
Undressing in the Martial World
江湖乱脱衣
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 250k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 6y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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Well, luckily it's a side story haha~ It's still interesting to read this article after two years~\(≧▽≦)/~
I. . . I am Qiao GG. Why do I feel that there is an inexplicable harmonious aura between Bai Xiaosheng and Qiao GG. . . . Oh, I'm evil
I watched this extra episode about real lactic acid Oroz
I really hate hypocritical scum! Shi Li, you are so handsome, come on!
Mo Chenfeng? The son of the old leader? That innocent young lady from back then? Alas, Shi Li is finally back, woo woo, it's so scary, isn't it?
Well? I feel a bit unfinished! Was it Shili who bumped into him? It is very possible to separate from the teacher... Or to be obedient and marry Qiao Zixun? The ending made my heart itch!
The author's progress on this article is so slow, has he opened a new pit? I really don't dare to read it. The author's comment on the homepage that it is updated daily or every other day is too nonsense. To be honest, this article has been delayed for so long. It has lost the energy and freshness of reading it at the beginning. I just feel tired. It is really disappointing. So I have decided never to read this article again! I hope the author will take this as a warning!
This guy actually doesn't know how to write long reviews... He hasn't written for a long time, and various sentences are incoherent, his reading is not smooth, and his words are not expressive - (it seems that he was the same when he wrote articles before...) So, whatever, he just wants to write a long review anyway... I keep reading the articles on the list, and my mouse is always hovering on the quarterly list, and the half-year list (why is it more important to write long reviews than to write articles yourself... - -) If the article written by myself is not on the frequency division, this guy has actually never heard of what the frequency division is... (Actually, what is there to show off about the frequency division meter - that click...) However, I read this article in the latest update, well, I was actually attracted by the title - - As a person who stays up late at night to write long reviews... I mean, I have also written articles before, but because of the difficulties in writing articles, I found that I am more suitable for reading articles... I understand all the problems in writing articles (perhaps I am self-righteous = =) I've heard of "chaotic stripping" before. From the title, I thought it was the kind of XXOO winning style (that's why I clicked on it - -), but after reading the whole article, I felt it was still very attractive (it's rare to write seriously, why can't I even type a word when I'm serious - -) From the beginning, when Qiao Zixun broke off the engagement and Qin Xiangxiang fought for it, it felt like a Jinjiang literary routine, but I'm still looking forward to the next part (because the cheesy ones are for the public - -The public just likes it, but it's still unavoidable), and automatically joined the wrong team of male protagonists, thinking that Qiao Zixun was the male protagonist, but later he liked the current male protagonist even more. In fact, I think one of the most difficult parts of writing an article is to distinguish between men and women in the article. Because the author is a girl after all, it is impossible to understand the thoughts of boys, so it is always difficult to grasp what the male protagonist says or what is going on in his heart when writing. It is even harder to write handsomely. I wish I could have the male protagonist raise his orchid fingers and say something according to my own wishes. What's "annoying~~~", or let the male protagonist and the male second-hand dealer buy clothes or something, or maybe the second male protagonist and the male protagonist will not talk about football, basketball, or girls, but talk about girls' private conversations, and then all kinds of shyness... In short, what I mean is that writing about girls is easy, but it is really difficult to write about the male protagonist like a male protagonist. After all, we don't like playing basketball or football. Just like on the Internet, the girls written by male authors are all awkward and like stallions. In fact, I think the best writer for men to write about women is Jin Yong, and the best writer for girls to write about boys is Rowling - - However, the male protagonist written by the author seems to have always been very similar to the male protagonist. Although it is not the kind of male protagonist written by boys, if boys read it, maybe they can find bugs. It is really difficult to grasp the psychology of gender, but at least it feels like a male protagonist. (I haven't written or typed for a long time. Please... Why should I write a long review? - -) The male protagonist is so amazing as soon as he appears. I often read the dialogue between the male protagonist and the female protagonist over and over. There are few articles that I read over and over again. Except for Harry, it is my own article. I found typos and so on. But the dialogue between the male protagonist and the female protagonist in this article is really interesting. Although it is always the same, but as their relationship deepens and the same words are spoken, it feels better. Also, it's easy for Mary Sue to write her own novels, because after all, from her own perspective, she feels that everything she does is right. When writing about the male protagonist, sometimes in order to show the coolness and aloofness of the male protagonist, so in general, the male protagonist does not take the initiative in the dialogue, and the female protagonist always takes the initiative. That feels like... However, in this article, the male protagonist takes the initiative in almost all the dialogues. He takes the initiative to talk to Qin Xiangxiang, takes the initiative to tease, and takes the initiative to confess. Qin Xiangxiang is a little less proactive. This makes the male protagonist's character more three-dimensional, but at the same time, it also depicts the cold and aloofness of the male protagonist. Even if there are some minor flaws sometimes, I think the overall expression is very clear. It not only describes the character of the male protagonist, but also makes the dialogue interesting. From then on, I started to like the male protagonist more. Qiao Zixun is less fun in comparison. Well, the Jianghu Manual is also very funny. I seem to have seen it on the Internet before. It has a different feeling when it is written in the article. Moreover, since Qin Xiangxiang bought the book, she always writes the contents of the manual at the top of the title, just like an open book. It has a very camera-like feel. I read this article more seriously. I usually don't read every sentence carefully. Of course, I mainly read the dialogue between the male and female protagonists. I found that I have to read every sentence of this article carefully. I can't jump into long paragraphs like I used to do. Because if you read it sentence by sentence, it feels more like watching TV. It seems that every action is very specific. Do you do it at home? - It was really funny when the male protagonist disguised himself as a woman, and the part where Qin Xiangxiang helped the male protagonist was also very interesting. In short, it is an article in which the male protagonist is very similar to the male protagonist, the plot is very compact, the female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist are also very reasonable, and the male protagonist is also a competent male protagonist. I know that writing an article is not easy... All in all very good... Is this a long review? - - There should be long reviews that describe it better - - Good writing has no shortage of long reviews...
Damn, you haven't updated for a long time! I try to refresh it twice a day, but it doesn't work. It's so sad! 5555, Come on, come out soon! ! ! !
Xiangxiang is so unlucky, really!