[Harem Fanfiction] The Tale of Yixiu

I agree with many of the comments downstairs. It's so easy. I forgive them too quickly. Everyone has become wise. What did you, Zhu Yixiu, do when you lost your child? Why are you asking Queen Lin to be a saint now? And Yu Feng is simply worse than his father. At least her father has been really kind to Zhu Rouze for many years. What about him? If you really liked Queen Lin, you wouldn't treat her like this. The same goes for Concubine Yin. It doesn't matter if you say you like her, but she can be disrespectful to the Queen if you say you don't like her. Particularly contradictory

The early pk was good, but the latter was disappointing. Chun Yuan was indeed sorry for Yi Xiu, so no amount of revenge would be too much. But in the previous life, the relationship between Zhen Huan and Yi Xiu was mostly because Yi Xiu committed unjust acts and was bound to die. In this life, why did he treat Zhen Huan like this and take revenge like this without reflecting on himself? Such an arrangement is really vicious and despicable. Head down instantly.

This article is the best Zhen Huan fanfic I have ever read, bar none, but the second chapter is really a failure. First of all, does Yu Feng really love Concubine Jing? Even if not, it can be seen that he likes Concubine Jing, at least he has liked her. But even in the original work, Xuan Ling felt guilty towards Concubine Hua in the end, but here I can only see Yu Feng's cold blood. Secondly, the author may want to show that the emperor and the empress are a couple, but the conflict has not been resolved well. Why did Yu Feng leave the harem with nothing to do? If you want to suppress Taishi Yin's party, you can just prevent Concubine Jing from giving birth. At any time, heirs are the most important thing. If Lin Ruji really can't give birth to a child, will he have no heirs? And I didn't see that he had such deep feelings and guilt for Lin Ruji, not to mention what the author wrote: It's not that he didn't like Lin, and it's not that he didn't regret that they lost their child in that quarrel. But after that, her cold and repulsive attitude made him suppress his guilt, and the two of them gradually drifted apart. Nima Yufeng was reluctant to go on the first and fifteenth day of the lunar month. Nima left herself childless for a woman who was drifting away. Isn't this too fantasy? The Queen Mother actually knew and agreed? Xuan Ling's mother, Zhu Chengbi, that's how a normal queen mother should react, okay? She loves her niece, but she loves the emperor and his grandson even more. Zhu Chengbi tolerates Zhu Rouze, Yi Xiu and the Zhu family. Then why does Yi Xiu tolerate his son not having children for Lin Ruji? Lin Ruji's golden finger is simply better than Zhen Huan's. Third, I think Lin Ruji is straightforward, serious, careful, intelligent, and has the majesty of a queen. This is her original appearance and what a queen should be. What Yu Feng fell in love with again was Lin Ruji who listened to Yi Xiu's words and suppressed his temper. Forget it, but that bastard sentence was like a lightning strike from the sky. I really don't think this is a conversation that can happen between a real queen and a real emperor. This is a typical young couple in the market. No matter how suitable the empress is, they can't be so close. Lin Ruji's tutor will not allow her to say that. Zhen Huan does not dare to speak like this to Xuan Ling. It's better to change this episode again.

He can't be like his father who relies on women to stabilize the court, right?

This extra is very poorly written. The prince is quite sensible in the main story, but why does he become so stupid in the extras? He is almost like Xuan Ling in Zhen Huan. The queen actually ignored the queen because he had no child, and the queen actually tolerated it. Doesn't it lower the IQ of the people in the palace too much? This extra episode lowers the quality of the entire text

The writing of this extra chapter is so terrible... The IQ of all the members has dropped, and no one is normal. The queen is so generous. After losing one of her children, she can reconcile with the emperor and make the whole family happy. For a woman or mother, I don't believe that after losing her child, she doesn't have any knots in her heart that she doesn't want to take revenge or resent the emperor... This is a normal woman. The queen's previous descriptions of character and character are all fake, like a layer of gold-plated wrapping on the outside. It looks good but the paint will peel off after a long time. I just feel that I hate it and feel sorry for it's misfortune.

I thought the reason for the lack of children was because Concubine Jing murdered the emperor's heir. The emperor allowed Concubine Jing to give birth to his concubine's eldest son, which meant that he didn't particularly care about the eldest son. Why didn't he let the concubine give birth after the queen had a miscarriage? If she was interested in her eldest son, why did she dote on Concubine Jing when she was the prince? If the eldest prince hadn't died, the queen would have been the second son even if she had given birth. I always feel that the death of the eldest prince is a bit of a conspiracy theory. Of course, the author's writing is still very good. I have read several Yixiu articles, but there are too few that are complete.

I really want to see the warm little daily life of the emperor and empress

Why bury a good woman like this? In Jade Mat Autumn, Concubine Mao Yin Yuejing really wanted to be the queen, but when she realized that Yu Han really liked Concubine Jin Xie Run, she felt that she couldn't fight and gave up. On the contrary, it was another concubine, Jing Concubine, who poisoned and assassinated Xie Run.

Read the whole article in two words: perfect