called "Specially ennobled Mrs. Fengxiao, waiting for the concubine system." Does it mean that Lin Qian and Yuozhi no longer have a relationship as husband and wife? Or is it just a status downgrade from a principal concubine to a side concubine?